What's the Cost? Script
By @Ranger_NJoyC and @-JustAnotherActress-

Scene 1
WRITTEN BY: @-JustAnotherActress-

(Upbeat music, maybe Girls Just Wanna Have Fun By Cyndi Lauper, about 20 secs with credits and then…)
Avi: Omg, girls!
Tanya: (girly-girl squeal) It's him!
Avi: Do I look okay?
Paisley: Yes, as always!
Avi: Here he comes!
James: Hey there.
Avi: Hi, James.
James: See you around?
Avi: Sure!
James: Great! Later.
Avi: Later.
Paisley: EEEEEEEEEK!
Tanya: He sooooo likes you!
Avi: Who wouldn't?
Paisley, Tanya, & Avi: (laugh)
Tanya: What's next?
Avi: Let's hit Tiffany's!
Paisley: (pouty but slightly mischievous) I already spent all my money…
Avi: Don't worry, girls. It's on me!
Tanya: Thanks Avi!
Avi: No prob.
(Music gets loud again for 5 secs then…)
Delaney: First Day. Okay, Delaney, you got this.
Mom: C'mon!
Delaney: Ok, bye mom!
Mom: I love you!
Delaney: I love you too.
(quiet for 2 secs)
Tansy: Hey! Wanna come play soccer with us?
Delaney: Um… I'm not very good, but, sure?
Poppy: Great! You're on our team.
Tansy: I'm Tansy.
Poppy: I'm Poppy.
Lilith: I'm Lilith.
Addilyn: And I'm Addilyn!
Delaney: Cool! I'm Delaney!
Coach: Ready, Set, GO!
Addilyn: Tansy! Over here!
Tansy: Ok!
Addilyn: Hey! Delany!
Delaney: Huh?
Addilyn: The ball!
Delaney: Oh!
(cheering sound)
Addilyn: You did it!
Tansy: Wow!
Poppy: You're really good!
Delaney: Oh! Thanks!
(School Bell)
Avi: School is SOOOO annoying!
Tanya: I can't bear it!
Paisley: I need to go shopping.
Tanya: Or make fun of someone.
Paisley: (gasp) Look! It's the new girl!
Tanya: Ewwwwwww! What is she wearing!?!?!?!
Paisley: I think we found our target.
Avi: Are you sure that's the nicest thing to do?
Tanya: (laughs) That's funny, pretending to care for someone!
Paisley: Good one!
Avi: Yeah, that was SO a joke…
Liam: Hey Tanya!
Poppy: (swooning) Oh, hi Liam!
Avi: Who's that? He's sort of cute.
Tanya: Ugh, he's a nerd.
Paisley: SUPER Nerdy.
Avi: Oh, okay.
Tanya: Alright. Let's go tell the new girl who's the boss.
Avi: Yeah!
Paisley: Hey New Girl!
Delaney: Yeah?
Lilith: This shouldn't be good…
Tanya: What are you wearing?
Delaney: Um… it's…
Paisley: TRASH!
Tanya: I mean, what the heck!
Delaney: I'm sorry that you are too rich to realize that other people have tastes too.
Paisley: Oh, no, we know. But most people, like you, have BAD tastes.
Tanya: No, terrible tastes.
Delaney: Yeesh! C'mon guys.
Avi: WAIT!
Addilyn: We aren't stopping for 1 million dollars!
Avi: I CAN ARRANGE THAT!
Lilith: Guys.
Avi: I-I'm sorry.
Poppy: SHUT UP! Wait… you're… sorry?!?!?!?
Tanya: (laughs nervously) She's joking!
Paisley: Yeah!
Delaney: Ok, I knew it. Let's go guys.
Tanya: What was that all about?
Avi: Sorry, I just need to go shopping.


Ok… so what's next?

-JustAnotherActress- wrote:

Ok… so what's next?

I can write the next scene later. We can alternate scenes. I will also get started on music and songs.

Scene 2
WRITTEN BY: @Ranger_NJoyC

Aviana's Mom: Aviana, are you getting ready?
Aviana: No…
Aviana's Mom: What? Why not!? The party starts in five hours! That is not enough time to properly get ready.
Aviana: Do I have to go?
Aviana's Mom: Of course you do! Who else would we show off to the rich Italian guests?
Aviana: Maybe I just don't want to be rich and fancy tonight…
Aviana's Mom: No. You are going, and that is final. I'll tell your hairdresser and makeup artist to come in right away. Oh and also, we've had an esteemed tailor make you a custom dress for tonight. You'll find it in your closet.
Aviana: But, Mother!
Aviana's Mom: Not another word from you. The party starts in 4 hours, 57 minutes, and 32 seconds precisely. Don't be even a second late.
Aviana: Yes, mother.
(music switches to a more calm and relaxed vibe)
Delaney: Hmm, which dress to wear…
Delaney's Mom: Delaney, what are you doing?
Delaney: Oh! I forgot to tell you, I'm going to a party tonight.
Delaney's Mom: No, you're not.
Delaney: What? Mom, please! I told my friends I would be there. They are having a small party tonight and they invited me.
Delaney's Mom: But you need to do your homework and study for your french test.
Delaney: Mom, I already studied! Please, just for one night, let me go out and have fun?
Delaney's Mom: No, I'm sorry honey. You know our family rules.
Delaney: *sighs* Yes, mom.
(I will write a song to go here)
(A brief break)
Tanya: Hey Paisley!
Paisley: Sup Tanya?
Tanya: Is it just me, or has Aviana been acting a little.. weird to you?
Paisley: Oh yes, definately. I don't know what's gotten into her! It's like she's tired of being rich!
Tanya: Who would trade being rich for being like someone that Delaney girl?
Paisley: I don't know, someone who has lost their mind.
Tanya: Maybe we should talk to her, remind her who are her true friends, you know?
Paisley: Let's do it.
(a brief break)
Tanya: Hey Avi!
Aviana: Yes?
Paisley: Are you okay?
Tanya: You've been acting a bit weird lately.
Aviana: *sighs* Do you ever feel like your a bad person? And there is nothing you can do about it, because it's just the way you were raised?
Paisley: No… Do you feel like that?
Aviana: No.. well, yes. Well, sometimes.
Tanya: Avi, c'mon. Let's go shopping. Forget about all of that.


I think that is the end of scene two… I might continue it in a little bit.

Scene 3

Written By: @-JustAnotherActress-

Delaney: Wow, guys! This is so cool!
Tansy: Not as cool as you sneaking out to be here!
Lilith: Yeah, I could NEVER do that.
Addilyn: You're so brave!
Liam: Hey guys!
Lilith: (flirt-like) Hi Liam!
Tansy: Hey! Thanks for coming!
Liam: No problem! Thanks for inviting me!
Addilyn: We're so glad you could make it.
Liam: I haven't met you before, what's your name?
Delaney: Delaney, but you can call me Dee.
Liam: I'm Liam. It's nice to meet you!
Delaney: You too!
Lilith: It's PARTY TIME!
Addilyn: WOOOOO-HOOOOOOOO!
(scene transitions to the pop. girls)
Tanya: Okay, let's go to Gucci!
Aviana: I'm not paying.
Paisley: But it's your turn too!
Tanya & Aviana: PAISLEY.
Paisley: Sorry!
Tanya: I'll pay.
(5 secs of music, probably some “shopping” music)
Tanya: Oooooh! Look at this guys!
Paisley: What's the cost?
Aviana: (mumbling) A lifetime of sadness.
Tanya: What was that, Avi?
Aviana: Nothing, nevermind.
Paisley: GUYS! LOOK!
Tanya: What?
Paisley: The nerd squad is having a party!
Aviana: Do you guys always have to be so RUDE?
Tanya: Avi?
Aviana: DON'T CALL ME THAT! You guys are just spoiled, no good BRATS! I can't do this anymore.
Paisley: AVI! WAIT!
(I REALLY want Avi to have a solo, and I was thinking during the solo Paisley and Tanya interrupt it sometimes like, SING SING, “Avi! Stop!” SING SING SING SING SINGGGGG “Avi! Wait!” I don't know)
WAIT 2 SECS AND MUSIC TRANSITIONS TO PARTY MUSIC
Delaney: Wait! Tansy is that…
Tansy: No way! What is AVIANA doing here?
Aviana: (shy) Hi guys!
Lilith: Just leave. We were having a perfectly good party until YOU came.
Addilyn: If you're trying to embarrass us, today is NOT the day.
Poppy: Just go, and you'll do us all a favor.
Delaney: She doesn't DO anything for anyone else but her.
Tansy: You're right.
Aviana: Guys, I'll leave but I just wanted to say… I'm sorry. I've been really stupid and I'm REALLY REALLY sorry. I know that's probably not enough but, I'm done with Tanya and Paisley. Now I'll leave. (cries and runs away)
Tansy: (scoffs) Yeah right.
Delaney: She's CRYING, though.
Poppy: Just chill. Finally something doesn't go her way, and we get to watch it.
Addylin: (laughs)
Lilith: Look at her!
Delany: STOP GUYS! I thought you guys were the NICE ones! She's ACTUALLY sorry this time, can't you forgive her?
Tansy: She's ruined our lives. I can NEVER forgive her. And we ARE the nice ones!
Delaney: No, you aren't. I'm going to apologize for your rude behavior.
Addilyn: Who's the rude one now?
Delaney: (scoffs)

Ok! We've got that done! Sooooooo… I'm wondering because this is so long we should split it up into 2 episodes? 3 parts in each episode? So all that we've written would be episode one? Idk.

Maybe each of these scenes should be it's own episode… So that would mean we have 3 episodes so far, and we could maybe have 5 in total?

Sure! That's fine with me!

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

Maybe each of these scenes should be it's own episode… So that would mean we have 3 episodes so far, and we could maybe have 5 in total?

Ok… so… you need to write the fourth episode. I was thinking about it and I think there should be 2 parts in each episode just because we wrote them a bit shorter… do you understand? Or because we aren't that far in the story after 3 episodes… so maybe we do 6 episodes instead of 3? Just so that the big climax happens halfway? We can TOTALLY not do any of this.

Sure, we can do 6 episodes!

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

Sure, we can do 6 episodes!

Great! Can you do Scene 4 then?

Of course! It'll be done today or tomorrow at the latest.

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

Of course! It'll be done today or tomorrow at the latest.

Great!

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

Of course! It'll be done today or tomorrow at the latest.

You working on it?

Scene 4

WRITTEN BY: @Ranger_NJoyC

Delaney: Aviana, wait!
Aviana: You don't want to talk to me. Go hang out with your friends.
Delaney: I don' think they want to hang out with me.
Aviana: I guess we're both alone then
Delaney: No.
Aviana: Excuse me?
Delaney: That's where you're wrong. We're not alone, we have each other.
Aviana: You can't be serious.
Delaney: What do you mean?
Aviana: Why would YOU want to be friends with me? I haven't been anything but mean to you.
Delaney: Wrong again. Your friends were the mean ones, you apologized for their words.
Aviana: You don't know what I used to be like.
Delaney: Does that really matter if you're better now?
Aviana: I guess… The only thing is that my mom won't let me stop being rich popular.
Delaney: Huh?
Aviana: If I stopped being mean, shopping ALL the time, and being bratty and popular, my mom would get so mad at me. I would be grounded for life.
Delaney: Huh, that's weird. My mom is the opposite, she doesn't let me hang out with friends or go to parties or anything so that I DON'T become bratty and popular.
Aviana: Lucky.
(A brief break)
Tanya: We have to get Aviana back to her normal self!
Paisley: Yeah! She is acting totally unreasonable, and totally selfish.
Tanya: Yeah! She's just doing what she wants, instead of thinking about our group as a whole.
Paisley: Yeah. Now think, how can we change her mind?
(A brief break)
Poppy: She must be crazy!
Lilith: Completely insane.
Tansy: I mean, what WAS she thinking?
Addilyn: She wasn't. She wasn't thinking at all. If she had thought it through, she never would have walked off.
Poppy: Especially to go talk to Aviana, of all people!
Tansy: I think she's still a good person.
Addilyn: I agree.
Lilith: Yeah, me too. I think she just needs something to help her remember who she is and who her real friends are.
Poppy: We need to show her that Aviana is her enemy.
Tansy: Hmm, how could we do that?
Addilyn: Maybe we could… wreck her stuff then say that Aviana did it?
Poppy: NO, that would make us just as bad as Aviana.
Addilyn: Yeah, good point.
Lilith: Maybe we could convince Paisley and Tanya to be really rude to her?
Poppy: They don't need to be convinced.
Lilith: Ha, yeah. But if we did that, then Delaney would see that Aviana and her group are really mean people.
Tansy: But I don't think Aviana is part of their group anymore.
Lilith: Maybe… Maybe she is different now. Maybe she actually has stopped being mean.
Addilyn: Yeah right.
Lilith: I'm serious, guys. Maybe the first thing we should do is just TALK to Delaney and figure some things out.
Tansy: I mean… Lilith has a point.
Poppy: Let's go.
(a brief break)
Addilyn: Delaney!
Delaney: Yes?
Poppy: Can we talk to you for a minute?
Delaney Uhh, sure. I'll be back soon, Avi
Lilith: Are you serious? Do you actually like to hang out with that girl?
Delaney: Aviana has changed, guys. She's not the same spoiled brat that you guys grew up with.
Tansy: She can't change, she's too rotten to ever become good again.
Delaney: Maybe you should just give her a chance.
(A brief break)
Tanya: Aviana! We need to talk to you for a minute.
Aviana: No.
Paisley: C'mon, just for a little bit.
Aviana: Fine.
Tanya: Please come back, we'll be better, we won't be as mean.
Aviana: Actions speak more than words.
Paisley: What do you mean?
Aviana: Prove that your going to be nicer. When Delaney comes back, you're going to apologize to her.
Tanya: Wait… Delaney?
Paisley: You've been hanging out with Delaney?!?
Tanya: But she's so…
Paisley: normal
Tanya: And has no style sense
Paisley: And she-
Aviana: Will you guys shut up?!? I've actually found that we have a lot in common.
Paisley: But… why were you talking with her?
Aviana: She came to make me feel better, like a NICE person does.
Tanya: What?
Aviana: You might be rich and popular, but Delaney is one thing that makes all the difference.
Paisley: And what's that? What could Delaney possibly-
Aviana: She's a good person with a kind heart. Not like you even know how to be good.
Tanya: Avi…
Aviana: Stay. Stay and apologize. Either apologize, or leave. The choice is yours.

FYI: I'm going to put a song in when Delaney's friends(Poppy, Lilith, Addilyn, Tansy) are talking about Delaney.

And in Scene 1, I'm going to have an opening song that starts it off.

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

FYI: I'm going to put a song in when Delaney's friends(Poppy, Lilith, Addilyn, Tansy) are talking about Delaney.

And in Scene 1, I'm going to have an opening song that starts it off.

Perf! Now the next episode is about Liam and James and boy drama.

Great!

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

Great!

Working on it.

Episode 5

Written by: @-JustAnotherActress-

Tanya: Sorry, Avi. We thought you would be a good friend and come back.
Paisley: But you won't so I guess it's just me and Tanya now.
Aviana: Good.
Tanya: That's all you have to say?
Aviana: What were you expecting?
Paisley: Well…
Tanya: Forget it. C'mon, Paisley.
Paisley: (scoffs) She's so spoiled.
(pause)
Tansy: Guys, Delaney's right. We should give Aviana a chance.
Lilith: I agree.
Addilyn: Me too!
Poppy: Me three!
Delaney: I knew I could count on you guys to make the right decision.
Lilith: Hi, Aviana!
Aviana: Hello?
Poppy: How's it going?
Aviana: Ummm… not amazing.
Addilyn: I'm sorry! What's wrong?
Aviana: I don't want to talk about it.
Tansy: UGH! I can't do this! All you care about is YOURSELF and YOUR problems! Sorry Delaney, but this won't work if you're going to hang out with Ms. Pretty Perfect.
Delaney: Fine!
(pause)
Aviana: Thanks for staying with me.
Delaney: I understand.
Aviana: Your the first REAL friend I've ever had!
Delaney: Thanks! I'm honored.
James: Hey Avi.
Aviana: (barely cares) Hi, James.
James: Ooh, you've eliminated the squeal when I come by. I'm glad.
Aviana: James, I'm not in the mood.
James: Everyone's in the mood for me.
Delaney: Not everyone.
James: Who are you?
Delaney: Delaney. Delaney Evans.
James: She's not very…
Aviana: Shut up, James.
James: Woah, girl. Don't you like me?
Aviana: Not anymore.
James: WHAT?!?!?!
Delaney: Just leave.
James: Is there someone else better?
Aviana: Almost everyone is better than you, James.
James: When I learn who he is…
(pause)
Tansy: So she ditched us.
Liam: I mean, you didn't really try that hard.
Lilith: What do you mean?
Liam: Nevermind.
Delaney: So, Avi, whatcha wanna do?
Liam: Woah. Who's that?
Tansy: Oh, it's Aviana and Delaney.
Liam: Aviana's pretty.
Addilyn: On the outside.
Poppy: Not the inside.
Liam: Guys, stop being so judgy.
Tansy: Yeah, just go ahead.
Addilyn: Just go and hang with the pretty girls.
Poppy: Typical.


What's next?

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

Great!

Finished!

-JustAnotherActress- wrote:

Ranger_NJoyC wrote:

Great!

Finished!

Great!