boom2ratz wrote:

Hello! Since I left, I would appreciate it if you removed me from “Advertisers” on the front page and also from the members in the website. Thanks.

The wind brushed against hre face as the wind brush against her. The gentle birds sung a sing that echoed down into the depths of her ears. As the sun rose, she felt like that she needed to get to school. She was rejected by her crush the day prior, and had stayn up all night. As she gotten in her car, she wonderd whether or not that she did so need to go to shcool. Ater everything, she felt depressed. The moonlight faded away and before she knew it, she was at school. As the bell ringed, she wondered what the future entailed.

JC20092009 wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Hello! Since I left, I would appreciate it if you removed me from “Advertisers” on the front page and also from the members in the website. Thanks.

Ok!

MClovers wrote:

Username: future-author
Service for your story: Editing
The whole thing? yes please
Length in words: 104
Story link:

The wind brushed against hre face as the wind brush against her. The gentle birds sung a sing that echoed down into the depths of her ears. As the sun rose, she felt like that she needed to get to school. She was rejected by her crush the day prior, and had stayn up all night. As she gotten in her car, she wonderd whether or not that she did so need to go to shcool. Ater everything, she felt depressed. The moonlight faded away and before she knew it, she was at school. As the bell ringed, she wondered what the future entailed.

How should we contact you: on the diamond union

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The wind brushed against her face, soft, like the clouds in the sky that morning. The gentle birds sung a sing that echoed down into the depths of her ears. As the sun rose, she felt like that she needed to get to school, yet she didn’t want to. She was rejected by her crush the day prior, and had stay up all night. As she got in her car, she wondered whether she should go to school. After everything, she felt depressed. The moonlight faded away and before she knew it, she was at school. As the bell ringed, she wondered what the future entailed.

qrcool wrote:

MClovers wrote:

Username: future-author
Service for your story: Editing
The whole thing? yes please
Length in words: 104
Story link:

The wind brushed against hre face as the wind brush against her. The gentle birds sung a sing that echoed down into the depths of her ears. As the sun rose, she felt like that she needed to get to school. She was rejected by her crush the day prior, and had stayn up all night. As she gotten in her car, she wonderd whether or not that she did so need to go to shcool. Ater everything, she felt depressed. The moonlight faded away and before she knew it, she was at school. As the bell ringed, she wondered what the future entailed.

How should we contact you: on the diamond union

(placeholder order)

Taken! I need to do some things right now, I'll edit when I'm ready.

Here's the edited version:

The wind brushed against her face, soft, like the clouds in the sky that morning. The gentle birds sung a sing that echoed down into the depths of her ears. As the sun rose, she felt like that she needed to get to school, yet she didn’t want to. She was rejected by her crush the day prior, and had stay up all night. As she got in her car, she wondered whether she should go to school. After everything, she felt depressed. The moonlight faded away and before she knew it, she was at school. As the bell ringed, she wondered what the future entailed.

I did some grammar and spelling checks, then fixed it up to be more descriptive. If it's too long, you can tell me.

MClovers wrote:

qrcool wrote:

MClovers wrote:

Username: future-author
Service for your story: Editing
The whole thing? yes please
Length in words: 104
Story link:

The wind brushed against hre face as the wind brush against her. The gentle birds sung a sing that echoed down into the depths of her ears. As the sun rose, she felt like that she needed to get to school. She was rejected by her crush the day prior, and had stayn up all night. As she gotten in her car, she wonderd whether or not that she did so need to go to shcool. Ater everything, she felt depressed. The moonlight faded away and before she knew it, she was at school. As the bell ringed, she wondered what the future entailed.

How should we contact you: on the diamond union

(placeholder order)

Taken! I need to do some things right now, I'll edit when I'm ready.

Here's the edited version:

The wind brushed against her face, soft, like the clouds in the sky that morning. The gentle birds sung a sing that echoed down into the depths of her ears. As the sun rose, she felt like that she needed to get to school, yet she didn’t want to. She was rejected by her crush the day prior, and had stay up all night. As she got in her car, she wondered whether she should go to school. After everything, she felt depressed. The moonlight faded away and before she knew it, she was at school. As the bell ringed, she wondered what the future entailed.

I did some grammar and spelling checks, then fixed it up to be more descriptive. If it's too long, you can tell me.

Nice! That was a placeholder order. It was ordered by your owner at the Diamond Union! That's the first placeholder order! It wasn't a real order but an order to practise orders if that makes any sense.

Who claimed your order: @qrcool
Overall rating: (from 1-10) 7
Punctuality: (from 1-10) 10
Quality: (from 1-10) 7
Explanation: I did see some errors I inserted in there that weren't fixed which I have bolded

Block_Point_Studios wrote:

Is your website yours or did you use a program like Google Sites?

qrcool wrote:

Hey there! I'm the secretary of the Scratch Shop, and I'm here to check if this is still active. Please quote this post and tell me by the end of the month.

MClovers wrote:

Bump, make sure to vote in the new act in the Diamond Union!

qrcool wrote:

I'm sorry, but I'll have to leave.