[+] Adscititious! Market // Currently Hiring :)

Monkey_Legend

TeamBetas wrote:
✔ Review ✖
Name - TeamBetas
Link to project -(It's a shop) https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/230061/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Harsh
Any other - Were hiring if anyone wants to apply

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ML

Monkey_Legend

Monkey_Legend wrote:
TeamBetas wrote:
✔ Review ✖
Name - TeamBetas
Link to project -(It's a shop) https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/230061/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Harsh
Any other - Were hiring if anyone wants to apply
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ML

Layout:8.5/10
Banner:9/10
Quote:I really like this shop because it sells unique things and there's different firms for different animals, although I'm not so Keane on the red writing for the forms but overall 8/10

ML

Last edited by Monkey_Legend (Dec. 13, 2016 08:11:45)

Hans5958

bumping my request monkey_legend dont take this request

Hans5958 wrote:
9th shop! Close to 10!

Name - Hans5958
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/70357630/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) I don't get about this one, maybe normal.
Any other - Tell me in my project when it's done.

sharkblue

Hans5958 wrote:
bumping my request monkey_legend dont take this request
Hans5958 wrote:
9th shop! Close to 10!

Name - Hans5958
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/70357630/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) I don't get about this one, maybe normal.
Any other - Tell me in my project when it's done.

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Hans5958

sharkblue wrote:
Hans5958 wrote:
bumping my request monkey_legend dont take this request
Hans5958 wrote:
9th shop! Close to 10!

Name - Hans5958
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/70357630/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) I don't get about this one, maybe normal.
Any other - Tell me in my project when it's done.
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sharkblue

Hans5958 wrote:
sharkblue wrote:
Hans5958 wrote:
bumping my request monkey_legend dont take this request
Hans5958 wrote:
9th shop! Close to 10!

Name - Hans5958
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/70357630/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) I don't get about this one, maybe normal.
Any other - Tell me in my project when it's done.
Taken
Still waiting…

Oops, sorry, I can't do it, I'm very busy these days

HRSM

Name - HRSM
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/136515593/#editor
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Normal
Any other - Please make soon but don't rush, say what I can improve and the art style is deliberately 8bit Mega Man 1-6 style.

Thanks
HRSM

FlappyCamel

I'd like to join.

Username: FlappyCamel
Nickname: FlappyCamel
Activity: 9/10 on weekends, 6/10 on weekdays
Position: artist
Following: yes

furternator

✔ Review ✖
Name - furternator
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/142346087/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Normal
Any other - Tell me on meh profile when finished

Last edited by furternator (July 13, 2017 07:00:05)

TacoCatProuductions

Heyo, was I kicked out? Sorry about being inactive for like 6 months

sharkblue

TacoCatProuductions wrote:
Heyo, was I kicked out? Sorry about being inactive for like 6 months

Nah, this shop is closed.

Bunnynightfan

sharkblue wrote:
SonicMasterSystem wrote:
SonicMasterSystem wrote:
Name - SonicMasterSystem
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/128100559/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Normal
Any other - Please have it done as soon as possible.
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My Review is:

Art: (6.5/10) Since all arts were taken from Sega, you don't really get full marks
Music: (4/10) Sound effect and background music are both too loud, when they are played together it makes it sounds louder. Try to decrease the sound effect's volume or background music's volume for better result.
Scripting: (5/10) Some characters moves with too much gap.
Creativity: (5/10) This is just like(and are) the game Sonic.
Bugs founded: (1) A bug that I can't explain
Overall: (19.5/40) Quite low and can be improved. But credits were given well, so good job

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