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welcome to the retro shop!


our reviews:

JC20092009 wrote:

First impression: 7.5/10
Front page: 8/10
Service: 9/10
Overall: 8.2

Not bad!

secretagent123 wrote:

username: secretagent123
who took your order? zobandzeff
was it done in time? Sort of.
rating(1-10) 8.5
will you order from there again? Yes.

TapingAnimations wrote:
username: TapingAnimations
who took your order? zobandzeff
was it done in time? Yes, in 1 day
rating(1-10) 10/10
will you order from there again? I'll come back for sure! I need more stuff for my collab but i'll order later

how to leave a review:
1: order something from this shop
2:fill in this form once you receive you product

form:
username:
who took your order?
was it done in time?
rating(1-10)
will you order from there again?

forms:

pixel art form
name:
description:
what is it for:
how much costumes: (for sprites)
deadline: (2 days+)
are you following this thread?

music form
name:
description:
what is it for:
deadline:
are you following this thread?

translation form
name:
what would you like to translate:
what language would you like to translate it into:
why would you like to translate this?
deadline:
are you following this thread?

idea form
name:
theme:
deadline:
are you following this thread?

code form
name:
description:
deadline:
are you following this thread?

story form
name:
title:
genre:
description:
deadline:
are you following this thread?

review form
name:
shop,studio or project:
deadline:
are you following this thread?

application form
name:
what do you want to do?
example of work:
activity: (1-10)
are you following this thread?


Terms

for staff:
.always make the project the best quality possible
.do your best to get the project done in time
.in the application,write the codeword:ARCADE

for customers
.be aware of different timezones
.always leave a review
.use the codeword:RETRO

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Hello! I have claimed your order and am here to review your shop.

name: JC20092009
what would you like to translate: The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog.
what language would you like to translate it into: French
why would you like to translate this? To review your shop :p
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? Why wouldn’t I?

JC20092009 wrote:

Hello! I have claimed your order and am here to review your shop.

name: JC20092009
what would you like to translate: The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog.
what language would you like to translate it into: French
why would you like to translate this? To review your shop :p
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? Why wouldn’t I?

Le rapide renard brun sauta par dessus le chien paresseux

zobandzeff wrote:

JC20092009 wrote:

Hello! I have claimed your order and am here to review your shop.

name: JC20092009
what would you like to translate: The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog.
what language would you like to translate it into: French
why would you like to translate this? To review your shop :p
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? Why wouldn’t I?

Le rapide renard brun sauta par dessus le chien paresseux

Thanks!

name: JC20092009
what would you like to translate: I Scream. I scream, you scream, we all scream, for ice cream!
what language would you like to translate it into: Japanese
why would you like to translate this? Why not?
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? Still am.

JC20092009 wrote:

name: JC20092009
what would you like to translate: I Scream. I scream, you scream, we all scream, for ice cream!
what language would you like to translate it into: Japanese
why would you like to translate this? Why not?
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? Still am.

私は悲鳴を上げる、あなたは悲鳴を上げる、私たちは皆悲鳴を上げる、アイスクリームのために！

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zobandzeff wrote:

JC20092009 wrote:

name: JC20092009
what would you like to translate: I Scream. I scream, you scream, we all scream, for ice cream!
what language would you like to translate it into: Japanese
why would you like to translate this? Why not?
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? Still am.

私は悲鳴を上げる、あなたは悲鳴を上げる、私たちは皆悲鳴を上げる、アイスクリームのために！

Great!

First impression: 7.5/10

When I first looked at the page, I noticed the page had no colors besides the banner. Although the banner gave it some style, I recommend more colors. It didn’t stand out, but it was ok.

Front page: 8/10

It’s all right. The forms for each service are rather uncalled for, as you can simply make one form and add a service field. There should also be a Terms if Service. A customer survey would be useful as well. The forms could use some work, but it’s fine.

Service: 9/10

You got it done in a few minutes, which is good! The quality was a bit off. According to Google Translate, it’s le rapide renard brun saute par dessus le chien paresseux, not le rapide renard brun sauta par dessus le chien paresseux. The other translation is good though.

Overall: 8.2

Not bad!

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Did you really make another shop?
This is the first one, if you were wondering: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/410594/
Also, here's the website i made for you (that you asked for): https://lankybox01.github.io/Pix.html

Note: You could've just renamed it to Retro Shop instead of creating a completely new one with the same designs

name: dinoshark123best
shop,studio or project: shop
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? yes
you can find the link on my prof.

dinoshark123best wrote:

name: dinoshark123best
shop,studio or project: shop
deadline: ASAP
are you following this thread? yes
you can find the link on my prof.

i have placed an order at your shop

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Your order from the Oreo Shop 2.0~

This looks like a very good shop! Its banner is perfect and its title is well written. One thing I would say is maybe format your shop a bit better, with forms in on post, then terms in one post and so on

name: @pepeda
description: Pixel art of food (this is for the review
what is it for: Reviewing
how much costumes: (for sprites): 3
deadline: (2 days+): Well, it is a review so ASAP
are you following this thread?: no

Ice-cream, burger+pizza

pepeda wrote:

Ice-cream, burger+pizza

ok