Hello,


When I was like 10 years old I wrote this song….. How good is it should I add or change any of the lyrics?


???True Love???
By, Tasmanian

I can't understand what people are telling me
That you can't recognize me
I was stepping on your shadow
Why did you not hear me calling
Is this where I close my eyes and step out of this bad dream
Our meeting was like a math formula
Awkwardly I know
This is what destiny will give me
Because you're the source of my dream
Or is it because I am trembling
My heart chooses you its fate
We will fight this storm together
So you don't have to worry
Because we've got to stay insane
This is not a coincidence
I've got to throw me in two worlds
Yours and mine

From today and into beyond
Just bring on the pain, pain, pain ya
We're eternally together
Everyday ya-ya-ya
I want real love
No fear I know the way
Your breath on the small things
We might only be true lovers
For my air and light in the dark

This is that emotion they call love
It won't stop even if I drop to the ground
I will win this no matter what
My heart only runs for you

From today and into beyond
Just bring on the pain, pain, pain ya
We're eternally together
Everyday ya-ya-ya
I want real love
No fear I know the way
Your breath on the small things
We might only be true lovers
For my air and light in the dark

So just don't look back
Let me take a breath
You won't regret this
You must know yeah
We will always be together
No matter what

From today and into beyond
Just bring on the pain, pain, pain ya
We're eternally together
Everyday ya-ya-ya

So just bring the pain
Because this is no coincidence
It the only thing I know
because the is true love

Nice song, impressive for a 10 year old.

(No offence) But I believe this is meant to be in the show and tell section. If you'd like to repost in the correct place do it here:
https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/8/