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- VintageAura
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Scratcher
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Rad Reviews: Get your projects fully reviewed in less than 24 hours! (Hiring//open).
Died
synonyms: dyed
Metaphorical usage: Little to no (visible) activity for a subjective period of time
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excerpt from the dictionary of slang
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yes i understand that was sarcasm but some people on this site do not speak english well and use it because it's the primary language of this site
synonyms: dyed
Metaphorical usage: Little to no (visible) activity for a subjective period of time
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excerpt from the dictionary of slang
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yes i understand that was sarcasm but some people on this site do not speak english well and use it because it's the primary language of this site
Last edited by VintageAura (Aug. 19, 2018 23:51:11)
- ProLabs
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Scratcher
36 posts
Rad Reviews: Get your projects fully reviewed in less than 24 hours! (Hiring//open).
Would you like to review my game please ? Twin Spheres
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/239197998/
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/239197998/
- VintageAura
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Rad Reviews: Get your projects fully reviewed in less than 24 hours! (Hiring//open).
It's a demo so…
Gameplay: Good
nice, but i think w/↑ should be automated, since otherwise it's just a bit much. Also, you can't move horizontally while jumping. I understand that it's difficult because of circle, but if you make direct shift 1/3 original and make jumping 3x original height, it'll be a nice, albeit primitive, addition.
Music: N/A
Good music but non-original so no critique.
Presentation: Poor
vector art is generally oof, and this is no exception
The balls have a thick outline (notthatbad^®)
and the background lacks depth.
But the menu is atrocious and the price indicator unintuitive (they dont appear to be connect to the buy boxes)
Gameplay: Good
nice, but i think w/↑ should be automated, since otherwise it's just a bit much. Also, you can't move horizontally while jumping. I understand that it's difficult because of circle, but if you make direct shift 1/3 original and make jumping 3x original height, it'll be a nice, albeit primitive, addition.
Music: N/A
Good music but non-original so no critique.
Presentation: Poor
vector art is generally oof, and this is no exception
The balls have a thick outline (notthatbad^®)
and the background lacks depth.
But the menu is atrocious and the price indicator unintuitive (they dont appear to be connect to the buy boxes)
- Ch3chi
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Scratcher
2 posts
Rad Reviews: Get your projects fully reviewed in less than 24 hours! (Hiring//open).
Whoops it died.
- Peaceful8
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Rad Reviews: Get your projects fully reviewed in less than 24 hours! (Hiring//open).
Now that I think about it, I may not be that great of a reviewer. I am a little un-constructive, and it requires checking out entire projects, writing a lot of stuff, and I realize that my latest ones have also been lazy. I might open an art shop instead, because I feel like that's more my speed. Best of luck creating a new shop, because I think I am going to close this. If you want to, you can invite the members of this shop too. Anyway, farewell Rad Reviews, but I hope to see all of you soon!
- VintageAura
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Scratcher
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