ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

Sunshine_the_Rainbow wrote:

Yaya, FIRST!! Maybe. I'll ask one of my friends, yeah. Um… here they are, you can choose which one should vote on yours: @PaintedGalaxy (we pretend like we know each other, but we don't, but she'd do it xP), @IcestarTheWarrior, or @Bluesky_the_Warrior. I think Icestar would probably do it most willingly but I'm not sure xPP Yea, I'm biased. a LOTTT.
I'm going to continue too ;-)

Um, I'm fine with any one of them heh. xD (or you could just give them our top ten and then ask them where my story should go. So they'd either kick out mine or one of thee others heh.)

Yeah! Icestar said she'd do it, but she needs Florafeather's first, so it'll probably take some time

This looks like some kind of contest, perhaps?

Probably a better fit for the Collaboration section - I'll move it over there for you.

Hey folks, when rating entries, its important to be constructive. Maybe you could use something like “Needs Improvement” rather than “Terrible”? Anyways, if you think something can be better, then it would be good idea to say something positive about it and then offer advice on how it can improve.

Sunshine_the_Rainbow wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

Sunshine_the_Rainbow wrote:

Yaya, FIRST!! Maybe. I'll ask one of my friends, yeah. Um… here they are, you can choose which one should vote on yours: @PaintedGalaxy (we pretend like we know each other, but we don't, but she'd do it xP), @IcestarTheWarrior, or @Bluesky_the_Warrior. I think Icestar would probably do it most willingly but I'm not sure xPP Yea, I'm biased. a LOTTT.
I'm going to continue too ;-)

Um, I'm fine with any one of them heh. xD (or you could just give them our top ten and then ask them where my story should go. So they'd either kick out mine or one of thee others heh.)

Yeah! Icestar said she'd do it, but she needs Florafeather's first, so it'll probably take some time

No prob!

joshuaho wrote:

Hey folks, when rating entries, its important to be constructive. Maybe you could use something like “Needs Improvement” rather than “Terrible”? Anyways, if you think something can be better, then it would be good idea to say something positive about it and then offer advice on how it can improve.

Yeah, I understand what you mean but once we share these results people will be asking how they could have improved their entry and we’ll tell them then-in my opinion it’s much easier giving the people advice who really care about improving their writing. There’s so many entries we just won’t be able to give all of them individual feedback anyway… at least not in the time we have. We basically just needed to figure the top 10… of course there is something good about every story but we’re hoping none of the contestants will see this and will end the discussion as soon as possible. We’re just being the brutally honest people we are, hehe… but yeah, in the results we’ll add the better parts about the entries, including everything you said (basically I was just too lazy to write one good part about every single entry xP)

Kk, we have a few new entries:
https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/288315/?page=1#post-2953023
and https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/288384/?page=1#post-2953420 by @-Bbored-

And here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/195902347/

And another: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/176674635/#fullscreen

(I think that's all of the newer ones. If not, you could maybe check the remixes. Oh yeah, and have you read ALL of the entries yet?? Whoa. Some of these might be Top 10, I don't know because I haven't read them yet)

Ooookay. Here's the current statistics, I guess, but they're going to change because I haven't judged everyone's yet.


1st) @Florafeather's Writing Scrapbook
2nd) @ForeverAnAuthor's Darkness Within (it's going to change because my friends aren't finished yet)
3rd) @Cinnamon105’s ‘Writing Competition! remix’
4th) @Spamzie’s My True Friend
5th) @-OryumiCat-’s memory lane
6th) @TheChief861’s How the Universe Will (Not) Ultimately End | Part 1
7th) @Cinderpelt3303
8th) @TheBrokenMusicBox’s ‘Writing Competition! remix’
9th) @BlackCatKitten’s Arisu the sixth
10th) @anolecatcher's Will We Need This, Dad?

And I'm assuming there's going to be more. Tell me if this isn't accurate tho!

Okay, so @-Bbored-'s entry is REALLY good (in my opinion, at least). I think it should go on the Top 10 list.

But I'm far from finishing reading all the entries, so maybe not.

So here's my Top 10! It's quite similar to yours, but not exactly the same. I'm excluding yours since Icestar's judging that. (Couldn't ask Bluesky, she's biased too. She hates you because of Newt, everything she connects with Newt…yeah, whatever. No, jk, she doesn't, but she just can't get over it)
The Honorable Mentions are the Top 10 excluding the first 3
Do you want to know where I'd put you?
Well, I don't know.
I'm also just giving you a Top 10.
I mean, all of the first 3 are basically the same.
Amazing.
I think there should be thousands of 3rd places.
Ohh well…

1st Place: Florafeather
2nd Place: ExplosiveThingy
3rd Place: -Bbored-
Honorable Mentions:
4th Place: Cinnamon105
5th Place: The-Book-Worm
6th Place: ladedaland
7th Place: -OryumiCat-
8th Place: anolecatcher
9th Place: Spamzie
10th Place: KayKooKah

Here's another entry! https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/195902347/ I place it #4, and I update my list:

4th place: This
5th place: Cinnamon105
6th Place: ladedaland
7th Place: anolecatcher
8th Place: Spamzie
9th Place: -OryumiCat-
10th Place: KayKooKah/The-Book-Worm

Okay, you know what, gimme another day. Tomorrow I'll be free to start looking through the new entries. xD

YES BUT TWO OF THE NEW ENTRIES ARE…HORROR-ISH!

(I love them so much)

(But I'm not giving them higher scores because of that)

(But still)

(They're awesome)

(Also YOU HAVE ANOTHER MONTH YOU DON'T NEED TO RUSH )

(Oh, I already posted that newest on the list before)

(I should stop using brackets)

@Florafeather
@Liz314159265’s Beware Forswear
@-Bbored-’s The Lost Twin: Part One and Two
@Cinderpelt3303
@-OryumiCat-’s memory lane
@TheChief861’s How the Universe Will (Not) Ultimately End | Part 1
@Cinnamon105’s ‘Writing Competition! remix’
@Spamzie’s My True Friend
@TheBrokenMusicBox’s ‘Writing Competition! remix’
@BlackCatKitten’s Arisu the sixth


WOOOWWW I managed to come up with ten!! #Celebrate

So then the final one would be (I mean, we're still getting entries, but we'll update it then. ALSO Icestar should be finished soon.)
I averaged them.
The fewer points the higher up you are.
Florafeather averaged: 1 point
Liz314159265 averaged: 2.5 points
-Bbored- averaged: 2.5 points
Cinnamon105 averaged: 6
-OryumiCat- averaged: 7
Spamzie averaged: 8

And here's the list I'd make if I were to kind of mix our two together. THIS IS NOT INCLUDING YOUR ENTRY xD
1st Place: @Florafeather
2nd Place: @Liz314159265 or @-Bbored-
3rd Place: @Liz314159265 or @-Bbored-
4th Place: @Cinnamon105
5th Place: @TheBrokenMusicBox
6th Place: @-OryumiCat-
7th Place:@ExplosiveThingy
8th Place: @Spamzie

And then we each decide one more that should go on the list I think I'll put mine first (9th) though since I've taken more of your ideas than mine xP Sorry!

Okay, no prob!

Great! - Icestar should be finished today, so then I'll post her answer. You'll probably be on the Top 10 list though (if I were to put you on you'd DEFINITELY be among the Top 5)
Then my 9th Place person is ladedaland.

Okie and thanks!

Hey, could we change it? (Instead of TheBrokenMusicBox, anolecatcher, and then switch the positions?)

Sunshine_the_Rainbow wrote:

Hey, could we change it? (Instead of TheBrokenMusicBox, anolecatcher, and then switch the positions?)

Hm? I'm fine with anything lol. xD

oof i am offended that was one chapter of my story