Phbug's WoF Collab story Discussion Thread

NinjaChicken236

phbug wrote:
Hold on, So, about the Translator thing. So, Anyone who's been looking at my theories from a while back may or may not be familiar with my concept of WoF taking place in Earth's future. That evidence is discussed here in kind of a sloppy way. In my story for the mag, First Contact, I'm explaining how the humans got to Pyrrhia, and the long and short of it is that it's this human colonization effort. However, the humans do, at some point, build a translator. What say you guys?

WHOA, that's good, and I agree. YES, A LONG-LOST HUMAN TRANSLATOR FROM THE PAST THAT IS HIDING IN A STONEWING CAVE! (Random Idea)

phbug

NinjaChicken236 wrote:
phbug wrote:
Hold on, So, about the Translator thing. So, Anyone who's been looking at my theories from a while back may or may not be familiar with my concept of WoF taking place in Earth's future. That evidence is discussed here in kind of a sloppy way. In my story for the mag, First Contact, I'm explaining how the humans got to Pyrrhia, and the long and short of it is that it's this human colonization effort. However, the humans do, at some point, build a translator. What say you guys?
WHOA, that's good, and I agree. YES, A LONG-LOST HUMAN TRANSLATOR FROM THE PAST THAT IS HIDING IN A STONEWING CAVE! (Random Idea)

Possibly, I just kinda figured that the human would already have the translator. And I've totally spoiled FC by this point.

Well, I should probably get back to work. If I stop rowing for too long, the slave ship starts going around in circles.

phbug

Oh, yeah, and a definite NO HYBRIDS rule also. No hybrids, no Animus, no Royalty. NORMAL DRAGONS, PEOPLE!

Well, I should probably get back to work. If I stop rowing for too long, the slave ship starts going around in circles.

NinjaChicken236

phbug wrote:
Oh, yeah, and a definite NO HYBRIDS rule also. No hybrids, no Animus, no Royalty. NORMAL DRAGONS, PEOPLE!

No ROYALTY? So…it's just a bunch of dragons living together? There's no order or rules? Or do they have a leader, just not Royalty? Just a concern…

phbug

NinjaChicken236 wrote:
phbug wrote:
Oh, yeah, and a definite NO HYBRIDS rule also. No hybrids, no Animus, no Royalty. NORMAL DRAGONS, PEOPLE!
No ROYALTY? So…it's just a bunch of dragons living together? There's no order or rules? Or do they have a leader, just not Royalty? Just a concern…

No, I just mean none of the main characters can be royalty. Basically, none of our main characters can be a prince or princess or king or queen. Royalty can and does exist, but none of our characters have noble blood.

Well, I should probably get back to work. If I stop rowing for too long, the slave ship starts going around in circles.

eragon0207

phbug wrote:
Hold on, So, about the Translator thing. So, Anyone who's been looking at my theories from a while back may or may not be familiar with my concept of WoF taking place in Earth's future. That evidence is discussed here in kind of a sloppy way. In my story for the mag, First Contact, I'm explaining how the humans got to Pyrrhia, and the long and short of it is that it's this human colonization effort. However, the humans do, at some point, build a translator. What say you guys?

Okay, so it's not animus touched and the scavengers built it themselves? I like that. It suggests that scavengers are around the same if not a higher intelligence level than the dragons. This would avoid a lot of misunderstandings and awkward scenarios. I agree.

-Revive-

eragon0207 wrote:
For this ^ ( I don't want to quote whole thing again. ) Main conflict ideas anyone?

We're working on character ideas right now, before we start on story.

This is -Revive-, Over and out.

-Revive-

eragon0207 wrote:
phbug wrote:
Hold on, So, about the Translator thing. So, Anyone who's been looking at my theories from a while back may or may not be familiar with my concept of WoF taking place in Earth's future. That evidence is discussed here in kind of a sloppy way. In my story for the mag, First Contact, I'm explaining how the humans got to Pyrrhia, and the long and short of it is that it's this human colonization effort. However, the humans do, at some point, build a translator. What say you guys?
Okay, so it's not animus touched and the scavengers built it themselves? I like that. It suggests that scavengers are around the same if not a higher intelligence level than the dragons. This would avoid a lot of misunderstandings and awkward scenarios. I agree.

Yeah.

This is -Revive-, Over and out.

-Revive-

Okay, so potential names here: which ones does everyone like?

StoneWing names:
~Crevice
~Grotto
~Ravine
~Cobblestone
~Bedrock
~Stalagmites
IceWing names
~ Aurora
~ Blizzard
~ Caribou
~ Hail
~ Tundra
~ Polar
~ Taiga
~Frostbite
~Chill
~Seal
NightWing Names
~Nightmare
~Longclaw
~Nightfinder

This is -Revive-, Over and out.

09penguin

Wow, I'm surprised you guys like my idea so much! Thanks!

Penguin out

phbug

-Revive- wrote:
Okay, so potential names here: which ones does everyone like?

StoneWing names:
~Crevice
~Grotto
~Ravine
~Cobblestone
~Bedrock
~Stalagmites
IceWing names
~ Aurora
~ Blizzard
~ Caribou
~ Hail
~ Tundra
~ Polar
~ Taiga
~Frostbite
~Chill
~Seal
NightWing Names
~Nightmare
~Longclaw
~Nightfinder

I've bolded my favorites

Well, I should probably get back to work. If I stop rowing for too long, the slave ship starts going around in circles.

NinjaChicken236

phbug wrote:
-Revive- wrote:
Okay, so potential names here: which ones does everyone like?

StoneWing names:
~Crevice
~Grotto
~Ravine
~Cobblestone
~Bedrock
~Stalagmites
IceWing names
~ Aurora
~ Blizzard
~ Caribou
~ Hail
~ Tundra
~ Polar
~ Taiga
~Frostbite
~Chill
~Seal
NightWing Names
~Nightmare
~Longclaw
~Nightfinder
I've bolded MY favorites

-Revive-

So, characters so far:

StoneWing
IceWing
NightWing
Scavenger.

This is -Revive-, Over and out.

NinjaChicken236

SCAVENGER NAME IDEAS:
Girls
Hazel
Berry
Laurel
Maple
Boys
Jay
Rust
Leaf
Sparrow

phbug

NinjaChicken236 wrote:
SCAVENGER NAME IDEAS:
Girls
Hazel
Berry
Laurel
Maple
Boys
Jay
Rust
Leaf
Sparrow

I vote we change Sparrow to Sparrowhawk. But keep it.

It's a reference to something I talk about in the WoF mag theory.

Well, I should probably get back to work. If I stop rowing for too long, the slave ship starts going around in circles.

eragon0207

phbug wrote:
-Revive- wrote:
Okay, so potential names here: which ones does everyone like?

StoneWing names:
~Crevice
~Grotto
~Ravine
~Cobblestone
~Bedrock
~Stalagmites
IceWing names
~ Aurora
~ Blizzard
~ Caribou
~ Hail
~ Tundra
~ Polar
~ Taiga
~Frostbite
~Chill
~Seal
NightWing Names
~Nightmare
~Longclaw
~Nightfinder
I've bolded my favorites

Yes, my favorite StoneWing's are also Grotto/Crevice. Favorite IceWing's Caribou, Taiga, or Aurora. NightWing . . . *awkward silence*Scavengar, Hazel/Aspen or Sparrow.

I think we should do Male Scavenger and IceWing, Female NightWing and StoneWing. In this case, maybe Sparrow and Taiga/Caribou. Then Grotto for female StoneWing?

Okay, so: StoneWings are a long-lost tribe that nobody remembers. And either no scrolls, or only scrolls that were destroyed or something had any account of them. FOR WHEN THE STONEWINGS ARE DISCOVERED Do we want the IceWing/NightWing to have known each other before? What do we want the circumstance between them to be when they fall in? Hate each other, are OK, can find peace? As for the StoneWing's personality, I think she she should be frightened when she finds the scavengar/dragons that have fallen down. I think she should be smart, quite, kind of stubborn, and not made easily. That way she won't blab to other StoneWings about the dragons, but she'll also stand up to them. Possible conversation example:
Crevice/Grotto: *Shriek* “Who are you?” ( Worriedly, more as if she'll get in trouble than the other StoneWing's will get in trouble. )

Taiga/Caribou: "The better question is what are you?“

Crevice/Grotto: ”I could ask the same question, no one like you has been reported in centuries!“

NightWing: ”Calm down, my head already hurts.“

Crevice/Grotto: She sees Sparrow/Sparrowhawk and walks over. ”A scavengar? I didn't think they were real.“ She pokes Sparrow in the chest.

Sparrow: ”I can talk you know."

Or something, idk. Curious. I didn't illustrate it well how I was thinking.

phbug

For above: ^^ Possibly. I think that the NightWing and IceWing should be okay, but not like, best friends or anything. Basically, for some comedic tension between the two. No romance though. Can we just get that out of the way now? NO ROMANCE?

Well, I should probably get back to work. If I stop rowing for too long, the slave ship starts going around in circles.

-Revive-

phbug wrote:
For above: ^^ Possibly. I think that the NightWing and IceWing should be okay, but not like, best friends or anything. Basically, for some comedic tension between the two. No romance though. Can we just get that out of the way now? NO ROMANCE?

Yes. NO ROMANCE. I cannot write love stories. XD

This is -Revive-, Over and out.

NinjaChicken236

-Revive- wrote:
phbug wrote:
For above: ^^ Possibly. I think that the NightWing and IceWing should be okay, but not like, best friends or anything. Basically, for some comedic tension between the two. No romance though. Can we just get that out of the way now? NO ROMANCE?
Yes. NO ROMANCE. I cannot write love stories. XD

PLEASE, NO ROMANCE. TOTALLY AGREE.

09penguin

NinjaChicken236 wrote:
-Revive- wrote:
phbug wrote:
For above: ^^ Possibly. I think that the NightWing and IceWing should be okay, but not like, best friends or anything. Basically, for some comedic tension between the two. No romance though. Can we just get that out of the way now? NO ROMANCE?
Yes. NO ROMANCE. I cannot write love stories. XD
PLEASE, NO ROMANCE. TOTALLY AGREE.

YES NO ROMANCE OR I WILL BARF ALL OVER MY COMPOOTER

Penguin out

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