So my story begins when the detective has ordered something and the delivery comes. When the delivery man arrives, a killer plant eats the man leaving his head. So we can click item to investigate it. Check it out in the link:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/418771671
Please give some suggestions about what should be next in the story and improve it.

This fits better here

-Snipet- wrote:

This fits better here

I actually want to collaborate with others for this project.

I have created a studio for the collab: https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/27450620/

That's a very clever idea & very creative so far

I am still currently struggling along with my project, hopefully in a few days I will be able to share it with you and get your opinion.

You're very good at this.

Regards - Guide dog

guidedog wrote:

That's a very clever idea & very creative so far

I am still currently struggling along with my project, hopefully in a few days I will be able to share it with you and get your opinion.

You're very good at this.

Regards - Guide dog

Ok thanks.
Just accept the invitation as you can upload the project and I can remember who has joined till yet.

For your interactive game, why not have an animal like a dog or cat that accidentally helps with the investigating? Example: maybe it has something stuck on it's coat? Or maybe it leads our main character to an area with clues?


https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/422633293

guidedog wrote:

For your interactive game, why not have an animal like a dog or cat that accidentally helps with the investigating? Example: maybe it has something stuck on it's coat? Or maybe it leads our main character to an area with clues?


https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/422633293

Nice idea, what should the dog or cat have stuck on its coat?

And why did you added the dirt monsters project in the studio. The studio is for the part of the detective game project.

I have a bug, that when I try to add a investigatable it does not work, the message for going to the next place even shows when this is false

 <(Investigated things)  =  (Total inventigatables)> 

Does anyone has a fix for this?

mysterious-neutron wrote:

I have a bug, that when I try to add a investigatable it does not work, the message for going to the next place even shows when this is false

 <(Investigated things)  =  (Total inventigatables)> 

Does anyone has a fix for this?

It's fixed.

I have completed making the next investigatable, which is the dog.
And next I have planned that the player will go to the agency to scan the document.
Please tell if you want to change something.

If you want to check the document which will be scanned show the sprite named extracted document.

aarizkamran wrote:

let me make the dog look better

And do not forget to share the remix in the studio.

aarizkamran wrote:

that is only one song

I just meant to choose a part of it, as the file is very big

aarizkamran wrote:

ok the third part then

Ok

Can someone recommend a sound as I just realized that I was unable to cut the file.

mysterious neutron can you collab with me

ZachstudiosYt wrote:

mysterious neutron can you collab with me

Ok, you are invited

Maybe not add the blood… It doesn't look too violent, but it might be scary for younger viewers.

i know a song, check remix-a and wait until the killer plant scene