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-StarryyEyed-
Scratcher
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Planning OC things


Universe Description
In this world, long ago humans were each born with an individual element- fire, water, earth, air, light, or dark. Over time, these elements genetically combined and changed into a plethora of different powers. Now, each person’s elemental combination, and therefore power, are slightly different.
A population of humans were born with no element. This makes some people more elemental, and therefore more powerful, than others. Few are born with no element, but they do exist and mostly in concentrated areas.
The brighter/more saturated a color someone’s eye color is, the stronger their power. Typically, the eyes will brighten up, glow, or even change color if they activate their power.

In the modern day, a branch of the government called the Agency features crime fighters specialized in element-related shnazzydazzles. They b cool. They have all the agents. They gr8.
Sora, Astrid, and Mauve all go to the same school, a dorming school for all types of people wanting to go into Agency work- whether they’re front end classy spectacular superhero-like Agents or in the backdrop or even doing recon like secret agents. It’s a middle/high school.

Laika moved to Deri’s school in the beginning-ish of 11th grade, which’ll happen in the beginning of the story.
Characters
Most Developed Main Five??
Ashritha “Astrid” Joshi (14-15, F, no canon sexuality)
Power: Solar Energy Manipulation (Light/Fire/Touch of Water (the tears))
She absorbs energy from the sun and can use it for various purposes. She can blast energy downwards from her feet and jump high (she calls it a star jump), put blasts into punches and kicks, etc. She can also release huge blasts of solar energy from her eyes, the main focal point of the energy (more sunlight into her eyes, more energy basically). When she cries, she has healing tears- which is good, but she has to cry from emotion. Onions/ staring into wind don’t work as well. This is a problem to be discussed later. These tears essentially add energy to the body’s natural healing ability and makes it go faster- if the body naturally heals over an imbedded object she has a problem, and she can’t fix dislocations. Broken bones take lots of energy.
Also, she pukes pure energy if she uses her eye blasts too much. Bye-bye grass.
Appearance: Golden-yellow/amber eyes that glow bright yellow just before using her power or while she’s crying. They aren’t much more light than glow-in-the-dark sticks, though, but she thinks they look cool. She’s indian and has a chocolate-tan skin tone. Her dark hair is bouncy and looks almost gravity-less. It’s cut chin length. She’s of average stature and her face is pretty round. She typically wears bright colors and has a purple hood/cape that she loves. She carries a satchel because she’s amazing.

Personality: She’s an extremely energetic person (a side effect of her power giving her extra energy during the day) who always seems passionate in what she’s doing. She’s bright, optimistic, and extremely, EXTREMELY determined. She’s also quite naiive at times. She can come across as forceful or annoying, but when it matters she’s the one who’ll keep going. However, sometimes she doesn’t know when to stop. She has high self-confidence but not to the point of narcissism or recklessness.
Backstory: Astrid doesn’t have too much intense stuff. Her mom died while she was too young to remember (she died in childbirth!! So Astrid sometimes wonders if her family wishes she didn’t exist so her mother could come back. She knows it brings them sadness, and to make up for it she wants to make them and others happy. Her optimism is strange for her scenario, but… it fits her.), so she was pretty much raised by her dad and her Nani (grandmother). From a young age, she loved the idea of using her power to make people smile- the people around her, her father and older siblings (two brothers), always looked sad because of her mom’s death and she couldn’t understand since she hadn’t been around when it happened. She thought it was sad they weren’t happy-go-lucky and smiling like her so she decided to do her best to make them and others happy. IMO, she’s done well so far- her family is thankful for her beacon that burns with the light and fury of ten thousand suns. Sometimes, at least- other times they have to shush her and tell her to sit down. She… she probably has ADHD but she doesn’t take medication or anything.
Examples of Astrid in action (read the chain)
https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/4441462/comments/#comments-45492552
https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/5092181/comments/#comments-45492455
https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/5092181/comments/#comments-45492518

Mauve Kara (15, F, no canon sexuality) (prolly the least important of the five imo)
Power: Ghosting (Dark/Air)
She can turn her physical form into an intangible ghost-form– translucent and white with a hint of purple. This form is intangible to solids, but wind and currents can blow it away. She doesn’t need to breath in her ghost form but it does feel slightly uncomfortable if she’s underwater and not breathing while ghosting. She can possess one object at a time- the larger the object, the more exhausting it is, and smaller objects leave her feeling cramped. She can control the object’s movement through space but not what the object itself does (she can’t get phone data from possessing a phone for example). She can’t really phase through walls, as her form is best described as gaseous and not a true ghost, but she can possess a section of the wall and unpossess it and eject herself on the other side. It’s not actual phasing, though, and she does need to point this out sometimes. When she possesses animals, she can feel their thoughts. Often this can get confusing and animal thoughts mix up with her own, so she doesn’t do it often.
Appearance: Alexandra’s genesis runs in her family- purple eyes are present. Her eyes are a interesting mauve color, hence her name. They glow neon-iris-purple directly after possession, and sometimes if she possesses too long a purple aura will surround whatever she possesses. She has fairly pale skin - also genetic - and dark, slightly wavy, kinda scraggly hair that floats around when she ghosts. She typically wears dark-colored clothing.
Personality: Mauve is… quiet. Really quiet. She doesn’t talk much, outside of talking to her friends, and even then unless it’s something important, an emergency, or other rare occasions, she’s on the passive end of the conversation. She tries to act mysterious and untouchable on occasion but is really quite aware of and affected by how others act around her- more in backstory about her lonerism. She’s not a distant person as a friend and isn’t your stereotypical “oh my god __ hates me everyone hates me” teen and is best described as slightly emo with a large does of introvert. Gah i can’t describe her so well, just;;; read the RPs
Backstory: Mauve’s family has a reputation for Dark-type spoopy elements (i keep calling them powers they’re called ELEMENTS AHAHHAHH) which renders them kinda mysterious and not a socially active family. Her family lives in a small town kinda far away from the boarding school thing she goes to (i should name their school wow). As a kid, her element made other kids kinda scared of her-ish, and they didn’t talk to her and avoided her. She didn’t like it at all, but over time kinda accepted it and went off into introvert land… because if you don’t talk to them it’s YOU who’s avoiding, not them. She’s hesitant in developing friendships, but not a bad friend and certainly not shy. Her brother eventually joined a troupe of criminals (anti-agency criminals…) and she felt as if they’d taken him away from the family because he never returned. She felt pretty angry and decided to go in the agent direction because she wanted to find him and stop such betrayal from happening. Her brother’s element is a variation of dark (no other strong element exactly, just a bunch that mixed together) that allows him to take energy from other organisms (eukaryotes only) and increase his own vitality- heal his wounds or extend his lifespan. The other organism can sometimes go into a coma and, rarely, if the amount of energy they have is supremely low, die. YEah, Mauve’s family is p spoopy.
She had an episode in the past where she’d repetitively possess her pet cat, Neville, and go on adventures with him. Their thought process got so intermingled that when Neville died she felt like half of her died. It took her a while to recover and she’s avoided possessing the same animal twice- especially intelligent animals. It would be interesting if she did have that happen again and was angry at herself for it- she gets really close to these animals if she does possess them even twice.
Mauve in action:
https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/5092181/comments/#comments-45492455\
https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/5092181/comments/#comments-45492518

Sora Ito(15 almost 16, F, ace/homoromantic, aka the budget gay)
Element: Technopathy (Electric(variation on fire, her mom’s power)/ ferrokinesis (variation on earth, her dad’s power))
Sora’s is by far the most powerful element of all the characters, yet she doesn’t really like the whole element shenanigans. She does develop her power, but has limited control and it can sometimes get out of hand- she’s accidentally wasted 500 printer pages while emotionally involved in something, along with caused a power surge, turned off a bunch of phones, exploded a few lightbulbs all at the same time. On accident. YEah, she’s mighty strong. For backstory reasons she doesn’t enjoy her power and only uses it for smaller things, such as charging or using devices or even hacking. She doesn’t dare develop the breadth (how many different things) of her element, but she likes to see how far she can go into complex devices like computers, phones.. Etc. so yeah she has a love-hate relationship with it this should be in backstory but idc sora is the most complex imo

Oh and she’s tried bioelectricity but that’s more her mom’s things, devices with metal are far easier for her. Ferrokinesis and all- she has a tiny bit of normal electric control and detection and weak ferrokinesis as her power is a direct fusion of her parents’.

Appearance: Blue eyes that flame bright pink upon use of her power- or an emotional reaction, which is where she accidentally uses her element. Her element is really linked to her emotions, more on that later. She’s asian. She has long, silky black hair with a few light, desaturated pink highlights. She typically wears formal clothes and pretty much always full sleeves, and a glove on her right hand.
She was born without part of her as her mom went through a pretty rough pregnancy (she’s an only child because her mom didn’t want to risk a miscarraige with a second child) so her mom, an electrician and engineer, designed her a prosthetic based on her element. She feels like she’s controlling an actual arm at this point, and her prosthetic is so natural people can’t tell if she wears full sleeves that it’s a prosthetic without touching her. Over the years, she’s been modifying her prosthetic so that she can actually survive her school’s battle training class- she doesn’t want to do any of that stuff, she’d much prefer hacking into a mainframe and giving the agency data, that’s got to be better than fighting in her opinion.

God when it comes to Sora, i keep ranting because she’s not neccessarily the most developed character but she’s darn complicated. I like her for that.

Personality: The best words to describe Sora are “apathetic” and “intelligent”. In efforts to control her power, Sora gained immense control over her emotions, to the point where she doesn’t feel too much at all. Her mindset is a little scary- if she has a concrete goal in mind, which she doesn’t have too many of, nothing can stop her. Not morals, not rules, nothing but her own will can really stop her. She has few morals other than “generally try not to hurt people so they’ll be comfortable with your presence and not hate you”. She’s freakishly intelligent- she skipped two grades and is feeling bored with school but doesn’t feel like going through the grade/skip process again so she’s not skipping even though she could. She’s apathetic most of the time but when she appreciates someone, they’ll feel incredibly lucky to be her friend. She won’t be very emotionally supportive but she can still give great advice, even for relationships, surprisingly. Also she’s the budget gay™.

Backstory:
HERE COMES THE FUN PART
Aight so, you already heard about all the prosthetic nonsense…
Sora was born to immigrated parents who were both super cool and stuf and her mom had a great job opportunity so they moved to … whatever country before she was born. At around the age of five-seven, there was an accident where her parents were arguing and adorable emotional baby Sora exploded a toaster that caused a house fire. Sora was upstairs and ran… deeper upstairs, because even genius children mess up when they’re scared. After a few minutes of deliberation, her dad insisted that he could save Sora and her mom should leave. Sora’s dad found her and comforted her in the midst of flames and the floor breaking, his kinesis coming generally in handy. The fireman arrived after a little bit and took Sora, and as they came on the ground a board fell on Sora’s dad, who was looking out the window to make sure she was safe, and broke his back. He didn’t live, because darnit Sora apathetic slightly sociopathic geniuses don’t have happy backstories.
A few years after, she met Laika. Laika, who was a pretty avg kid atm, was quick to befriend the recently-became introvert dealing with a crippling loss. Laika helped Sora feel a lot better about herself and even helped her get into the school where she is now, and Sora helped Laika figure out what she wanted to do and become and made her a more logical and open-minded person. Laika also accidentally made Sora figure out her sexuality, since near the last year before she went off to boarding school, she discovered she had romantic emotions for Laika. It sucked, since Laika was basically her best friend and had been friendzoned before she developed the crush essentially. Sora doesn’t really love Laika anymore since it’s been a few years since they’ve met in person (boarding school, more about it in a sec) but she still holds the intense appreciation. She’d never respected someone that much before and it did change her personality and tone down a lot of aggression/narcissism??/sadness and such because they taught each other a lot. IDK , their friendship alone would make for a nice story but I just found it really poignant for Sora’s backstory as a whole. Ghjsj if i could meet Sora IRL i’d probably hug her and say it’s okay and tell her she’s one of my favorite children or something she’s just;;; ajfsdh

Ok that aside
A while after, her mom remarried to official * jerk™ Reni. At the time, her mom was also have crazy grief problems and she’d been getting better but was still irrational-ish. Reni is/was pretty abusive, giving Sora unnecessary limitations and occasionally giving her the ultimate slap™ (not a joking matter but i couldn’t help it, I think that all these characters are parts of me and that was a fusion of Sora’s apathy and Astrid’s joviality talking). All in all, he sucks and pretty much just liked the easy money of marrying Sora’s mom. So she hates him. He found a way to block her phone so she can only call certain people and he can hear all her calls (he’s a st00pid jerk so he got other people to do it) and she’s been trying to hack it but she can’t figure out who made it… this could be a story element.

When the acceptance letter came for a boarding school, Sora was both thrilled and saddened. She was eager to get away from the bleh place her house had become and take her beloved cat (Tsuki, a tuxedo named for his crescent-like patch of fur on his torso) with her, but the thought of leaving behind her best friend- well, to her Laika was like a guardian angel who saved her from darkness- behind was pretty… bleh. Bleh is an all-purpose adjective for when I don’t have a good word for something. Sora was indecisive and both choices were bittersweet, but Laika the great friend™ told her to follow her dreams n’ stuff and her story makes me cry sometimes why am i doing this to myself and Sora hhsguh. I don’t approve of Laikora since a)Laika be canonly taken by the gayest™ and b) it’s a lot of important char development that Laika simply didn’t ever fall in love with Sora or realize how Sora felt. It kinda adds a whole layer to their relationship in general.


So yeah that all happened
She met Astrid pretty early on, since Astrid has a way of meeting people who look lonely, and while it was a little slow at first they became great friends. Sora kinda needed the starry-eyed, motivated Astrid to perk her up and Astrid needed the rational Sora to remind her of the real world’s harshness. They’re a good combo.

Their ship likely won’t be canon but I 100% approve, they’re the perfect contrast

And if you can’t tell, each of these characters are an aspect of myself- these five, at least. By far the strongest are Sora, the complicated one, and Astrid, the starry-eyed one. Literally my user is starryyeyedd lmao. I’m bright and happy but existentialism and apathy are present- a lot of times I just say “eh screw it idc bout this not wasting my time” and honestly its a violatile combination that somehow has a perfect equilibrium

The only real thing that Laika did that Astrid doesn’t is understanding Sora, in a sense. Sora has a lot of guilt and anger and sadness at her core that doesn’t surface often, and Sora feels Astrid can’t understand. Astrid could probably get the general gist of it if Sora let her, but Sora feels like Astrid doesn’t deserve to be taken out of her happy view of the world. Astrid is, in her opinion, too innocent.
Which is why i ship them- they have the same equilibrium and i like it. But it’s not good for canon and more for like fluff stuff for fun.

Ghfsjhfsaj lmao i swear Sora isn’t special she gets an essay because characters like her just ARE complex, even if they don’t have anything written explicitly they just appear mysterious.

Ok i’ll stop we’re up to the freaking queen— laika she’s just;; she’s great. (If you don’t remember, Sora and Laika are both characters first created when you asked me to make characters they’ve changed so much since 7th grade and they’ve certainly improved, along with their universe, but I guess if it weren’t for you coming in right when these ideas were bouncing around in my head they wouldn’t have existed and yeah
Thanks a lot m8)

Laika (almost 17, F, bi)
Element: Water manipulation- shape and temperature (Water)
will be undiscovered for the beginning of the plot but she a waterbender. She can edit the shape of water and change the temperature. She can’t change the shape of it when it becomes ice, though, and she can’t really manipulate water vapor that well until she condenses it. She can’t create water, either- she can only use what’s in the environment. Controlling water in a larger scale, like Percy does when he makes a tsunami in the first book, is supremely difficult, like lifting a really heavy weight.
Appearance: Blue-hazel eyes which turned out to be brighter blue when she uses her power. African-american, but lighter end for her race. Black, straight, hair that’s kinda wavy-ish/messy and of short length w/ sideswept bangs. Dyed in an ombre to light grey. She’s about 5’9=8.5” and wears tshirt/jeans most of the time. She has cat ears headphones, a birthday gift from Sora.

Personality: Laika’s a relatively honest and polite person. She’ll try to act cool-ish..?? But she can get flustered on occasion, which is really funny when it happens. She’s a loyal friend to a fault. She really likes music, parkour (kinda), swimming, and Deri (lmao). She gives off a bit of a “*” aura. Laika’s is the personality I’m the most confused about- no idea how to describe her, lmao, I’ll give you some quotes or smth later on.

Backstory: Her dad works at NASA, hence her name. Her mom’s an event planner. She has an older brother and a younger brother, but she hasn’t seen the older brother in a long time (whether he went missing or ran away or something I’m still deciding, but this is a cool story element or smth i guess- if it doesn’t help the plot we can just remove the older brother entirely??) and she misses him, duh. All the friendship stuff with Sora you know about. Her family moved to a new state and she met Deri in the hallway when Deri dropped her stuff everywhere, because… that’s what Deri did. No reasons needed lmao. Deri helped her get to science class- which just so happened to be Deri’s science class too- and they ended up being seated next to each other. They became friends and after a while Laika fell in love. (Deri’s side will be in her backstory) The way they go from friends to dating is up to discussion but you have the song lyric version (Jenny by Studio Killers), the Deri does something drastic but romantic in order to save Laika from some intense situation involving psychics, and idk but it happens anD THEY’RE JUST THE BEST SHIP LAIKER IS ADORABLE
And yeah Laika doesn’t come out till later but Deri is openly the GAYEST

Also, Laika does have a persona on the internet where she posts her songs- LA1KA-BOSS

Deri (17, F, the gayest)
Element: Animal Communication (to a degree) (Earth/Light)
She can’t exactly talk to animals and know what they think. She can get them to help her out, do what she says, etc. It’s like convincing a human but slightly easier. It’s mostly subconcious- for example, if she were injured animals might try to help her or her dog will naturally comfort her and stuff. But she can go to like a bug or something and say HEY STOP BITING ME ASSHAT and the bug will listen haha. Her house is bug-free. Animals don’t really fear her, either, like birds don’t fly away but just move aside and they don’t really bite her unless she tries to hurt em or whatever. It’s not a powerful element, unlike the other four, and about the average powerfulness in their universe.

Appearance: She SHORT (like, 5’2”ish maybe less) and be white but not too white. She has green eyes and lots of freckles. She has short, curly, red hair that she honestly doesn’t care about the appearance of- she normally wears a (baseball) hat anyway. Her favorite color is green, so she always wears this green hoodie she likes.
Personality: The best two words to describe her are “passionate” and “angery”. Deri is quite easily angered, so she’s a fun target to tease. She loves playing video games and sounds of passionate screaming can be heard from her room when she plays- something along the lines of “YOU —-ING IDIOT, THE SUPPLY PACKET WAS RIGHT THERE!” and such X’D. She comes across as easy to read, but Deri’s actually got more to her, kinda like Amethyst from SU. More in backstory.
She likes ranting sometimes X’D and she can actually be quite smart.
Hhhn i wish i could just like, display a conversation with her X’D

Backstory: Not much of consequence here. She had a close female friend in middle school that she accidentally fell in love with, and when she tried to come out the friend completely cut her off. It was probably the one thing that took her from completely reckless to at least slightly wary. Other than that she’s just Deri and she’s great.
-StarryyEyed-
Scratcher
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Planning OC things

ignore anything addressed to someone please <3
-StarryyEyed-
Scratcher
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okay, so here's a tip for people looking to design character personalities– I'm not a professional, but over the years I've learnt a lot about character writing and like to think I've become at least decent

tip 1: figure out a personality you can relate to, even if you feel bad because they're completely twisted villain, if you're going to write them well you need to be able to feel their emotions and know how they'd react in almost any situation. It's okay if it takes you a sec to get into that zone of “i have become the character” but it helps a lot if you're writing a script or something or even just roleplaying (makes it more fun, too, and helps you develop your oc) If a character isn't relatable, people won't really like them. People liked roman torchwick (rwby) because he was fabulous!! He had style and grace, and idk that just seems relatable and likable to a degree. Cinder doesn't have much more than being smug and evil, tbh.

tip 2: their backstory shouldn't be what I like to call “useless”- each thing should affect their present and their behaviour in some way. That being said, each trait also shouldn't be useless- their personality should affect everything, too. Take Sora- her power made her learn to become apathetic and master her emotions because her power can be activated when she feels high emotions (like, an emotional reaction.) She's not just apathetic for the heck of it, she has a reason. Even Astrid is happy because she felt motivated to make the sad people around her feel better. She didn't encounter much of bad people in her past, hence her rose-colored view of everything. If a trait isn't directly caused by the characters backstory, then make sure it affects their current story- Sora's intelligence and logical outlook affects almost everything she does. Just an equal amount of good/bad isn't enough to make your character believable.

Even Bakugou Katsuki, a character who's traits are ridiculously exaggerated, has reasons for the way he is and what he does. He's well written!

Something I see a lot in characters is a really useless (“Deku!! Useless nerd…” haha) amount of embarrassment and shyness that they write off as “they were bullied!!” or sometimes not even at all. (I'd know, I used to do this to my oc Arthyr- poor kid haha. now he's just average ig). It's not that these types of characters can't be written well, they can! An example of an awkward, shy, embarrassed bean is Deku!!! He's really well written, imo, his shyness just adds to his character kinda and shows his growth?? but then there's Arthyr who'd turn red every five seconds oof. Another one, and my personal favorite, is Alphys! Alphys's embarassment is kinda adorable and doesn't feel unneccessary to the story, it's just.. Alphys.

I'm RPing with a character named Mei right now, actually, who's shyness makes complete sense to me and I like as a character, but I'm still confused over how embarrassed she gets over nothing. I really like Mei, and that's probably my only critique haha;; she's a really nice character and I look forward to getting to know more about Mei!!

Note that shy, embarrassed beans are easier to write than other characters, so it's hard to make them feel special. Alphys and Deku are two excellently done examples, in my opnion. Arthyr used to be the worst possible example- he was literally shy for no reason.

tip 3: conflicting traits!! don't just throw a mishmash of traits in there, they should make sense together ;v; this is the hardest to explain. Sora's logical mindset blends perfectly with her apathy and control of emotions, and even her relative lack of morals. Astrid's happiness is a good match for her passion and naiivety. Mauve's silence and insecurity goes hand in hand IMO. Heck, even Deri's anger and determination are a perfect pair. Go for those kinds of things.
It's possible to write conflicting traits well, but only in special circumstances- like Midoriya, again. He's incredibly determined but also shy and awkward. These traits don't compliment each other, but they aren't direct rivals either so it's alright. Think of these characters as people- you wouldn't imagine a reckless, uncultured Junkrat to be described as respectful/polite as well, would you? No, Junkrat isn't respectful, and if her were it wouldn't make sense.

Again, there are ways to write conflicting traits, but it's really hard. You might like it for main characters, but side characters don't get enough time to develop those traits enough to make sense. Over and out!
pixpickle
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Just read what you wrote about Mei ^.^ Thx! Anyway, so far, my idea is… Nothing… >.< I'm literally having a Mental Block for OC Ideas… I -could- revive one of my Original OCs, but that would take time for me to A) Remember them, B) Edit them a little >.< Rn, I'm reading & re-reading your 2nd post… Still stuck though… >.<
-StarryyEyed-
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Yw!! Mei's really cool.
okok so you'd like power ideas, right? typically it's easier to start off with a personality and then get a power, but what if you do it the other way around- a character off a power? i

A few cool powers:
reversal of time for an object- or person. this can be used to heal people or devastatingly destroy their memories. you'd have to create a limit to to the power (i.e. they can only do it in certain situations, only go so far back, etc.)

controlling of dreams- this is actually really powerful, if people fall asleep your character could give them ideas subconciously, slowly drive them insane each night, etc.

ability to make people drunk…? idk i just really love dionysus man he's great. research on him, his history is actually really complicated and stuff.

ability to dissolve themselves (and/or other objects, but be careful! don't make them too OP) into particles, rose petals, other small objects temporarily. They can enter small spaces, dodge attacks, etc. if the petals get separated they can't transform back, so they can't split people into half using their power. i personally don't suggest this one unless their power magically keeps themselves together, otherwise they'd have a 99% chance of dying every time they used it. i think the closest power to this is the semblance of Ruby Rose from RWBY…? look up the red trailer for RWBY and you'll see what i mean

summoning weak versions of species they've touched (only one per each, for humans it's a knight) : this is self explanatory

preconstruction/ability to see all the consequences of an action (not emotionally, physically), kinda like markus from detroit: become human

ability to control density (they can walk through walls and also make things really heavy, that kinda thing.)

self-melting abilities. again, self explanatory

perfect recollection, a blessing and a curse oof

able to make shields (this would be fun)

yeah this is aroudn when you said you had ideas


pixpickle
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Well, yes. Here are my Original OCs (My first ever OC didn't have a power… But she's 11, so she wouldn't be at Upper Valarius anyway >.<):
• Sunset, I think her power was turning into a Cat…?
• Sakura~Chan, I've already modified her into my modern OC Style, she's now Sakura Hayashi!
• Crystal. She is by far the most OP of my Original OCs, because she can turn info a Crystal Dragon…
Oh, yeah, and my First Ever OC: Lizzie, who is 11, probably wouldn't be a Upper Valarius, and she also doesn't have a power (yet!)
-StarryyEyed-
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hmm, i think you can use more interesting powers than that although I actually like the crystal dragon one!!
pixpickle
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-StarryyEyed- wrote:

hmm, i think you can use more interesting powers than that although I actually like the crystal dragon one!!
Yeah, these were my ORIGINAL OCs, I wasn't that imaginative back then… Actually, I was thinking of using Crystal, but what would her weakness(es) be???
I may change Sunset's power to the dream one if I were to use her… I loved that Power Idea! Hm…
-StarryyEyed-
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Aight, i'm gonna dev crystal:

POWER: CRYSTAL
Crystal can turn her body into crystals (it would be better if she didn't do the dragon thing and just crystals ^^). These crystals are much more powerful than just her bones and skin and can make it almost like she can't get injured (closest comparison: ejirou kirishima from BNHA). She can only stay in crystal form for a few minutes. She can also sharpen her hands into blades in crystal form.
PERSONALITY (idk, you can combine this with your OC if you wanna): DETERMINED, HEADSTRONG
Crystal, on the emotional front, would be hypothetically very determined, and also very headstrong. Sometime's she'll be irrational, too. She's fiercely loyal and the type of friend that gives hard love (I.E. tells you what you're doing wrong so you'll do better, forcing you to do what's best for you even if you don't want to) BUT she's still a very good friend and always there for her friends. She's not the brains of the group (avgish to lower on the intelligence font) but she's a great tank (a tank is someone who absorbs a lot of damage and is constantly in offense) and pulls everyone in her group together. It's very rare she's the one at the center of a disagreement- unless something happens which she's stubbornly against in her personal values.
APPEARANCE
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accidentally hit enter, oof,
basically she'd be on the muscular end is all i wanted to say
pixpickle
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Power is cool! Lemme run through her current Bio rn…^.^
Name: Crystal Draco
Age: 15
Power: Crystal can turn her body into crystals. These crystals are much more powerful than just her bones and skin and can make it almost like she can't get injured. She can only stay in crystal form for a few minutes. She can also sharpen her hands into blades in crystal form. (Yes, I did copy & paste it >.<)
Personality: Caring/Loyal to friends/Headstrong/Aggressive if Aggravated/Determined/The Tank of a group
Weakness: If she stays in Crystal Form for too long (Like an hour or something?), her body will become Crystal for the next day (I'm so mean… and yes, this is quite big…)
Appearance: Short white-blonde hair with Crystal Blue ends, Crystal-blue eyes, Fair skin, fairly muscular, around 5ft 7.

Like it? ^.^ Your personal for Crystal was already what her personality was xD

Last edited by pixpickle (Aug. 22, 2018 18:51:58)

-StarryyEyed-
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I don't think the weakness is neccessary, actually, having a time limit should be good enough.
pixpickle
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-StarryyEyed- wrote:

I don't think the weakness is neccessary, actually, having a time limit should be good enough.
Hmm… Ok… *bites lip* If the time limit isn't enough for a weakness, I am using my idea xD Anyway, how's the rest of her seem?
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smh i accidentally made her too similar to my OC Deri
oh well, Deri's got her own special charn
pixpickle
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-StarryyEyed- wrote:

smh i accidentally made her too similar to my OC Deri
oh well, Deri's got her own special charn
Wha???
Noo! 60 second rule!!!
pixpickle
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Hmm… I think I'm gonna put Crystal into the RP
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nvm nvm haha
pixpickle
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-StarryyEyed- wrote:

nvm nvm haha
Ok, I posted it up there… May need to wait until she's accepted until we can rp again? Unless u wanna have another one of your OCs meet Mei? We could continue that thing we started at the top with Mei and Cavin? Sorry, just brainstorming ideas for how to continue the rp, cuz I'm rlly enjoying it! ^.^ xD
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we're having that spring festival arc happening, i mean, but nO MEI AND CAVIN IS NOT A GOOD IDEA X'D MAYBE MEI SHOULD MEET MAUVE INSTEAD AND THEY ENTHUSE OVER BOOKS
pixpickle
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-StarryyEyed- wrote:

we're having that spring festival arc happening, i mean, but nO MEI AND CAVIN IS NOT A GOOD IDEA X'D MAYBE MEI SHOULD MEET MAUVE INSTEAD AND THEY ENTHUSE OVER BOOKS
Ok, now you've just made me intrigued to see what Mei & Cavin meeting would look like >:>

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