Flaming_Cat wrote:

Username: Flaming_Cat
Name Of Project: Pages
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/236570316/
Review:Medium
Description:Writing
Harshness:Idk
Other Notes:NONE

say [Thanks!] for (2) secs

(BTW this project beta I could add much more but im very lazy

Graphics 9/10 I mean it is a font AND you borrowed it from someone else, but it's great nonetheless! I suggest using a different character for the type indicator.
Gameplay 8/10 Not much to say here since all you do is type. It is a bit slow, but could be perfect for others (I'm just a fast typer)
Difficulty N/A I can't say anything here because technically there is no difficulty
Engagement N/A Again I can't say anything because it's a page generator
Sound 6/10 There is no sound, but I suggest maybe coding in a typewriter sound effect
Creativity 8/10 It's just a typing ‘simulator’, but it could be used for other games
Instructions 9/10 Very very clear
Storyline N/A I think you know why
Bugs/Glitches 9/10 Haven't experienced a bug yet, but it could be a problem if the type indicator turns into a letter you're typing twice in a row (e.g letter, tree, etc.)
Animation 8/10 Pretty smooth for a typewriter
Overall 81/100 Not bad, could use some work though.

If you are unhappy with this review, you can always request another one by another member. Have a nice day!

ExplosiveThingy
Taiko No Tastujin (Taiko Master)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238645304/
Bug review: Please find and fix the bug in my project.
The staff member must have played or watched videos to understand this game. Comments included inside, bug noted. Please find a way to fix it without lag.
I greatly appreciate it! If you aren't able to do this, I understand. I am not posting this for grading, but for fixing my bug. If this isn't the kind of things you do, I understand.

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

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Okay, otherwise I'll do a Custom Review.

Err… that inappropriately snipped quote was meant to be the one listed below, right?

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

sti_scratch wrote:

Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral!!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

Thanks! Just one question, I need people to specify the kind of review they want. How is that going to work out?

Don't you think the ‘this shop joined in the end because of an incomplete order’ is a bit harsh?

Oh yeah you're right, kind of harsh. Lemme change that (tbh i like to be harsh when its the truth but ill change that for the sake of Ordercentral)

And what do you mean the kind of review they want?

Y'know, Comprehensive Review, Custom Review, Short Review etc. Check on the OP.

I think everyone would want a comprehensive review… The form I put at Ordercentral is for comprehensive review.

Yeah. (Whaddya mean, inappropriately snipped?)

Snipping is only for unnecessary stuff that I will not need to be able to understand the post.

ScratchNY wrote:

Flaming_Cat wrote:

Username: Flaming_Cat
Name Of Project: Pages
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/236570316/
Review:Medium
Description:Writing
Harshness:Idk
Other Notes:NONE

say [Thanks!] for (2) secs

(BTW this project beta I could add much more but im very lazy

Graphics 9/10 I mean it is a font AND you borrowed it from someone else, but it's great nonetheless! I suggest using a different character for the type indicator.
Gameplay 8/10 Not much to say here since all you do is type. It is a bit slow, but could be perfect for others (I'm just a fast typer)
Difficulty N/A I can't say anything here because technically there is no difficulty
Engagement N/A Again I can't say anything because it's a page generator
Sound 6/10 There is no sound, but I suggest maybe coding in a typewriter sound effect
Creativity 8/10 It's just a typing ‘simulator’, but it could be used for other games
Instructions 9/10 Very very clear
Storyline N/A I think you know why
Bugs/Glitches 9/10 Haven't experienced a bug yet, but it could be a problem if the type indicator turns into a letter you're typing twice in a row (e.g letter, tree, etc.)
Animation 8/10 Pretty smooth for a typewriter
Overall 81/100 Not bad, could use some work though.

If you are unhappy with this review, you can always request another one by another member. Have a nice day!

Nice reviewing! I'd actually go with N/A for sound and a bit less for creativity, bugs, and graphics.

ExplosiveThingy wrote:

ExplosiveThingy
Taiko No Tastujin (Taiko Master)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238645304/
Bug review: Please find and fix the bug in my project.
The staff member must have played or watched videos to understand this game. Comments included inside, bug noted. Please find a way to fix it without lag.
I greatly appreciate it! If you aren't able to do this, I understand. I am not posting this for grading, but for fixing my bug. If this isn't the kind of things you do, I understand.

Ok, I saw it. I'm terrible with codes, so let's see if someone else can help you. I did look inside and it may have something to do with cloning.

ExplosiveThingy wrote:

ExplosiveThingy
Taiko No Tastujin (Taiko Master)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238645304/
Bug review: Please find and fix the bug in my project.
The staff member must have played or watched videos to understand this game. Comments included inside, bug noted. Please find a way to fix it without lag.
I greatly appreciate it! If you aren't able to do this, I understand. I am not posting this for grading, but for fixing my bug. If this isn't the kind of things you do, I understand.

I'll see what I can do.

ScratchNY wrote:

ExplosiveThingy wrote:

ExplosiveThingy
Taiko No Tastujin (Taiko Master)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238645304/
Bug review: Please find and fix the bug in my project.
The staff member must have played or watched videos to understand this game. Comments included inside, bug noted. Please find a way to fix it without lag.
I greatly appreciate it! If you aren't able to do this, I understand. I am not posting this for grading, but for fixing my bug. If this isn't the kind of things you do, I understand.

I'll see what I can do.

The only way I see you can fix this is by adding a variable that determines the number of the character but you'd have to do a lot of counting and it may cause more lag.

ScratchNY wrote:

ScratchNY wrote:

ExplosiveThingy wrote:

ExplosiveThingy
Taiko No Tastujin (Taiko Master)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238645304/
Bug review: Please find and fix the bug in my project.
The staff member must have played or watched videos to understand this game. Comments included inside, bug noted. Please find a way to fix it without lag.
I greatly appreciate it! If you aren't able to do this, I understand. I am not posting this for grading, but for fixing my bug. If this isn't the kind of things you do, I understand.

I'll see what I can do.

The only way I see you can fix this is by adding a variable that determines the number of the character but you'd have to do a lot of counting and it may cause more lag.

Okay. Thanks! I'll try making different sprites, maybe that will work.

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babump

Hey AfraidRacer, can I bump?

Oh wait.

Bumpmub

ScratchNY wrote:

Bumpmub

Thanks. You are now the official Bump Manager.

AfraidRacer wrote:

ScratchNY wrote:

-snip-

Thanks. You are now the official Bump Manager.

Yay.

Boomp.

Does NO ONE want a Review?

AfraidRacer wrote:

Does NO ONE want a Review?

Can you review my life?

ScratchNY wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

Does NO ONE want a Review?

Can you review my life?

Taken! I'll do a quick review.
0/100 your life is worthless

Username: Destroyer1727
Name of the project: Stick Magic
Link:https: Here you go.
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Two stick figures battle using magic.
Harshness: From 1 to 10 I choose 5.
Other notes: Don't include sound as 1 of the points please.
Thank you.

Destroyer1727 wrote:

Username: Destroyer1727
Name of the project: Stick Magic
Link:https: Here you go.
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Two stick figures battle using magic.
Harshness: From 1 to 10 I choose 5.
Other notes: Don't include sound as 1 of the points please.
Thank you.

Taken! Give me 2-15 hours. I'll try to do it as fast as I can.
If any of you Reviewers can do it faster, please take it. Choose story instead of sound.