XxThe_Black_FoxX wrote:

In response to @Spycapt

Very nice!!! Looking great so far!

CoolDawg5000 wrote:

(It's 2:30 A.M., our setting, early November, a ceiling-lit small sleeping quarters. We see a child, browsing the forums of Scratch… Let us watch what happens)

*Sounds of repeated clicking*
?: It's been a long d-… wha- what's this?
*Notices a topic for “Sonic Overdrive”*
?: This is a thing? For how long? *Checks the datebar* October… 28th?! After all these {what you read next will be a large exaggeration} years of waiting! The Sonic Overdrive Topic is finally here!
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I was pretty excited when I first noticed this collab was open, and I'd be willing to join.
As a ticket, I pay my fee to enter with these:
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For a demonstration of my Sonic the Hedgehog art, check this link below:

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/164061688/
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For a look at my current coding skills, head here for my best example:

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/183172135/
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I am applying for a job as an artist and scriptwriter. Just scriptwriter would be fine though.

Here is my original script I used to get into the first topic:

https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/213614/?page=366 - Post #7,316. (About a little more than half-way through the page)

I hope I am considered. Good day, or night, or whenever you read this @Spycapt54.
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[Just a note, I was a scriptwriter for the original STA cast.]

Spycapt54 wrote:

Alright, I procrastinated typing this up for far too long:
-My current idea for the pilot but it's not complete yet, so I'll need help with the writing because this is a collab-
Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles are in Green Hill, crouched side-by-side in a starting position. Sonic looks left and right towards Tails and Knuckles, respectively.
Sonic: Ready? *brief pause* Go!
The three take off in separate directions, we then see Sonic (from the side) go into a spindash and jumping off of a slope, leading him to a bunch of springs. He lands and dashes though a loop and onto a Zip-Line. He noitces Tails by his side, flying.
Sonic: Hey, no fair!
Tails: But you're using a Zip-Line.
Sonic: Ugh, you got me.
Sonic leaps from the Zip-Line and dashes up to a rock shaped like a Goal Ring.
Sonic: I win!
Tails: I didn't expect any less from you, Sonic. What should we do next?
Sonic: *looking around* I dunno. *sees something* Wait, what's that?
Camera changes and we see Sonic and Tails looking out over a cliff.
Tails: Looks like Dr. Eggman and his robots. What should we do, Sonic?
Sonic: Only one thing to do!
'Sonic jumps to the land below, landing on an Egg Pawn in the process. The other robots turn towards Sonic and proceed to attack. Sonic fends them off with a Sweeping Kick and a Head Spin (the break dance move). Sonic then jumps onto an animal capsule.
Sonic: Game over, Egghead.
The dust clears and Dr. Eggman, Orbot, and Cubot are seen in complete shock. The doctor realizes what happened after he notices Sonic.
Dr. Eggman: You little, you little! *Sonic causally leans on the side of the Eggmobile* I've been working hard on that!
Sonic: Hard work? Looks like your robots were doing all the work.
Eggman: If you had an empire, you would understand. Now hold still.
Sonic: What's that? I can't hear you. *Sonic jumps and kicks the blaster out of Eggman's hand and then ;ands another kick the the Eggmobile, sending Eggman, Orbot, Cubot, and the Eggmbile flying*
Tails flies down and lands next to Sonic on the capsule.
Tails: You did it, Sonic!
Sonic: All in a day's work.
Sounds of chirping are heard from below. It's the Flickies Sonic rescued.
Sonic: *looks at the animals* No need to thank me, I'll always be around to help. Or one of my friends, at least.
The Flickies happily jump up and down and cheer for Sonic.
Tails: Um, Sonic, what happened to Knuckles?
???: *from above* What are you guys doing down here? *camera pans up and we see the owner of the voice is Knuckles* The finish line is up here. I guess I'm the winner this time, right?
Sonic and Tails are seen from the front with a look of exasperation/surprise, Anime style. We then see Knuckles land in front of the two.
Tails: Not necessarily, we just had some trouble with Dr. Eggman.
Knuckles: If I knew there was a battle, I would have gotten here much faster! Don't leave me out on the next one, alright?
Sonic and Tails look and each other, shrugs, and turn back to Knuckles.
Sonic: We'll try if you're in the area.
Knuckles: Fair enough.
The screen fades out and we see Dr. Eggman in his fortress, sitting in his chair at the computer room.
Dr. Eggman: That insolent hedgehog and his rodent friends always beat me! I've tried nearly everything and none of my plans have succeeded.
Orbot: Perhaps you need to-
Dr. Eggman: Silence!
Eggman picks up a rabbit and begins to look at it.
Dr. Eggman: Perhaps, it's my power source. These tiny animals lack of intelligence and strength might just be leading to my plans failing. Maybe it's time to work on a bigger, more malicious scale. Orbot, Cubot! round up the troops, we've got some upgrades to do!
As Dr. Eggman finishes that sentence, the rabbit bites Dr. Eggman with him yelling “ouch” in response and runs away.
Dr. Eggman: I'll have no need for those filthy woodland rodents in due time…
The screen fades to black. Meanwhile, Cream and Cheese are playing in the garden outside their cottage while Vanilla is gardening. Cream and Cheese are overcome with a shadow and stop in their tracks, looking up in shock. The shadow turns out to be Eggman in his Eggmobile.
Dr. Eggman: Hello sweet Cream. I'll need you and your Chao to step aside, please.
Cream and Cheese are cowering in fear.
Cream *stammering in fear*: Mr. Eggman, please don't hurt us.
Dr. Eggman: I'm not going to hurt any of you, I just need to “borrow” something.
He flies over the where Vanilla is.
Dr. Eggman: Hello, Miss Rabbit
The screen fades to black once again. We now see Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles walking down a path. Sonic finishes the last bite of his Chili Dog.
Sonic: Today's been a good day.
Tails: I think we should be heading back home now.
Suddenly, Cream and Cheese run up to the trio, panicked.
Cream: Mr. Sonic, Mr. Tails, help!
Cheese: Chao, Chao
Knuckles: What about me?
Sonic: What happened Cream?
Cream: That meanie Eggman took mama.
Tails: Do you know why?
Cream: H-he was t-talking about having bigger fish to f-fry. But mama isn't a fish.
Tails: That's just a figure of speech. He isn't going to fry you mother.
Sonic: There's no time to waste here! Who know what kind of experiments Eggman has in store for Miss Vanilla.
Tails: Right, let's go! Cream, Cheese why don't you come along and help us out?
Cream and Cheese perk up.
Cream: I would love to!
Cheese: Chao!
Knuckles: What about me?
Sonic, Tails, Cream, and Cheese head off with Knuckles trailing behind.
That's all I have so far. I'm not much of a details person, but I tried to throw in a few small details. I need some help finhishing uup the plot, which involves Dr. Eggman upgrading his robotizer to robotize Mobians and Sonic and friends trying to stop him before he turns Vanilla into a robot. I think the episode should end in a battle with Vanilla being rescued. I would also like to have Amy in the episode and maybe a few other characters… I would love to see what ideas you guys have for what happens next in the episode!

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

Was I not invited?

GDScratch1 wrote:

Hey, he's had to quote an post like three times and you still haven't noticed him. it's a simple yes or no question, it really isn't that difficult
on an unrelated note, i'd help but i'm baaaad at animating

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

GDScratch1 wrote:

Hey, he's had to quote an post like three times and you still haven't noticed him. it's a simple yes or no question, it really isn't that difficult
on an unrelated note, i'd help but i'm baaaad at animating

What?

Spycapt54 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Sonic Snip

Bump

XxThe_Black_FoxX wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Sonic Snip

Bump

Here's an idea I used from a roleplay not too long back. It's an alternate ending from your idea but I figured I'd put it out anyway.

In said roleplay, the Roboticizer Mark I was only able to fully roboticize Mobini (y'know, Flickies, Pickies, those little guys?) and partially roboticize Mobians. However, most of the attempts made with living Mobians often ended in the death of the test subject because of the shock and sudden changes being forced without enough stability.

The Roboticizer Mark II (or, the Super Roboticizer as we called it), with the power of a few Chaos Emeralds, was able to fully roboticize any living thing. Were the subject to then be “weaponized” the process of roboticization would be irreversible. What if they have to venture to his lair and rescue Vanilla before she is WEAPONIZED. Meaning, roboticization would have already occurred, but the effects would still be reversible. They then have to unwillingly fight Vanilla and disable her without hurting her. She is then taken back to the heroes' base, at which point Tails uses a special machine to keep Vanilla disabled and “unconscious” until they can find a cure for her. This would leave space for another episode, as well as add some suspense and drama (the good kind). Perhaps Cream even plays a game-changing part in saving her mother.

As far as characters go, I honestly think the less characters per episode the better, simply because it would be hard to find parts for and manage 20+ characters in a single episode in the future.

Spycapt54 wrote:

XxThe_Black_FoxX wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Sonic Snip

Bump

Here's an idea I used from a roleplay not too long back. It's an alternate ending from your idea but I figured I'd put it out anyway.

In said roleplay, the Roboticizer Mark I was only able to fully roboticize Mobini (y'know, Flickies, Pickies, those little guys?) and partially roboticize Mobians. However, most of the attempts made with living Mobians often ended in the death of the test subject because of the shock and sudden changes being forced without enough stability.

The Roboticizer Mark II (or, the Super Roboticizer as we called it), with the power of a few Chaos Emeralds, was able to fully roboticize any living thing. Were the subject to then be “weaponized” the process of roboticization would be irreversible. What if they have to venture to his lair and rescue Vanilla before she is WEAPONIZED. Meaning, roboticization would have already occurred, but the effects would still be reversible. They then have to unwillingly fight Vanilla and disable her without hurting her. She is then taken back to the heroes' base, at which point Tails uses a special machine to keep Vanilla disabled and “unconscious” until they can find a cure for her. This would leave space for another episode, as well as add some suspense and drama (the good kind). Perhaps Cream even plays a game-changing part in saving her mother.

As far as characters go, I honestly think the less characters per episode the better, simply because it would be hard to find parts for and manage 20+ characters in a single episode in the future.

That sounds pretty interesting…

SonicFan91 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

XxThe_Black_FoxX wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Sonic Snip

Bump

Here's an idea I used from a roleplay not too long back. It's an alternate ending from your idea but I figured I'd put it out anyway.

In said roleplay, the Roboticizer Mark I was only able to fully roboticize Mobini (y'know, Flickies, Pickies, those little guys?) and partially roboticize Mobians. However, most of the attempts made with living Mobians often ended in the death of the test subject because of the shock and sudden changes being forced without enough stability.

The Roboticizer Mark II (or, the Super Roboticizer as we called it), with the power of a few Chaos Emeralds, was able to fully roboticize any living thing. Were the subject to then be “weaponized” the process of roboticization would be irreversible. What if they have to venture to his lair and rescue Vanilla before she is WEAPONIZED. Meaning, roboticization would have already occurred, but the effects would still be reversible. They then have to unwillingly fight Vanilla and disable her without hurting her. She is then taken back to the heroes' base, at which point Tails uses a special machine to keep Vanilla disabled and “unconscious” until they can find a cure for her. This would leave space for another episode, as well as add some suspense and drama (the good kind). Perhaps Cream even plays a game-changing part in saving her mother.

As far as characters go, I honestly think the less characters per episode the better, simply because it would be hard to find parts for and manage 20+ characters in a single episode in the future.

That sounds pretty interesting…

Yeah, I like it, too. I guess we could have characters such as Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, Cream, and maybe even Sally in the episode. Y' Know, maybe some more of the Freedom Fighters, but not to many people, like XxThe_Black_FoxX said. IDK, I'm just trying to put a few ideas out here myself right now, even if they're pretty small.

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

@SpyCapt54 Would you mind answering my question?

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

@SpyCapt54 Would you mind answering my question?

Seriously. Just answer me. I just want to help!

Spycapt54 wrote:

SonicFan91 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

XxThe_Black_FoxX wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Sonic Snip

Bump

Here's an idea I used from a roleplay not too long back. It's an alternate ending from your idea but I figured I'd put it out anyway.

In said roleplay, the Roboticizer Mark I was only able to fully roboticize Mobini (y'know, Flickies, Pickies, those little guys?) and partially roboticize Mobians. However, most of the attempts made with living Mobians often ended in the death of the test subject because of the shock and sudden changes being forced without enough stability.

The Roboticizer Mark II (or, the Super Roboticizer as we called it), with the power of a few Chaos Emeralds, was able to fully roboticize any living thing. Were the subject to then be “weaponized” the process of roboticization would be irreversible. What if they have to venture to his lair and rescue Vanilla before she is WEAPONIZED. Meaning, roboticization would have already occurred, but the effects would still be reversible. They then have to unwillingly fight Vanilla and disable her without hurting her. She is then taken back to the heroes' base, at which point Tails uses a special machine to keep Vanilla disabled and “unconscious” until they can find a cure for her. This would leave space for another episode, as well as add some suspense and drama (the good kind). Perhaps Cream even plays a game-changing part in saving her mother.

As far as characters go, I honestly think the less characters per episode the better, simply because it would be hard to find parts for and manage 20+ characters in a single episode in the future.

That sounds pretty interesting…

Yeah, I like it, too. I guess we could have characters such as Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, Cream, and maybe even Sally in the episode. Y' Know, maybe some more of the Freedom Fighters, but not to many people, like XxThe_Black_FoxX said. IDK, I'm just trying to put a few ideas out here myself right now, even if they're pretty small.

That's what I was thinking… Maybe we could wait to introduce Sally or just have her and maybe Nicole appear later in the episode than the other characters. Anyway, adding in the TheBlackFox's idea, maybe Sonic and friends battle prototype replicas of Eggman's plans for a Robotized version of Vanilla and maybe a few others he had plans for.

Spycapt54 wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

@SpyCapt54 Would you mind answering my question?

Seriously. Just answer me. I just want to help!

If you REALLY want to join, show me what you can do in an audition.
edit: please

Spycapt54 wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

@SpyCapt54 Would you mind answering my question?

Seriously. Just answer me. I just want to help!

If you REALLY want to join, show me what you can do in an audition.
edit: please

SonicFan91 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

SonicFan91 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

XxThe_Black_FoxX wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Sonic Snip

Bump

Here's an idea I used from a roleplay not too long back. It's an alternate ending from your idea but I figured I'd put it out anyway.

In said roleplay, the Roboticizer Mark I was only able to fully roboticize Mobini (y'know, Flickies, Pickies, those little guys?) and partially roboticize Mobians. However, most of the attempts made with living Mobians often ended in the death of the test subject because of the shock and sudden changes being forced without enough stability.

The Roboticizer Mark II (or, the Super Roboticizer as we called it), with the power of a few Chaos Emeralds, was able to fully roboticize any living thing. Were the subject to then be “weaponized” the process of roboticization would be irreversible. What if they have to venture to his lair and rescue Vanilla before she is WEAPONIZED. Meaning, roboticization would have already occurred, but the effects would still be reversible. They then have to unwillingly fight Vanilla and disable her without hurting her. She is then taken back to the heroes' base, at which point Tails uses a special machine to keep Vanilla disabled and “unconscious” until they can find a cure for her. This would leave space for another episode, as well as add some suspense and drama (the good kind). Perhaps Cream even plays a game-changing part in saving her mother.

As far as characters go, I honestly think the less characters per episode the better, simply because it would be hard to find parts for and manage 20+ characters in a single episode in the future.

That sounds pretty interesting…

Yeah, I like it, too. I guess we could have characters such as Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, Cream, and maybe even Sally in the episode. Y' Know, maybe some more of the Freedom Fighters, but not to many people, like XxThe_Black_FoxX said. IDK, I'm just trying to put a few ideas out here myself right now, even if they're pretty small.

That's what I was thinking… Maybe we could wait to introduce Sally or just have her and maybe Nicole appear later in the episode than the other characters. Anyway, adding in the TheBlackFox's idea, maybe Sonic and friends battle prototype replicas of Eggman's plans for a Robotized version of Vanilla and maybe a few others he had plans for.

Yeah, that does kinda make sense… Also, those prototype replicas sound pretty cool! (I guess we'll have to start making concept art at some point.)

SpyCapt54 wrote:

So, how should the episode end?