VintageAura wrote:

AfraidRacer wrote:

Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!):Endless Runner
Controls
WAD/UpLeftRight keys to move
1/2 for volume controls
Spacebar to start the run
How harsh would you like it to be? ? I did my best! Point out what I can make solutions to, but don't discredit the good points. Also I am not great at graphics.
Length of gameplay/animation: Endless
Any other notes: please give a review after getting all upgrades! Also, each spacesuit has stat upgrades and Cosmonaut, Future Suit and Spaceship have 1 extra missile.
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/237464593/

Can't get any upgrades when i can't see what it is
Scripting: Fair
you have a very solid foundation, however the start button occasionally doesn't work, and your hide/show scripts aren't working very well (shop buttons invisible, and rocket shows the hidden asteroids (should be despawned entirely) wherever they are on the screen, which can sometimes lead to instant deaths

Gameplay: good
aside from the aforementioned issues, the gameplay is quite good. However, I feel like movement speed should scale with the meteors, thus no matter how fast they are it's based on reaction time and not movement speed.
I'd like some small changes, such as a slight lean or acceleration time when moving forwards and backwards, or something of the sort. And possibly some item powerups, like a deployable wall that can block 3 meteors, but is small and can't move, or a turret that destroys the meteor nearest to you once every 1/2 seconds. I feel like that would make the gameplay much more unique, and give it it's own flair. You could also do what they did in Jetpack Joyride, where these powerups have certain named combinations, maybe you can only have 2-3 types spawn in each game.

Audio: Fair
Are they original? If not, give credit to the creators, and if it's copyrighted music, check to see if it's under fair used (small/medium edits should let you use them without much difficulty)

Graphics: N/A
removed at author's request

VintageAura wrote:

npjensen wrote:

Project name and link: Vimaye01's Intro Order (just want to see if you guys think it is good enough for him)
Type: Intro
Other: I am Equidox (No need to thank me ) Okay, um, might lag just a bit, so the timing and synchronicity might be off by a bit… But or else, it should run pretty smoothly.

Give credit to Lapachelle for Lunar Abyss

Other than that pretty solid, that sort of criticism is one of my bad points. However, Vimaye01 already said he liked it, so I'd say it's acceptable, although the white background when the logo stabilized probably needs to be overhauled

Darter15 wrote:

Peaceful8 wrote:

Darter15 wrote:

Request

Review

Wow, phosphorus was way worse than I thought! Can you try https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/236878421/ ?

VintageAura wrote:

@AfraidRacer
@npjensen Lchavasse. Lapachelle is a character from a book I read, and both the names sound kind of foreign - switched names on accident.

npjensen wrote:

VintageAura wrote:

@AfraidRacer
@npjensen Lchavasse. Lapachelle is a character from a book I read, and both the names sound kind of foreign - switched names on accident.

I did - Check the notes and credit section on the second line

oh I see I misspelled it, that's all

VintageAura wrote:

this is dead and it makes me really sad

• Saws are broken
  
• Block selection (and the sorting method) are unintuitive, IMO
  
• Blocks are randomly unable to be placed
  
• Horizontal movement moves the placed blocks themselves, neither the ghost nor the cursor
  
• Auto-changing textures isn't included (i.e. Top block only has grass, circle of grass if not connected to any other blocks, etc.)
  
• curved block is useless and commonly crashes games
  
• Theme button needs to be hit twice to change
  

SkyClan480 wrote:

What do you want to be in small text by you: super fast reviews
Types of project(s) you'll review: anything but games

Ch3chi wrote:

First of all! I LOVE THIS IDEA! And I would like you to join you guys! It would be fun to review Art! I could be the one to go to for art! Hope you guys accept! Also, could you review my OLD account? It's @Neakaa if you wish, you can choose just one. A dtae should be nice!

Peaceful8 wrote:

SkyClan480 wrote:

What do you want to be in small text by you: super fast reviews
Types of project(s) you'll review: anything but games

Ch3chi wrote:

First of all! I LOVE THIS IDEA! And I would like you to join you guys! It would be fun to review Art! I could be the one to go to for art! Hope you guys accept! Also, could you review my OLD account? It's @Neakaa if you wish, you can choose just one. A dtae should be nice!

Both accepted. Now you are on the first post, congratulations! Got distracted on other games, so this died because I died, but I'll try to revive it.