orochi67 wrote:

Voice Line Audtitions

Korra: Zairi was the most powerful waterbender there ever was. Her bloodbending was so amazing that she could not only control bodies, she could control minds. (emphasis on minds) She was feared all over the land, even animals had learned she could be a possible threat to them. Her bloodbending was unstoppable, so powerful, she had went by the name as the Late Avatar. Even though she was only a waterbender, people considered her legendary. And soon, her bounty rose, rose, and kept going higher and higher. More and more people came in an attempt to capture her, because her bounty was so high. But all had failed the bounty capture. People sought out her power, so they attempted to extract her waterbending into their own.

Asami: But all things have to end some time. Zairi battled Avatar Wan's great power, but could not beat him. She was never seen again for over 10,000 years.

Tolan: What happened then?

Ree: Yeah, tell us!

[Korra gazed into the shining sky.]

Korra: Okay then, but only if you want to.

Tolan: I do!

Ree: I do more!

[Going into flashback mode for the story]

[Zairi was weak and worn out from her battle with Avatar Wan. She wandered around wearily, hoping to find food and/or shelter. She was close to collapsing, before she had clenched to a nearby tree.]

Zairi: I could've won… If only, i hadn't hesitated… for the final hit. I could have won. [She said wearily.]

[She stared at her free hand.]

Zairi: Why did i hesitate? Why couldn't i do it! [She slammed her hand against the tree.] I thought i was strong enough… I guess i could have been wrong. Is this, the end? The end for me?! I could've ruled every kingdom ever to exist… [She chuckled, then look up at the sky] Well, i guess that opportunity is over for me. As well as my life.

[Zairi passed out and fell to the ground.]

KorraTheOne wrote:

orochi67 wrote:

Voice Line Audtitions

Korra: Zairi was the most powerful waterbender there ever was. Her bloodbending was so amazing that she could not only control bodies, she could control minds. (emphasis on minds) She was feared all over the land, even animals had learned she could be a possible threat to them. Her bloodbending was unstoppable, so powerful, she had went by the name as the Late Avatar. Even though she was only a waterbender, people considered her legendary. And soon, her bounty rose, rose, and kept going higher and higher. More and more people came in an attempt to capture her, because her bounty was so high. But all had failed the bounty capture. People sought out her power, so they attempted to extract her waterbending into their own.

Asami: But all things have to end some time. Zairi battled Avatar Wan's great power, but could not beat him. She was never seen again for over 10,000 years.

Tolan: What happened then?

Ree: Yeah, tell us!

[Korra gazed into the shining sky.]

Korra: Okay then, but only if you want to.

Tolan: I do!

Ree: I do more!

[Going into flashback mode for the story]

[Zairi was weak and worn out from her battle with Avatar Wan. She wandered around wearily, hoping to find food and/or shelter. She was close to collapsing, before she had clenched to a nearby tree.]

Zairi: I could've won… If only, i hadn't hesitated… for the final hit. I could have won. [She said wearily.]

[She stared at her free hand.]

Zairi: Why did i hesitate? Why couldn't i do it! [She slammed her hand against the tree.] I thought i was strong enough… I guess i could have been wrong. Is this, the end? The end for me?! I could've ruled every kingdom ever to exist… [She chuckled, then look up at the sky] Well, i guess that opportunity is over for me. As well as my life.

[Zairi passed out and fell to the ground.]

Yay great idea <3 Maybe we should have Zairi… i dunno… dying or something in that scene..? While he says all of that. Maybe he slammed his hand against the tree that raava was captured in (idk how to spell it).

orochi67 wrote:

KorraTheOne wrote:

orochi67 wrote:

Voice Line Audtitions

Korra: Zairi was the most powerful waterbender there ever was. Her bloodbending was so amazing that she could not only control bodies, she could control minds. (emphasis on minds) She was feared all over the land, even animals had learned she could be a possible threat to them. Her bloodbending was unstoppable, so powerful, she had went by the name as the Late Avatar. Even though she was only a waterbender, people considered her legendary. And soon, her bounty rose, rose, and kept going higher and higher. More and more people came in an attempt to capture her, because her bounty was so high. But all had failed the bounty capture. People sought out her power, so they attempted to extract her waterbending into their own.

Asami: But all things have to end some time. Zairi battled Avatar Wan's great power, but could not beat him. She was never seen again for over 10,000 years.

Tolan: What happened then?

Ree: Yeah, tell us!

[Korra gazed into the shining sky.]

Korra: Okay then, but only if you want to.

Tolan: I do!

Ree: I do more!

[Going into flashback mode for the story]

[Zairi was weak and worn out from her battle with Avatar Wan. She wandered around wearily, hoping to find food and/or shelter. She was close to collapsing, before she had clenched to a nearby tree.]

Zairi: I could've won… If only, i hadn't hesitated… for the final hit. I could have won. [She said wearily.]

[She stared at her free hand.]

Zairi: Why did i hesitate? Why couldn't i do it! [She slammed her hand against the tree.] I thought i was strong enough… I guess i could have been wrong. Is this, the end? The end for me?! I could've ruled every kingdom ever to exist… [She chuckled, then look up at the sky] Well, i guess that opportunity is over for me. As well as my life.

[Zairi passed out and fell to the ground.]

Yay great idea <3 Maybe we should have Zairi… i dunno… dying or something in that scene..? While he says all of that. Maybe he slammed his hand against the tree that raava was captured in (idk how to spell it).

Ooh lala, never thought of that.

makorra42 wrote:

orochi67 wrote:

KorraTheOne wrote:

orochi67 wrote:

Voice Line Audtitions

Korra: Zairi was the most powerful waterbender there ever was. Her bloodbending was so amazing that she could not only control bodies, she could control minds. (emphasis on minds) She was feared all over the land, even animals had learned she could be a possible threat to them. Her bloodbending was unstoppable, so powerful, she had went by the name as the Late Avatar. Even though she was only a waterbender, people considered her legendary. And soon, her bounty rose, rose, and kept going higher and higher. More and more people came in an attempt to capture her, because her bounty was so high. But all had failed the bounty capture. People sought out her power, so they attempted to extract her waterbending into their own.

Asami: But all things have to end some time. Zairi battled Avatar Wan's great power, but could not beat him. She was never seen again for over 10,000 years.

Tolan: What happened then?

Ree: Yeah, tell us!

[Korra gazed into the shining sky.]

Korra: Okay then, but only if you want to.

Tolan: I do!

Ree: I do more!

[Going into flashback mode for the story]

[Zairi was weak and worn out from her battle with Avatar Wan. She wandered around wearily, hoping to find food and/or shelter. She was close to collapsing, before she had clenched to a nearby tree.]

Zairi: I could've won… If only, i hadn't hesitated… for the final hit. I could have won. [She said wearily.]

[She stared at her free hand.]

Zairi: Why did i hesitate? Why couldn't i do it! [She slammed her hand against the tree.] I thought i was strong enough… I guess i could have been wrong. Is this, the end? The end for me?! I could've ruled every kingdom ever to exist… [She chuckled, then look up at the sky] Well, i guess that opportunity is over for me. As well as my life.

[Zairi passed out and fell to the ground.]

Yay great idea <3 Maybe we should have Zairi… i dunno… dying or something in that scene..? While he says all of that. Maybe he slammed his hand against the tree that raava was captured in (idk how to spell it).

Ooh lala, never thought of that.

I agree with that. It’ll give some dramatics to the whole thing more ya know

makorra42 wrote:

Ok, so just to be clear, can someone walk me through everything so that it’s all in order.

orochi67 wrote:

makorra42 wrote:

Ok, so just to be clear, can someone walk me through everything so that it’s all in order.

Whaddya mean? “walk you through everything?” There isn't much to walk you through…

makorra42 wrote:

orochi67 wrote:

makorra42 wrote:

Ok, so just to be clear, can someone walk me through everything so that it’s all in order.

Whaddya mean? “walk you through everything?” There isn't much to walk you through…

I meant like what we have of the plot so far so then we can go from there

orochi67 wrote:

makorra42 wrote:

orochi67 wrote:

makorra42 wrote:

Ok, so just to be clear, can someone walk me through everything so that it’s all in order.

Whaddya mean? “walk you through everything?” There isn't much to walk you through…

I meant like what we have of the plot so far so then we can go from there

Ohh. Oki. So, Korra told the tale of Zairi (the antagonist) to Tolan, and Ree (the waterbending and firebending children she and Asami adopted). (Flashback to tell the tale.) Zairi had been weakened by Avatar Wan after her huge battle with him and regretted hesistating for the final hit that could have finished him. She nearly collapsed after escaping and hit the same tree that Raava was trapped inside without knowing. Then Zairi had noticed that she hit the tree Raava was trapped inside right before passing out. Then she wakes up in the infirmary of a rebel base. Then there is a girl sitting next to her, explaining she shouldn't move around too much since she passed out from loosing too much blood, and the girl reveals her name to be Takei. So Zairi says she will stay on one condition: She got something to eat. And so she did. I'm still working on the script right now.

KorraTheOne wrote:

tasmaniantasmin wrote:

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Maybe 2 years.
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Script writer
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I write scripts for my school plays.
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Awesome! Please answer these questions, and then you can officially become a script writer!
1. What are a few ideas you have for the plot?
2.Can you write a short script for one of the scenes in the plot?
3.How far are you in the Legend Of Korra? (Which episode?)
4.Describe ESKA in your own words…
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