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link to shop- https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/430984/

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guineapiggirl001

Trainees and Trainers

Trainers:
Foxglove11
guineapiggirl001

Current Trainees:
BosenChang

Next Trainees:

Last edited by guineapiggirl001 (Aug. 17, 2020 18:20:25)

LankyBox01

So what do we do here?

guineapiggirl001

Day 1 of Training
Trainees: LankBox01
When you order a test order, make the order simple. Say we are using this form:

Username:
What you would like done:
Description:

This would be a good way to fill it out:

Username: guineapiggirl001
What you would like done: A banner
Description: Says guineapiggirl001 in blue with pastel orange background.

Today's task is to fill out this order form with something you think would be good for a review.

guineapiggirl001

LankyBox01 wrote:
So what do we do here?

See post above /|\

LankyBox01

Username: LankyBox01
What you would like done: I just started started a new shop, can someone review it?
Description: I want someone to review my brand new shop since we got a few customers and it would be nice for someone to review us.

guineapiggirl001

LankyBox01 wrote:
Username: LankyBox01
What you would like done: I just started started a new shop, can someone review it?
Description: I want someone to review my brand new shop since we got a few customers and it would be nice for someone to review us.

That's great! Well done! Tomorrow we will focus on filling out the review form.

LankyBox01

Hey, i have an announcement: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/417557884/
So sorry if i miss a few days.

guineapiggirl001

LankyBox01 wrote:
Hey, i have an announcement: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/417557884/
So sorry if i miss a few days.

That's fine!

guineapiggirl001

Day 2 of Training
Trainees: LankBox01
Sorry that we didn't do it yesterday, both Foxglove11 and I were busy.

Today we will be focusing on writing the review. Constructive criticism is key. Point out things that could improve in a helpful, polite way and name things that you like. Here is the review form we use at Mountain Reviews:

Title and Banner: (Here you write about the title and banner(s))
Main Pages: (Here you write about the first pages (home, forms ect.))
Speed: (Here you say about the time it took to complete the order)
Quality: (The quality of your completed order)
Overall: (A sum up of everything)

Don't forget to put a score out of ten after each one.
Let's say someone took my order example, see here, and came back, less than a day later, with this:

https://u.cubeupload.com/guineapiggirl001/Trainingorder.jpg

Using our review form, how would you review it?

LankyBox01

Title and Banner: It is very nice, you chose a good color scheme, but you could've used a different font, a picture for the background, and other nice things to fancy up your banner. (4/5)
Main Pages: It is a very nice layout, good arranging, there's really nothing to say about it. (5/5)
Speed: It took a few hours, which is really, really impressive. But.. i think you could do better than that, can you? (3/5)
Quality: As i said, you could've used a different font, a picture for the background, and other nice things to fancy up your banner (3/5)
Overall: There are a lot of things you need to improve, like, it is a little bit blurred! I recommend you using Canva to make your banners, or get better at what you're using (3.5/5)

My constructive criticism.

Last edited by LankyBox01 (Aug. 15, 2020 11:41:28)

guineapiggirl001

LankyBox01 wrote:
Title and Banner: It is very nice, you chose a good color scheme, but you could've used a different font, a picture for the background, and other nice things to fancy up your banner. (4/5)
Main Pages: It is a very nice layout, good arranging, there's really nothing to say about it. (5/5)
Speed: It took a few hours, which is really, really impressive. But.. i think you could do better than that, can you? (3/5)
Quality: As i said, you could've used a different font, a picture for the background, and other nice things to fancy up your banner (3/5)
Overall: There are a lot of things you need to improve, like, it is a little bit blurred! I recommend you using Canva to make your banners, or get better at what you're using (3.5/5)

My constructive criticism.

Great job! When you do actual reviews the first two sections are for the shop's banner ect. Tommorrow is the last day of training and you will have a mock order to do.

guineapiggirl001

Day 3 of Training
Trainees: LankBox01
Today is your last day of training! Hopefully, by tomorrow you will be a full worker! For your final day you will have a mock order. I will be using our order form. Please treat this like I am a customer.

username: guineapiggirl001
Date for the review: Today or tomorrow for the order and the asap for the review
Monthly or one time: one time
Link to shop/studio/project: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/418736/
Have you read the terms?: Yup
Where you would like to be notified?: Profile please
other: I like Snow

Please remember when filling out a review form you post it in Mountain Reviews, but in this case, you can post it here (The Training Forum).

LankyBox01

guineapiggirl001 wrote:
username: guineapiggirl001
Date for the review: Today or tomorrow for the order and the asap for the review
Monthly or one time: one time
Link to shop/studio/project: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/418736/
Have you read the terms?: Yup
Where you would like to be notified?: Profile please
other: I like Snow

taken!

LankyBox01

Hello, i am from The Mountain Reviews shop. I am gonna review your shop to the smallest detail , and give you advice.

Title and Banner: Nice title, but the banner has a watermark - i think you could've just made your own instead of ordering from another shop, could you? (4/5)
Main Pages: That's a pretty nice layout design! But you're missing out on Quote BBCode a little bit (4/5)
Speed: It took only 2 minutes, which is really impressive. (5/5)
Quality: I have ordered some ocean art, but it turned out just some blue circle shaped with the re-shape tool, no shades, no other textures, only bad re-shaping. (2/5)
Overall: Everything is pretty nice done, everyone is happy with their order, i have nothing to say. (3/5)

guineapiggirl001

LankyBox01 wrote:
Hello, i am from The Mountain Reviews shop. I am gonna review your shop to the smallest detail , and give you advice.

Title and Banner: Nice title, but the banner has a watermark - i think you could've just made your own instead of ordering from another shop, could you? (4/5)
Main Pages: That's a pretty nice layout design! But you're missing out on Quote BBCode a little bit (4/5)
Speed: It took only 2 minutes, which is really impressive. (5/5)
Quality: I have ordered some ocean art, but it turned out just some blue circle shaped with the re-shape tool, no shades, no other textures, only bad re-shaping. (2/5)
Overall: Everything is pretty nice done, everyone is happy with their order, i have nothing to say. (3/5)

Thanks! That's really great!

I will now discuss it with @Foxglove11

guineapiggirl001

Day 1 of Training
Trainees: BosenChang
When you order a test order, remember to alsways make it simple. But not too easy. Say we are using this form:

Username:
What you would like done:
Description:
Where you would like to be notified:

This would be a good way to fill it out:

Username: guineapiggirl001
What you would like done: A thumbnail
Description: Can it say guineapiggirl001's friends and followers in green and an abstract red background
Where you would like to be notified: Profile please

For today's task, you are going to fill out this form with something you think would be suitable for a test order.

BosenChang

Username: BosenChang
What you would like done: Sunset for my project at {project link}
Description: I would like red, orange, and yellow with a few trees in the sunset, please
Where you would like to be notified: I am following this topic, so here

guineapiggirl001

BosenChang wrote:
Username: BosenChang
What you would like done: Sunset for my project at {project link}
Description: I would like red, orange, and yellow with a few trees in the sunset, please
Where you would like to be notified: I am following this topic, so here

Well done, that's really good!

guineapiggirl001

Day 2 of Training
Trainees: BosenChang

Today we will be focusing on writing the review. When reviewing, constructive criticism is key. Point out things that could improve in a helpful, polite way and don't forget to name things that you like. Here is the review form we use at Mountain Reviews:

Title and Banner: (Here you write about the title and banner(s))
Main Pages: (Here you write about the first pages (home, forms ect.))
Speed: (Here you say about the time it took to complete the order)
Quality: (The quality of your completed order)
Overall: (A sum up of everything)

Don't forget to put a score out of ten after each one.
Let's say someone took my order example, see here, and came back, around two days later, with this:

http://u.cubeupload.com/guineapiggirl001/e01trainingorder2.jpg

Using our review form, how would you review it? Please Note: You do not have to fill out the first two as you are only reviewing the order.

Last edited by guineapiggirl001 (Aug. 18, 2020 19:21:42)

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