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mr_scientific

Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!): You have one chance to overthrow a ninja with the title of “True Ninja”. However, in order to do so, you need to complete a test. A very HARD test.
How harsh would you like it to be? (we will always be constructive, but be careful because if you choose too harsh you may be disappointed with your review)?
If you randomly came across this game, how critical would yo be? Please tell what you liked so I can implement in future games and tell me what can be improved
Length of gameplay/animation: Depends on how determined you are. All the people I've seen play it took more than half an hour. I can do it in less but only because I've played it many times
Any other notes:
Link:Link
Preferable time frame (must be 18+ hours): By the end of Tuesday

TheFlightShow

Would your shop like to use superbux?

hellounicorns2

mr_scientific wrote:
Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!): You have one chance to overthrow a ninja with the title of “True Ninja”. However, in order to do so, you need to complete a test. A very HARD test.
How harsh would you like it to be? (we will always be constructive, but be careful because if you choose too harsh you may be disappointed with your review)?
If you randomly came across this game, how critical would yo be? Please tell what you liked so I can implement in future games and tell me what can be improved
Length of gameplay/animation: Depends on how determined you are. All the people I've seen play it took more than half an hour. I can do it in less but only because I've played it many times
Any other notes:
Link:Link
Preferable time frame (must be 18+ hours): By the end of Tuesday

Taken, sorry that this is late. I’ll have it done within 12 hours from now.

TheFlightShow wrote:
Would your shop like to use superbux?

No thanks

the_pro_gamer002

hey do you know the standard shop banner size in pixels

Last edited by the_pro_gamer002 (Aug. 24, 2019 12:55:47)

hellounicorns2

the_pro_gamer002 wrote:
hey do you know the standard shop banner size in pixels

I just use canva template sizes which aren’t the perfect size but they work.

Last edited by hellounicorns2 (Aug. 24, 2019 13:13:07)

hellounicorns2

mr_scientific wrote:
Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!): You have one chance to overthrow a ninja with the title of “True Ninja”. However, in order to do so, you need to complete a test. A very HARD test.
How harsh would you like it to be? (we will always be constructive, but be careful because if you choose too harsh you may be disappointed with your review)?
If you randomly came across this game, how critical would yo be? Please tell what you liked so I can implement in future games and tell me what can be improved
Length of gameplay/animation: Depends on how determined you are. All the people I've seen play it took more than half an hour. I can do it in less but only because I've played it many times
Any other notes:
Link:Link
Preferable time frame (must be 18+ hours): By the end of Tuesday

Sorry that this is late, but I loved the project!

Hardness- 8/10 The game was a good amount of challenging, but there were some issues- the parkour was way too easy and the enemies were too hard… also, having to restart from the beginning every time was a little frustrating.
Speed- 9/10 The game was really nice and smooth, and nothing really felt out of place. However, a restart button where you dont have to retype “c” and click multiple times but rather just get put back to the start would improve the game greatly.
Lag/Glitches- 8/10 Lag wasn't an issue but glitches were. In the first boss fight it was possible to just sit on the bottom of the screen and if you went far away the boss would randomly go really far away and just constantly sit on the right bottom of my screen. In addition, the load save function didn't dsave my progress on a level.
Storyline- 8/10 The story felt like it was kinda there but it felt like me of a separate thing to the game than a built in feature.
Instructions- 10/10 It's a platformer lol
Ease of use and transitions- 7/10 The game was easy to get the hang of but death was too sudden without a proper animation and as I said before, having to press multiple buttons and type a bit every time was annoying.
Art- 8/10 Don't get me wrong- the art was amazing! At times it felt a little saturated and the fonts used were a little basic. I did like the small touches such as birds and trees in the background and the ground and lava looked cool.
Engagement- 7/10 It was really addictive for a bit which was good but eventually it got really repetitive having to do it over and over again when I failed.
Originality- 7/10 It's a platformer inspired by Will_Wam's Ninja series. It wasn't very original, but you gave credit (in the awesome credit screen at the end) so it wast that bad.
Sound- 10/10 The music went with the game really well and the sound effects just added that extra touch to the game.
Overall rating- 82/100

Incredible job on the insane rating! The platformer was really fun and I thoroughly enjoyed the story and bosses and every part was challenging not only to plain skill in terms of parkour and PvP but also having to think about things like fighting in different ways! Eventhough it was a platformer it still felt unique which is impressive if you ask me. While mobile support was there, my browser crashed whenever I tried to load the project on my iPad, so that was a bit disappointing. If I had an iPad Pro or something along those lines I'm sure I'd be able to run it with ease. The game was mostly glitch-free, obviously as I was reviewing it I went out of my way to try and find smaller glitches but there weren't many given the fact that the progress is still a work in progress.

Also, I know this is sometimes underappreciated, but thanks for including WASD support. Some platformers don't which makes them much harder to play. The SFX were cool despite how quiet they were and eventhough the music was too loud by default the slider was okay. You should also try to change the settings so that the game is paused when you open settings- I made the fatal mistake of opening settings while in a boss fight and I was kinda annoyed afterwards. I can't wait for level three and would encourage you to make a part 3 of your amazing fun game. I'm sorry about how late this is by the way, I've had lots of work at school and have been demotivated and my workers haven't been taking many orders.

Thank you for shopping at the space shop. Please leave a review and spread the word of our shop if you like it! If you add some of my suggestions I would love to be notified so that I can check them out. You may even want another review!

Review form (optional)
Speed:
Quality of work:
Overall rating/5:
Notes:

Last edited by hellounicorns2 (Aug. 25, 2019 02:07:45)

mr_scientific

hellounicorns2 wrote:
mr_scientific wrote:
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Review form
Speed: 9/10 Even though you said it was late, I honestly don't mind. (I happen to be a worker in this shop and when an order comes that I can do, like reviews, you claim it way before my school ends. Plus no one really uses shops for coding orders.)
Quality of work: 10/10 I think the review was helpful, before I was not sure on a 3rd level and I already started on another game but now I'll try to do both.
Overall rating/5: 4.75/5
Notes: I really liked the review, I have been getting reviews from multiple shops to see what different people said about the game so I could work on whats really the problem bu until now I mostly just got that the game was way too laggy. I honestly did what I could for the lag but the game is a 22 MB file, so I can see why it crashed in your IPad. I didn't even know of the boss glitch before.

hellounicorns2

mr_scientific wrote:
Review form
Speed: 9/10 Even though you said it was late, I honestly don't mind. (I happen to be a worker in this shop and when an order comes that I can do, like reviews, you claim it way before my school ends. Plus no one really uses shops for coding orders.)
Quality of work: 10/10 I think the review was helpful, before I was not sure on a 3rd level and I already started on another game but now I'll try to do both.
Overall rating/5: 4.75/5
Notes: I really liked the review, I have been getting reviews from multiple shops to see what different people said about the game so I could work on whats really the problem bu until now I mostly just got that the game was way too laggy. I honestly did what I could for the lag but the game is a 22 MB file, so I can see why it crashed in your IPad. I didn't even know of the boss glitch before.

Thanks! I’ll add the review tomorrow.

congyingzhou

I'm unfollowing this thread. I'm not sure why I followed it in the first place, and it gives me too much notifications. (like every time I check my messages and then another message pops up and again)

the_pro_gamer002

fun fact i know this shops banner is 750 by 187 pixels

TheFlightShow

Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!): It isn't either, I would like this shop to review my thread superbux.
How harsh would you like it to be? (we will always be constructive, but be careful because if you choose too harsh you may be disappointed with your review)? 4/5
Length of gameplay/animation: It's a currency, a thread which you can spend as much time as you please on.
Any other notes: Please write review on profile
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/367222/
Preferable time frame (must be 18+ hours): 18hrs

the_pro_gamer002

Ok so i went on art looking to get just a piece of art for my game but there was no option for that (sorry if im sounding rude) may you consider adding an option for just art.

~yours sincerely
The_pro_gamer002

hellounicorns2

the_pro_gamer002 wrote:
Ok so i went on art looking to get just a piece of art for my game but there was no option for that (sorry if im sounding rude) may you consider adding an option for just art.

~yours sincerely
The_pro_gamer002

We used to offer that but unfortunately we do not have any staff who can do them so we had to stop providing them. Thanks for asking though, and sorry for any inconveniences this may cause!

congyingzhou

Hey, do you want to join SC2 (The Scratch Cup 2.0)? Please respond at the topic.

the_pro_gamer002

hellounicorns2 wrote:
the_pro_gamer002 wrote:
Ok so i went on art looking to get just a piece of art for my game but there was no option for that (sorry if im sounding rude) may you consider adding an option for just art.

~yours sincerely
The_pro_gamer002
We used to offer that but unfortunately we do not have any staff who can do them so we had to stop providing them. Thanks for asking though, and sorry for any inconveniences this may cause!

No this causes no inconveniences and i understand why you had to stop providing that.

lillianna81

if anyone wants to do an order, message me on my profile because its not letting me copy the order form and also i need something done asap.

hellounicorns2

We have a new task from The Scratch Cup 2.0 https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/369105/ if any coders can help with its that.

mr_scientific

hellounicorns2 wrote:
We have a new task from The Scratch Cup 2.0 https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/369105/ if any coders can help with its that.

Taken, do I have to say this there as well?

Saiid

Activity per day/week: Decently active each day.
Alternate accounts: None that I can remember anymore
Examples of your work (MUST be included):Jumping thing Multiplayer thingy
What orders you prefer taking: Coding, bug fizes
What you can add to The Space Shop: Experience

mr_scientific

mr_scientific wrote:
hellounicorns2 wrote:
We have a new task from The Scratch Cup 2.0 https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/369105/ if any coders can help with its that.
Taken, do I have to say this there as well?

Done Link

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