spellcaster wrote:

I would like to partner!
Shop name: Spellcasters Shop https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/275123/
Shop description:I would like it to say my shop name. We sell banners, logos, art and debugging.
Banner imageLink to the image for your banner here)

Do you you have a banner that is 180 pixels tall or smaller? If you don't then is it okay if I crop, and shrink your banner so it fits 180 pixels since I don't want huge banners to make the partners section needlessly larger.

muellly wrote:

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This a really really awesome idea I love it!!! Thank you so much, for puting all this time and effort into it!

Bump entry 20: Got another order!
Yesterday I got another order! It was an idea, and I wrote a 10 paragraph idea. It was about the Winx club, I used to watch it when I was younger, however after Believeix I stopped keeping up with the episodes, and I am lost about pretty much everything that happened after sirenix. They also appeared to have their own headcannon which was good since I don't remember that much about Winx club. My power went out when I was doing this order, but luckily I kept a tab with my shop open, and my laptop was charged. Anyway that's all for this bump entry, bump you next time.

Well I haven't bumped this in a while, so here is another bump.

(sorry for the spam) https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/279323/

Whitetiger456 wrote:

(sorry for the spam) https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/279323/

Thanks for letting me know about that. I will sign up for it.

plese http://i.cubeupload.com/nKn8ST.pngut this on your shop http://i.cubeupload.com/nKn8ST.png

Whitetiger456 wrote:

plese http://i.cubeupload.com/nKn8ST.pngut this on your shop http://i.cubeupload.com/nKn8ST.png

Okay, I added it to the second post.

I would like an idea for a project!
Genre of project: Fantasy
Characters in project: Isla ( https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/274647/?page=3#post-2808153 ) Mystique ( https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/275368/?page=3#post-2815284 ) Andre (Yes. He is mine because the orderer didn't want him) https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/275368/?page=3#post-2816011 If any of these are too vague, I apologize. I'll elaborate if you want me to.
Any ideas you already have for your project: Not really no. It's your chance to be creative!
Anything else: I really like dogs. Seriously. And also, please notify me on my profile when you finish. Thanks! I don't have a deadline, but please finish soon?

muellly wrote:

Whitetiger456 wrote:

plese http://i.cubeupload.com/nKn8ST.pngut this on your shop http://i.cubeupload.com/nKn8ST.png

Okay, I added it to the second post.

thank you! we will let you know when classes begin

@2013animals

I am on it. I currently have the first 12 paragraphs typed, and I'm about halfway done.

muellly wrote:

@2013animals

I am on it. I currently have the first 12 paragraphs typed, and I'm about halfway done.

Cool. I'm excited

@2013animals

The world is made up of nations. Every species mostly lives in their own nation, however any one can live in any nation they want if the rulers of said nation allows it. It is July, and it is the time of year where Dogsuni is held. This event takes place in the Brinanine(Dog) nation. It was originally made as a day to celebrate the dog's rebuilding their nation into a strong one and teamwork, however over time it became a giant festival that species from many different nations across the land come to the Brinanine nation's capital for the celebration.
This world is also filled with magic. Magic is typically based on one element, or a magical skill. Everyone is born with one kind of magic they are good at which is usually based on their personality and goals. Someone who loves mining may develop the power to control the ground. Two people who really want to make others happy could have different powers, someone more aggressive could develop fire powers while someone more passive could develop light powers(Since they are both bringing kindness/light, fire is a more powerful form of light). You can learn other types of magic other than the one you are born with, however you have to be taught how to do it, and it is much harder to learn than the one you were born with was, and most of the time it will be weaker than others who were born with the skill are. You must discover for your self what kind of magic you were born with. Most people learn which kind of magic it is by doing it by accident. There are some who have gone through the whole life without ever learning any magic.

The story starts with Isla, and Mysti playing tag with a few others while waiting at a train station. In this world Isla was born with the power of bubbles, she can only make a few weak bubbles at a time. Isla wants to go to Dogsuni because to her it sounds like one giant party. Being friends with Isla, Mysti agreed to go for her. The train arrives, and the two of them hop aboard.

Meanwhile somewhere else Andre is also going to Dogsuni with his family. His dog Apollo is somewhat excited to go. His family is also taking a train, however it is a different train than the one Isla, and Mysti is on. Two of his followers bought tickets for the same train. They sit in seats here him. The two of them start talking to him. They ask him what he is excited for about Dogsuni, Andre gives his answer, Apollo says that's neat then says he is interested in how they design the fireworks. His two followers then talk about how they are excited for something unrelated that bores Andre. Despite Andre trying to change the topic to something else, his two followers go on, and on about it.

Anyway I should explain Apollo's character. Apollo is the GoldenDoodle Andre has.
Personality: Apollo rarely lets his emotions show. Because of this Andre has no idea that Apollo views him like a brother. He also talks sarcastically a lot which leads to people being confused on when he is being serious. Apollo is not very opinionated on most things, however when it is something he cares about he is. Apollo enjoys helping others. He enjoys to work behind the scenes to create something amazing. Apollo is good with technology. He enjoys creating special effects, and fixing software. Apollo is a rather slow typer because of his puppy paws. Apollo knows electric magic, and can get his fur very staticy, which creates lights and a shock for anyone who touches him.
Backstory: Apollo comes from a large litter of puppies. His mother was a poor dog that constantly moved from place to place in search of shelter, and food. Apollo became used to seeing his family sick, and huger. One day when he was around 5 months old a huge storm hit. Apollo was separated from his mother. Andre found Apollo washed up in the grass when he was taking a walk a day after the storm. His family took Apollo to the vet to heal the wounds from the storm. They searched for his mother however she was nowhere to be found. Andre's family adopted Apollo, and he has been living with them ever since. Apollo started a YouTube channel with Andre, consisting of mostly of highlights of Andre's games which has around 1000-3000 followers. Apollo enjoys seeing Andre in the spotlight, however Andre can't tell whether Apollo does it for having some fun with Andre his actual reason, or fame.

When Andre gets to the festival he, and Apollo goes to the thing Andre said he was excited about. About 10 people who recognize him from his videos gather around him amazed they got to see him in person.
Meanwhile Isla, and Mysti just arrived. Isla is amazed by all of the things to do. They begin to visit all the booths. After a few booths they are eating ice cream. Suddenly a swarm a griffins fly down from the sky. Isla is very interested, and goes to follow them. Mysti is concerned by the fact she thought see saw some armor on some of them, but she follows Isla anyway. They booth head to the palace where the griffins are flying to. They arrive to a scene of complete chaos. Griffins fighting dogs. One of the Griffins grab the princess dog, Isabel, and flies away with her. The rest of the griffins follow. Andre being very concerned about it being an attack rushes into the palace with Apollo. and about 5 of his followers follow them.

The dog king is in tears. The queen is in disbelief. Everyone is shocked, but Isla who is confused. The dog queen orders all of her soldiers to come at once. She asks if anyone is willing to go on the quest. Every dog leaves in either a panic, or in a hopeless moan. Andre asks what the queen meant by quest. The queen tells everyone the quest is dangerous with every dog that has gone so far never coming back, or ended up with no success. She told anyone still willing to help to meet her in the backroom. Apollo, Andre, Isla and Mysti goes into the backroom.
The dog queen says it is a dog kingdom secret, and not to tell anyone about what she tells them. However she is getting desperate enough to ask for outside help. She says that the griffins began to attack recently. It was manageable at first however it has became more, and more disruptive. She has sent her soldiers to find an ancient artifact, the bone of power. It was created many years ago to end the war between the dogs, dolphins and bears. The dog nation was formed afterwards. The years passed. Civil war broke out in the Brinanine nation. The queen's great times 41 grandparents got a hold of the bone of power, and wiped out all competition. They got rid of the bone of power in a great maze guarded by a great beast. The first Dogsuni celebration followed to a rebuilt dog kingdom. The griffins have been attacking in greater, and greater scale for 2 years. The dogs could not stop these attacks, so about 2 months ago they began to search for the bone of power to prevent a full scale war from breaking out. The dog queen asks Isla, Mysti, Andre and Apollo to bring the bone of power back. They accept.

After packing for their trip they set off. The dog king provided them a chariot pulled by two dogs with the magic of speed. The chariot sets off. The dogs who pull the chariot either often tell puns, or tell long boring stories. After a while they end up in the middle of a forest. They hear a creepy voice. “Beware travelers” the voice says. One of the dogs pulling the chariot gets scared, detaches them self from the chariot, and runs away. The voice says “I have tales to tell,”. The other dog worried about their buddy follows them leaving Mysti, Apollo, Andre and Isla alone in the middle of the woods. A cat appears in a cloak and finishes, “Tales designed to… sell my merchandise!” Andre is annoyed that the cat sounded, so ominous just to sell them stuff, Apollo is upset that their ride left, and Isla is interested in the stories. They travel along the road they were told to go on with the cat telling various would be scary stories that are a let down in the end about what they sell(Such as someone with a chainsaw on chasing them, but it ends with them trying to return a wallet the other person dropped).
After a while they walk by an inn. It is getting dark out so they decide to stay the night. Mysti, Andre, Isla and Apollo talk during dinner, and get to know each other better. That night Mysti can't sleep. She is worried about how the queen of the dogs said that there have been dogs that never came back. She tries drawing in the moon light to try to take her mind off of it. She starts drawing a mythical creature from her imagination. Once she is finished she feels proud of herself as she thinks it is one of the best drawings she ever made. The picture begins to move. It stands up from the page. Mysti gasps out of amazement. It circles around her once before going back into the page. What Mysti just saw was the magic she was born with, due to her imagination she was born with the power to bring her drawing to life. Right now she can only briefly have drawings she draws become real at the size she drew them if she is happy with her work and she focuses, however more developed magic of this type have the ability to bring any drawing to life at any size for however long they want, and have full control over drawings.
The next morning Mysti, Isla, Andre and Apollo set out. They walk for a bit until they come across a great river. On the other side they can see what was described as the temple where the bone of power is held. Isla gets excited. She takes her skin out of her ring, puts it on, and dives into the water. Andre, and Apollo are shocked when they see Isla turn into a sea lion. Everyone else looks for a way to across the river. Andre gets an idea to build a raft. Apollo, and Mysti begin collecting logs to use while Andre tries to build a raft. They finish the raft. As they do they spot something overhead, a griffin has been spying on them. The griffin flies away in the direction of the temple. Everyone's suspicion is raised, but Isla's. They head a cross the river, with Isla going ahead in her excitement.

Isla arrives at the other side of the lake a few minutes ahead of everyone else. She finds Isabel the dog princess waiting there. Isabel tells her that she escaped from the Griffins, and started searching for the bone of power to protect herself. Isla believes this. Isabel says that her ring is nice, and wishes to see it. Isla shows it to her; as she does Isabel snatches it! Isabel commands Isla to not mention this to anyone, and to bring her the bone of power. Isla gets mad, and starts yelling at Isabel. Isabel forces Isla to act like her normal happy self, then hides the ring so no one else can see it.
Mysti, Andre and Apollo get to the other side of the river. They are surprised to see that Isabel is safe. Isabel tells them the same lie that she escaped from the Griffins. She leads them to the entrance, however it is locked. Everyone searches for the key. Isabel is knows that the Griffins already have the key, and are looking for the bone of power for her right now. Mysti gets excited as she gets an idea. She begins drawing a key. She manages to bring the key off the page, and uses it to unlock the door. The key breaks, and the door opens allowing everyone to go inside.

Anyway I'm going to explain Isabel's character.
Personality: Isabel is bossy, and manipulative. She really wants to rule the entire world. She has good yet cruel leadership qualities. She is rather polite when she talks. She is nice, and cracks jokes about violence with her friends, which are others she likes, trusts and find useful. With every one else she acts proper. Isabel has a habit of getting rid of things she doesn't find useful. She has the magic of voice, and can create powerful blasts with it, use it for echolocation and sing lullabies to force others to fall asleep.
Backstory: Isabel was raised spoiled. She got pretty much everything she wanted leading to her thinking that everything should rightfully be her's. About 2 years ago she created a deal with the griffins who are a weak, run down nation running out of resources. She took advantage of the griffins desperateness, and created an alliance with them. She would give them the resources they need to make them a strong nation again if they help her take over Brinanine. Once queen she plans on invading other nations, stealing their resources to make the Brinanine, and Skarsong(Griffin) nations the most powerful nations in the world.

Inside is a maze rigged with traps. The light in the maze goes on, and off at random intervals. A trap activates, and separates Isla, Mysti and Isabel from Andre and Apollo. While they are walking Mysti notices that something is a off about Isla. Meanwhile Andre, and Apollo is trying to get through the maze. After some walking a trap sets off. Andre falls into a pit with spikes closing in on him from the walls. The pit is about a foot taller than Andre can reach with a jump. Apollo leans down into the pit, and tries to help Andre up. Andre grabs onto his snout since that is the only part Andre can reach. It is painful for Apollo to have Andre pulling on his snout, and he has trouble pulling Andre out of the pit. When the spikes are about to crush them, and it looks like Apollo is going to fall in he manages to pull Andre out of the pit. Andre asks why Apollo tried to save him when he could have also been killed from the trap. Apollo says it is because he feels like they are sort of like brothers, and he wouldn't leave Andre behind. Andre is surprised that Apollo feels that way because most of the time Apollo doesn't seem to care about much. After some walking everyone meets up again in a large room.
In this room bones are scattered all over the place. There is an arc in the back of the room, containing a smaller room with the bone of power inside of a chest. Guarding the chest is a unusually colored Saber tooth tiger like beast about twice the size of an adult human. The griffins that were trying to fight it hide at the sight of everyone entering. The beast pounces as an attack. Andre, and Apollo start fighting the tiger while Mysti, and Isabel stand back. Isla tries to befriend the beast, and to everyone else's surprise it works. The beast seeing Isla as worthy let's her take the bone of power. Isla nervously takes it, then gives it to Isabel.
Isabel smiles on how her plan worked. She got the bone of power by getting the griffins to make her parents think the dog kingdom is in danger. They would send dogs to get it, which she would have an army of griffins waiting outside to take it from them if any of them managed to get it. She got tired of waiting, so she had the griffins look like they kidnapped her, so she could get the bone herself. When one of the griffin scouts told her the king, and queen sent some people to get it, she decided she would use them to fight the beast for her. When she herd that Isla was a Selkie she got the brilliant idea to use her, someone the others would trust, to give her the bone. Now there was one last step, dispose of the ones the king, and queen sent to get the bone. Isabel orders the griffins to attack, and uses the bone of power.
The bone of power is filled with puppy magic. It has the ability to create an army of energy dogs that aren't very smart. Energy dogs do exactly what they are told, but can get distracted easily while doing this. Energy dogs mostly fight by jumping up onto someone, and licking them; rarely they may bite. What makes the bone of power dangerous is that it can create an army of thousands of invulnerable dogs made of energy. Whoever holds the bone controls the energy dogs.

A fight begins between Isabel, griffins and energy dogs against Isla, Mysti, Andre, Apollo and the beast. During the fight Isabel drops Isla's ring, not even bothering to pick it back up because she feels like it doesn't really matter anymore. The fight ends when someone steals the bone of power from Isabel. She along with the rest of the griffins retreat.
Everyone makes it back to the Brinanine palace when the sun begins to set. The king, and queen are shocked about what their daughter has done. Isla, Mysti, Andre and Apollo each get a five thousand dollar reward for bringing them the bone of power. Andre and Apollo go to their family. Their parents are worried sick while his siblings wonder where they have been. Isla, Mysti, Andre and Apollo board the same train together. They talk on the train. When they get back to the town they live in. A heart touching goodbye scene happens, they everyone goes back home, the end.

That was my idea 2013animals. I hope you like it.

muellly wrote:

@2013animals

The world is made up of nations. Every species mostly lives in their own nation, however any one can live in any nation they want if the rulers of said nation allows it. It is July, and it is the time of year where Dogsuni is held. This event takes place in the Brinanine(Dog) nation. It was originally made as a day to celebrate the dog's rebuilding their nation into a strong one and teamwork, however over time it became a giant festival that species from many different nations across the land come to the Brinanine nation's capital for the celebration.
This world is also filled with magic. Magic is typically based on one element, or a magical skill. Everyone is born with one kind of magic they are good at which is usually based on their personality and goals. Someone who loves mining may develop the power to control the ground. Two people who really want to make others happy could have different powers, someone more aggressive could develop fire powers while someone more passive could develop light powers(Since they are both bringing kindness/light, fire is a more powerful form of light). You can learn other types of magic other than the one you are born with, however you have to be taught how to do it, and it is much harder to learn than the one you were born with was, and most of the time it will be weaker than others who were born with the skill are. You must discover for your self what kind of magic you were born with. Most people learn which kind of magic it is by doing it by accident. There are some who have gone through the whole life without ever learning any magic.

The story starts with Isla, and Mysti playing tag with a few others while waiting at a train station. In this world Isla was born with the power of bubbles, she can only make a few weak bubbles at a time. Isla wants to go to Dogsuni because to her it sounds like one giant party. Being friends with Isla, Mysti agreed to go for her. The train arrives, and the two of them hop aboard.

Meanwhile somewhere else Andre is also going to Dogsuni with his family. His dog Apollo is somewhat excited to go. His family is also taking a train, however it is a different train than the one Isla, and Mysti is on. Two of his followers bought tickets for the same train. They sit in seats here him. The two of them start talking to him. They ask him what he is excited for about Dogsuni, Andre gives his answer, Apollo says that's neat then says he is interested in how they design the fireworks. His two followers then talk about how they are excited for something unrelated that bores Andre. Despite Andre trying to change the topic to something else, his two followers go on, and on about it.

Anyway I should explain Apollo's character. Apollo is the GoldenDoodle Andre has.
Personality: Apollo rarely lets his emotions show. Because of this Andre has no idea that Apollo views him like a brother. He also talks sarcastically a lot which leads to people being confused on when he is being serious. Apollo is not very opinionated on most things, however when it is something he cares about he is. Apollo enjoys helping others. He enjoys to work behind the scenes to create something amazing. Apollo is good with technology. He enjoys creating special effects, and fixing software. Apollo is a rather slow typer because of his puppy paws. Apollo knows electric magic, and can get his fur very staticy, which creates lights and a shock for anyone who touches him.
Backstory: Apollo comes from a large litter of puppies. His mother was a poor dog that constantly moved from place to place in search of shelter, and food. Apollo became used to seeing his family sick, and huger. One day when he was around 5 months old a huge storm hit. Apollo was separated from his mother. Andre found Apollo washed up in the grass when he was taking a walk a day after the storm. His family took Apollo to the vet to heal the wounds from the storm. They searched for his mother however she was nowhere to be found. Andre's family adopted Apollo, and he has been living with them ever since. Apollo started a YouTube channel with Andre, consisting of mostly of highlights of Andre's games which has around 1000-3000 followers. Apollo enjoys seeing Andre in the spotlight, however Andre can't tell whether Apollo does it for having some fun with Andre his actual reason, or fame.

When Andre gets to the festival he, and Apollo goes to the thing Andre said he was excited about. About 10 people who recognize him from his videos gather around him amazed they got to see him in person.
Meanwhile Isla, and Mysti just arrived. Isla is amazed by all of the things to do. They begin to visit all the booths. After a few booths they are eating ice cream. Suddenly a swarm a griffins fly down from the sky. Isla is very interested, and goes to follow them. Mysti is concerned by the fact she thought see saw some armor on some of them, but she follows Isla anyway. They booth head to the palace where the griffins are flying to. They arrive to a scene of complete chaos. Griffins fighting dogs. One of the Griffins grab the princess dog, Isabel, and flies away with her. The rest of the griffins follow. Andre being very concerned about it being an attack rushes into the palace with Apollo. and about 5 of his followers follow them.

The dog king is in tears. The queen is in disbelief. Everyone is shocked, but Isla who is confused. The dog queen orders all of her soldiers to come at once. She asks if anyone is willing to go on the quest. Every dog leaves in either a panic, or in a hopeless moan. Andre asks what the queen meant by quest. The queen tells everyone the quest is dangerous with every dog that has gone so far never coming back, or ended up with no success. She told anyone still willing to help to meet her in the backroom. Apollo, Andre, Isla and Mysti goes into the backroom.
The dog queen says it is a dog kingdom secret, and not to tell anyone about what she tells them. However she is getting desperate enough to ask for outside help. She says that the griffins began to attack recently. It was manageable at first however it has became more, and more disruptive. She has sent her soldiers to find an ancient artifact, the bone of power. It was created many years ago to end the war between the dogs, dolphins and bears. The dog nation was formed afterwards. The years passed. Civil war broke out in the Brinanine nation. The queen's great times 41 grandparents got a hold of the bone of power, and wiped out all competition. They got rid of the bone of power in a great maze guarded by a great beast. The first Dogsuni celebration followed to a rebuilt dog kingdom. The griffins have been attacking in greater, and greater scale for 2 years. The dogs could not stop these attacks, so about 2 months ago they began to search for the bone of power to prevent a full scale war from breaking out. The dog queen asks Isla, Mysti, Andre and Apollo to bring the bone of power back. They accept.

After packing for their trip they set off. The dog king provided them a chariot pulled by two dogs with the magic of speed. The chariot sets off. The dogs who pull the chariot either often tell puns, or tell long boring stories. After a while they end up in the middle of a forest. They hear a creepy voice. “Beware travelers” the voice says. One of the dogs pulling the chariot gets scared, detaches them self from the chariot, and runs away. The voice says “I have tales to tell,”. The other dog worried about their buddy follows them leaving Mysti, Apollo, Andre and Isla alone in the middle of the woods. A cat appears in a cloak and finishes, “Tales designed to… sell my merchandise!” Andre is annoyed that the cat sounded, so ominous just to sell them stuff, Apollo is upset that their ride left, and Isla is interested in the stories. They travel along the road they were told to go on with the cat telling various would be scary stories that are a let down in the end about what they sell(Such as someone with a chainsaw on chasing them, but it ends with them trying to return a wallet the other person dropped).
After a while they walk by an inn. It is getting dark out so they decide to stay the night. Mysti, Andre, Isla and Apollo talk during dinner, and get to know each other better. That night Mysti can't sleep. She is worried about how the queen of the dogs said that there have been dogs that never came back. She tries drawing in the moon light to try to take her mind off of it. She starts drawing a mythical creature from her imagination. Once she is finished she feels proud of herself as she thinks it is one of the best drawings she ever made. The picture begins to move. It stands up from the page. Mysti gasps out of amazement. It circles around her once before going back into the page. What Mysti just saw was the magic she was born with, due to her imagination she was born with the power to bring her drawing to life. Right now she can only briefly have drawings she draws become real at the size she drew them if she is happy with her work and she focuses, however more developed magic of this type have the ability to bring any drawing to life at any size for however long they want, and have full control over drawings.
The next morning Mysti, Isla, Andre and Apollo set out. They walk for a bit until they come across a great river. On the other side they can see what was described as the temple where the bone of power is held. Isla gets excited. She takes her skin out of her ring, puts it on, and dives into the water. Andre, and Apollo are shocked when they see Isla turn into a sea lion. Everyone else looks for a way to across the river. Andre gets an idea to build a raft. Apollo, and Mysti begin collecting logs to use while Andre tries to build a raft. They finish the raft. As they do they spot something overhead, a griffin has been spying on them. The griffin flies away in the direction of the temple. Everyone's suspicion is raised, but Isla's. They head a cross the river, with Isla going ahead in her excitement.

Isla arrives at the other side of the lake a few minutes ahead of everyone else. She finds Isabel the dog princess waiting there. Isabel tells her that she escaped from the Griffins, and started searching for the bone of power to protect herself. Isla believes this. Isabel says that her ring is nice, and wishes to see it. Isla shows it to her; as she does Isabel snatches it! Isabel commands Isla to not mention this to anyone, and to bring her the bone of power. Isla gets mad, and starts yelling at Isabel. Isabel forces Isla to act like her normal happy self, then hides the ring so no one else can see it.
Mysti, Andre and Apollo get to the other side of the river. They are surprised to see that Isabel is safe. Isabel tells them the same lie that she escaped from the Griffins. She leads them to the entrance, however it is locked. Everyone searches for the key. Isabel is knows that the Griffins already have the key, and are looking for the bone of power for her right now. Mysti gets excited as she gets an idea. She begins drawing a key. She manages to bring the key off the page, and uses it to unlock the door. The key breaks, and the door opens allowing everyone to go inside.

Anyway I'm going to explain Isabel's character.
Personality: Isabel is bossy, and manipulative. She really wants to rule the entire world. She has good yet cruel leadership qualities. She is rather polite when she talks. She is nice, and cracks jokes about violence with her friends, which are others she likes, trusts and find useful. With every one else she acts proper. Isabel has a habit of getting rid of things she doesn't find useful. She has the magic of voice, and can create powerful blasts with it, use it for echolocation and sing lullabies to force others to fall asleep.
Backstory: Isabel was raised spoiled. She got pretty much everything she wanted leading to her thinking that everything should rightfully be her's. About 2 years ago she created a deal with the griffins who are a weak, run down nation running out of resources. She took advantage of the griffins desperateness, and created an alliance with them. She would give them the resources they need to make them a strong nation again if they help her take over Brinanine. Once queen she plans on invading other nations, stealing their resources to make the Brinanine, and Skarsong(Griffin) nations the most powerful nations in the world.

Inside is a maze rigged with traps. The light in the maze goes on, and off at random intervals. A trap activates, and separates Isla, Mysti and Isabel from Andre and Apollo. While they are walking Mysti notices that something is a off about Isla. Meanwhile Andre, and Apollo is trying to get through the maze. After some walking a trap sets off. Andre falls into a pit with spikes closing in on him from the walls. The pit is about a foot taller than Andre can reach with a jump. Apollo leans down into the pit, and tries to help Andre up. Andre grabs onto his snout since that is the only part Andre can reach. It is painful for Apollo to have Andre pulling on his snout, and he has trouble pulling Andre out of the pit. When the spikes are about to crush them, and it looks like Apollo is going to fall in he manages to pull Andre out of the pit. Andre asks why Apollo tried to save him when he could have also been killed from the trap. Apollo says it is because he feels like they are sort of like brothers, and he wouldn't leave Andre behind. Andre is surprised that Apollo feels that way because most of the time Apollo doesn't seem to care about much. After some walking everyone meets up again in a large room.
In this room bones are scattered all over the place. There is an arc in the back of the room, containing a smaller room with the bone of power inside of a chest. Guarding the chest is a unusually colored Saber tooth tiger like beast about twice the size of an adult human. The griffins that were trying to fight it hide at the sight of everyone entering. The beast pounces as an attack. Andre, and Apollo start fighting the tiger while Mysti, and Isabel stand back. Isla tries to befriend the beast, and to everyone else's surprise it works. The beast seeing Isla as worthy let's her take the bone of power. Isla nervously takes it, then gives it to Isabel.
Isabel smiles on how her plan worked. She got the bone of power by getting the griffins to make her parents think the dog kingdom is in danger. They would send dogs to get it, which she would have an army of griffins waiting outside to take it from them if any of them managed to get it. She got tired of waiting, so she had the griffins look like they kidnapped her, so she could get the bone herself. When one of the griffin scouts told her the king, and queen sent some people to get it, she decided she would use them to fight the beast for her. When she herd that Isla was a Selkie she got the brilliant idea to use her, someone the others would trust, to give her the bone. Now there was one last step, dispose of the ones the king, and queen sent to get the bone. Isabel orders the griffins to attack, and uses the bone of power.
The bone of power is filled with puppy magic. It has the ability to create an army of energy dogs that aren't very smart. Energy dogs do exactly what they are told, but can get distracted easily while doing this. Energy dogs mostly fight by jumping up onto someone, and licking them; rarely they may bite. What makes the bone of power dangerous is that it can create an army of thousands of invulnerable dogs made of energy. Whoever holds the bone controls the energy dogs.

A fight begins between Isabel, griffins and energy dogs against Isla, Mysti, Andre, Apollo and the beast. During the fight Isabel drops Isla's ring, not even bothering to pick it back up because she feels like it doesn't really matter anymore. The fight ends when someone steals the bone of power from Isabel. She along with the rest of the griffins retreat.
Everyone makes it back to the Brinanine palace when the sun begins to set. The king, and queen are shocked about what their daughter has done. Isla, Mysti, Andre and Apollo each get a five thousand dollar reward for bringing them the bone of power. Andre and Apollo go to their family. Their parents are worried sick while his siblings wonder where they have been. Isla, Mysti, Andre and Apollo board the same train together. They talk on the train. When they get back to the town they live in. A heart touching goodbye scene happens, they everyone goes back home, the end.

That was my idea 2013animals. I hope you like it.

Holy cow!

muelly wrote:

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That's beautiful! I can tell that you put your heart into making this. I love it! I think I'll write a story about it (on scratch, with credit) instead of a project, because that was one hefty idea. I'll show you when I'm done, if you'd like, and I would definitely come back, and maybe recommend to friends

2013animals wrote:

muelly wrote:

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That's beautiful! I can tel that you put your heart into making this. I love it! I think I'll write a story about it (on scratch, with credit) instead of a project, because that was one hefty idea. I'll show you when I'm done, if you'd like, and I would definitely come back, and maybe recommend to friends

I'm glad you loved the idea. I would love to see the story you write.

muellly wrote:

2013animals wrote:

muelly wrote:

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That's beautiful! I can tel that you put your heart into making this. I love it! I think I'll write a story about it (on scratch, with credit) instead of a project, because that was one hefty idea. I'll show you when I'm done, if you'd like, and I would definitely come back, and maybe recommend to friends

I'm glad you loved the idea. I would love to see the story you write.

Yay! I'll make one in the Things I'm making and writing or whatever it's called when I have time

muellly wrote:

Bump entry 8: Open for partners
Hello do you want to partner with Neverending dreams? Well just fill out this form and you can.

I would like to partner!
Shop name: The Once Upon A Time Writing and OC Shop
Shop description: At my shop, you can order ocs, stories, poetry, story and character reviews, oc refs in vector and in bitmap, an interesting assortment of packs, writing prompts, and limited edition items (This month's is book recommendations)
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I will only accept being partners if your banner and you text fits into 180 pixels of height (Though this is mostly for banners, I'll still put your shop if your text goes a few lines over). I do this so people with huge banners don't make the page needlessly longer. If your banner is to big please make a smaller one. Use my smaller banner above as an example of how big yours should be. I will check every few weeks to see if your shop is still active. If I don't see any orders finished or the owner posting in a week I will post in your shop asking if it is still open. If no one responds within 3 days your shop will be removed.

After I accept your partner request please put either my smaller banner above or my bigger banner at the top of the page to your shop's partners list.

I hope to see you partner with Neverending Dreams!

Done!

I give this shop a 12/12 because I liked my product, it was really fast wait and a detailed story!

I would like a review!
Link to Project: (Put the link to the project here) https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/168806305/
Any sections you want me to review: (Any thing you want to make sure I put in the review tell me here.) Overall, especially the art and coding
Anything else: (Anything else you want to tell me such as your project is in two parts or that you like cats?) Nothing
Thank you!