SonicMasterSystem wrote:

Name - SonicMasterSystem
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/128100559/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Normal
Any other - Please have it done as soon as possible.

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

Name - SonicMasterSystem
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/128100559/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Normal
Any other - Please have it done as soon as possible.

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CookieCream777 wrote:

sharkblue wrote:

ArcheryQueen wrote:

(test for art and review service)
Review
Name - archeryqueen
Link to project -https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/114381663/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly)- normal
Any other -…


Art
Name -archeryqueen
Art Type - (OC, Banner, etc.)- sprite
Art Detail -a girl with brown hair
Any other -…

My review is:

Art: (5/10) Fine, but need some improvement. Better if used in “vector mode”.
Music: (0/10) There were no music, people might complain about this several times.
Scripting: (6/10) Simple yet effective!
Bugs founded: (1) You can still serve the customers even if you haven't finish making the juice.
Creativity: (7.5/10) It is quite creative! But needs some other features added to it
Overall: (17.5/40) It is quite low, and need some improvement. But its okay, no one started as a professional, as the sayings goes “There is no elevator for success, you need to take the stairs”

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Art Order is coming up.

can i get a review?

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

Name - SonicMasterSystem
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/128100559/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Normal
Any other - Please have it done as soon as possible.

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sharkblue wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

Name - SonicMasterSystem
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/128100559/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly) Normal
Any other - Please have it done as soon as possible.

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My Review is:

Art: (6.5/10) Since all arts were taken from Sega, you don't really get full marks
Music: (4/10) Sound effect and background music are both too loud, when they are played together it makes it sounds louder. Try to decrease the sound effect's volume or background music's volume for better result.
Scripting: (5/10) Some characters moves with too much gap.
Creativity: (5/10) This is just like(and are) the game Sonic.
Bugs founded: (1) A bug that I can't explain
Overall: (19.5/40) Quite low and can be improved. But credits were given well, so good job

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XenoCoding wrote:

Name - XenoCoding
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/134239258/
Critique Level - Normal
Other - Really could use some tips on the design mostly. Design has never been my strong point.

Thank you guys for your time.

XenoCoding wrote:

Name - XenoCoding
Link to project - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/134239258/
Critique Level - Normal
Other - Really could use some tips on the design mostly. Design has never been my strong point.

Thank you guys for your time.

Review us
We review you, you review us!
Speed - (/10)
Quality - (/10)
How you like us -
Your Comment About Us -

ArcheryQueen wrote:

sharkblue wrote:

ArcheryQueen wrote:

(test for art and review service)
Review
Name - archeryqueen
Link to project -https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/114381663/
Critique Level - (Harsh, normal, kindly)- normal
Any other -…


Art
Name -archeryqueen
Art Type - (OC, Banner, etc.)- sprite
Art Detail -a girl with brown hair
Any other -…

My review is:

Art: (5/10) Fine, but need some improvement. Better if used in “vector mode”.
Music: (0/10) There were no music, people might complain about this several times.
Scripting: (6/10) Simple yet effective!
Bugs founded: (1) You can still serve the customers even if you haven't finish making the juice.
Creativity: (7.5/10) It is quite creative! But needs some other features added to it
Overall: (17.5/40) It is quite low, and need some improvement. But its okay, no one started as a professional, as the sayings goes “There is no elevator for success, you need to take the stairs”

Thank you for using Adscititious Market's Review! Come again
Art Order is coming up. Other Staff can do this, because it is currently night here, so I'm really tired and trying to go to sleep.

this was my first project. because i didn't have any other games that were ok, i just put this one down

congrats! you got the reviews award!

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

Speed - (/10) 8
Quality - (/10) 4
How you like us - I love your shop!
Your Comment About Us - “I love your shop! Although, it has room for improvement!”

XenoCoding wrote:

Speed - 10/10
Quality - 9/10
How you like us - Great and informative criticism that really gave me some great ideas about where I could take my project.
Your Comment About Us -

“Speedy information on how you can take your project to the next level.”