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Last edited by AfraidRacer (Sept. 1, 2018 09:34:04)

superben100

Another new shop! (There's so many that are popping up recently.)

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Username: superben100
Name of the project: How to get Infinite Loves and Favorites! (Trick!)
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/235135249/
Brief Description of the project: Displays a trick the shows how to make it appear that you have more loves and favorites than you actually have.
Harshness: As harsh as you'd ordinarily be (rip it apart if you'd like !)
Other notes: None.

Criteria: Bugs & Glitches

Last edited by superben100 (July 31, 2018 18:11:07)

Hello there!
I've been a Scratcher for nine years now, and I'm always happy to help!
I'm not around too often, but I check in here from time to time.
Let me know if you need anything!
|| Probably vibing to “Try” - Lawrence ||

AfraidRacer

superben100 wrote:
Another new shop! (There's so many that are popping up recently.)
Order form

Username: superben100
Name of the project: How to get Infinite Loves and Favorites! (Trick!)
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/235135249/
Brief Description of the project: Displays a trick the shows how to make it appear that you have more loves and favorites than you actually have.
Harshness: As harsh as you'd ordinarily be (rip it apart if you'd like !)
Other notes: None.
Criteria: Bugs & Glitches
Taken! Should be done in around 12 hours.

Last edited by AfraidRacer (Aug. 1, 2018 02:13:32)

minepie7yt

Username: minepie7yt
Name of the project: taco catch
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/230317184/
Brief Description of the project none
Harshness: ?
Other notes: none

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AfraidRacer

minepie7yt wrote:
Username: minepie7yt
Name of the project: taco catch
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/230317184/
Brief Description of the project none
Harshness: ?
Other notes: none

Taken! Should be done in around 2 hours.

AfraidRacer

minepie7yt wrote:
Username: minepie7yt
Name of the project: taco catch
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/230317184/
Brief Description of the project none
Harshness: ?
Other notes: none

Graphics 4/10 Not bad, but very harsh and can be improved. Also,try using non-default sprites.
Gameplay 4/10 Nice, but some additions are required and it's and unoriginal.
Difficulty 5/10 Before the score is 25, it's good but in hard mode it's quite impossible to control.
Engagement 8/10 Very fun and makes you want to get a high score
Sound 9/10 Music totally suits the project. However, the volume is a bit too much.
Creativity 5/10 Good idea for tacos, the music really suits but gameplay need work
Instructions 7/10 Clear and simple. You could mention what hard mode does.
Storyline N/A this will be set to the average of other scores.
Bugs/Glitches 1/10 C'mon use some green flag clicked scripts! I have refresh the page every time!
Animations/Transitions 5/10 Very simple and nice
Overall 48/100 Good concept, but needs work.

Last edited by AfraidRacer (Aug. 1, 2018 12:49:22)

AfraidRacer

superben100 wrote:
Another new shop! (There's so many that are popping up recently.)
Order form

Username: superben100
Name of the project: How to get Infinite Loves and Favorites! (Trick!)
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/235135249/
Brief Description of the project: Displays a trick the shows how to make it appear that you have more loves and favorites than you actually have.
Harshness: As harsh as you'd ordinarily be (rip it apart if you'd like !)
Other notes: None.

Short Review-
Graphics 6/10 They are a bit pixelated, try using the Vector editor for resizing. Text is a bit wide and the blue background could be changed.
Sound 7/10 Good music! Maybe a sound effect when you change a slide could be done?
Creativity 5/10 It's another one of the ‘Scratch Hacks’, but it's good.
Bugs/Glitches 9/10 None found, but it's a slideshow!
Animations/Transitions 6/10 Transitions between slides and text animation would be nice.
Overall Score 66/100 Good job, but needs a bit of polish.

Last edited by AfraidRacer (Aug. 1, 2018 13:07:43)

superben100

AfraidRacer wrote:
superben100 wrote:
Another new shop! (There's so many that are popping up recently.)
Order form

Username: superben100
Name of the project: How to get Infinite Loves and Favorites! (Trick!)
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/235135249/
Brief Description of the project: Displays a trick the shows how to make it appear that you have more loves and favorites than you actually have.
Harshness: As harsh as you'd ordinarily be (rip it apart if you'd like !)
Other notes: None.

Short Review-
Graphics 6/10 They are a bit pixelated, try using the Vector editor for resizing. Text is a bit wide and the blue background could be changed.
Sound 7/10 Good music! Maybe a sound effect when you change a slide could be done?
Creativity 5/10 It's another one of the ‘Scratch Hacks’, but it's good.
Bugs/Glitches 9/10 None found, but it's a slideshow!
Animations/Transitions 6/10 Transitions between slides and text animation would be nice.
Overall Score 66/100 Good job, but needs a bit of polish.

Thanks!

Hello there!
I've been a Scratcher for nine years now, and I'm always happy to help!
I'm not around too often, but I check in here from time to time.
Let me know if you need anything!
|| Probably vibing to “Try” - Lawrence ||

AfraidRacer

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Woofless04

Username: Woofless04
Name of the project: Cliffclan Demo 1
Link: here
What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief Description of the project: It is a demo for a game I am still currently working on

Harshness: Medium (Sounds like I'm ordering a steak

)
Other notes: I am aware of faults in the writing, also the cats in the final game spend like, 5-10 minutes in Starclan so most of the game will be in places like the beginning and end.
Also if you find any bugs please tell me before you finish the review.

Oh don't worry about the door, I have door insurance.
Oh haha, I reached 200+ posts :))))))

AfraidRacer

Woofless04 wrote:
Username: Woofless04
Name of the project: Cliffclan Demo 1
Link: here
What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief Description of the project: It is a demo for a game I am still currently working on
Harshness: Medium (Sounds like I'm ordering a steak )
Other notes: I am aware of faults in the writing, also the cats in the final game spend like, 5-10 minutes in Starclan so most of the game will be in places like the beginning and end.
Also if you find any bugs please tell me before you finish the review.

I've seen the text drag a bit, but I haven't seen it fully. I'll try to do it now otherwise around 16 hours.

Woofless04

AfraidRacer wrote:
Woofless04 wrote:
Username: Woofless04
Name of the project: Cliffclan Demo 1
Link: here
What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief Description of the project: It is a demo for a game I am still currently working on
Harshness: Medium (Sounds like I'm ordering a steak )
Other notes: I am aware of faults in the writing, also the cats in the final game spend like, 5-10 minutes in Starclan so most of the game will be in places like the beginning and end.
Also if you find any bugs please tell me before you finish the review.
I've seen the text drag a bit, but I haven't seen it fully. I'll try to do it now otherwise around 16 hours.

Okay.

Oh don't worry about the door, I have door insurance.
Oh haha, I reached 200+ posts :))))))

AfraidRacer

Woofless04 wrote:
Username: Woofless04
Name of the project: Cliffclan Demo 1
Link: here
What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief Description of the project: It is a demo for a game I am still currently working on
Harshness: Medium (Sounds like I'm ordering a steak )
Other notes: I am aware of faults in the writing, also the cats in the final game spend like, 5-10 minutes in Starclan so most of the game will be in places like the beginning and end.
Also if you find any bugs please tell me before you finish the review.

Graphics 8/10 Great job! They really look good, especially the sprites.
Gameplay 7/10 I've seen the Battle demo, seems good but the WASD thing is hard to understand. I'm expecting the gameplay to be a bit like Pokemon.
Difficulty 6/10 Battle demo seems a bit unbalanced.
Engagement 5/10 It does drag on a bit, difficult to keep playing.
Sound 9/10 Music in this and battle demo is great.
Creativity Uhh, maybe 6? I have no idea about Warrior Cats.
Game feel 8/10 I love the calming music in the Starclan area, and battle music really suits.
Storyline 7/10 Definitely drags a bit, could cut it down but otherwise good. Also, maybe introduce the characters before the game because some people(me) are clueless about Warrior Cats. It was easy to follow though.
Bugs/Glitches Will be added later due to creator's request.
Animations/Transitions 9/10 Everything is animated very well, transitions are great.
Overall Score (Provisional) 65/90
Sorry it's a bit late, I got distracted with other stuff.

Last edited by AfraidRacer (Aug. 4, 2018 17:05:36)

Woofless04

AfraidRacer wrote:
*Snip*

Thanks! About that introducing characters, that will also be done in the main game as these are cats completely separate to the ones in the books

Oh don't worry about the door, I have door insurance.
Oh haha, I reached 200+ posts :))))))

AfraidRacer

Woofless04 wrote:
AfraidRacer wrote:
*Snip*
Thanks! About that introducing characters, that will also be done in the main game as these are cats completely separate to the ones in the books

Okay, Should I update the review with bugs and glitches now?

AfraidRacer

Woofless04 wrote:
Username: Woofless04
Name of the project: Cliffclan Demo 1
Link: here
What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief Description of the project: It is a demo for a game I am still currently working on
Harshness: Medium (Sounds like I'm ordering a steak )
Other notes: I am aware of faults in the writing, also the cats in the final game spend like, 5-10 minutes in Starclan so most of the game will be in places like the beginning and end.
Also if you find any bugs please tell me before you finish the review.

Cliffclan Demo 1/Battle Demo Final Review
Graphics 8/10 Great job! They really look good, especially the sprites.
Gameplay 7/10 I've seen the Battle demo, seems good but the WASD thing is hard to understand. I'm expecting the gameplay to be a bit like Pokemon.
Difficulty 6/10 Battle demo seems a bit unbalanced.
Engagement 5/10 It does drag on a bit, difficult to keep playing.
Sound 9/10 Music in this and battle demo is great.
Creativity 8/10 Characters are original, and story seems good.
Game feel 8/10 I love the calming music in the Starclan area, and battle music really suits.
Storyline 8/10 Definitely drags a bit, could cut it down but otherwise good. It was easy to follow though.
Bugs/Glitches 7/10 Fairly stable, walking can be improved.
Animations/Transitions 9/10 Everything is animated very well, transitions are great.
Overall Score 75/100

Last edited by AfraidRacer (Aug. 15, 2018 10:01:01)

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Woofless04

AfraidRacer wrote:
*snip*

Thanks! I've been working on improving the walk cycle for the final game, and seen as you didn't bring it up I seem to have ironed out the issue of people getting stuck in the walls

Thnaks (again) for responding so quickly!

Oh don't worry about the door, I have door insurance.
Oh haha, I reached 200+ posts :))))))

AfraidRacer

Woofless04 wrote:
AfraidRacer wrote:
*snip*
Thanks! I've been working on improving the walk cycle for the final game, and seen as you didn't bring it up I seem to have ironed out the issue of people getting stuck in the walls
Thnaks (again) for responding so quickly!

You're welcome! Come again soon!

CrushFruits

Username: CrushFruits -=-Duhhhhhh-=-

Name of the project: Simplistic Truth or Dare

Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/237574524

What kind of Review you want: Short Review - This is a small game

Brief Description of the project: A simple truth or dare game with a built-in editor

Harshness: Neutral

Other notes: This project does not have a variety of starting Truths and Dares so you may need to add more in the editor. Also I would prefer a separated overall score for the editor.

Thanks a lot!

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