Flint-L wrote:

Review of https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115564868/ for MasterJPixel
Graphics(1-10): 9/10 Even though they weren't 100% my style, the graphics were very consistent, something I appreciate a lot in games.
Coding(1-10): 5/10 The walking wasn't the best coding I've seen. I couldn't find your exact code, but I think you're using something like this:

when [right v] key pressed
change x by (10)

It would be better to use this:

when [right v] key pressed
repeat until <not <key [right v] pressed?>>
change x by (10)
end

Glitches(1-10): 7/10 None that I could find, though you mentioned a few yourself that should be fixed.
Creativity(1-10): 7/10
Grammar(1-10): 9.99/10 The “-ing” form of die is “dying,” not “dieing.”
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion): Still needs a lot of work, but I think it will shape up to be an awesome game!
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit): (see my above comments)

EDIT: Whoa, cool, you can add the BB code scratchblocks to you backpack! Is this new, or have I just never noticed it?

Caleb101 wrote:

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118210871/
Date(When you want it done): Whenever possible
Skill(Your level of skill): Coding 9.5/10 art 5/10
Miscellaneous: This game is in its early stages, so I am mainly looking for a review that tells me what features are good/ not good, what you think sould be added, and any glitches you find or imbalances in the game system.
Thanks in advance

CrazyGoldfish3 wrote:

Hey people.

Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf

MistickMage wrote:

Caleb101 wrote:

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118210871/
Date(When you want it done): Whenever possible
Skill(Your level of skill): Coding 9.5/10 art 5/10
Miscellaneous: This game is in its early stages, so I am mainly looking for a review that tells me what features are good/ not good, what you think sould be added, and any glitches you find or imbalances in the game system.
Thanks in advance

If everyones fine with it, I'll do it

goldfish678 wrote:

apparently you guys have the third biggest active shop (I think) on scratch, maybe you could advertise that xD

Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf

CinderBerry1712 wrote:

Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf

Is No one going to do my order??
If not, MTBH's shop will suffice

Flint-L wrote:

CinderBerry1712 wrote:

Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf

Is No one going to do my order??
If not, MTBH's shop will suffice

You only placed your order two days ago.

While we do have quite a few members, not all of them have the ability to complete your order, and especially not in two days.

TheHockeyist wrote:

Still here, lurking silently.

Flint-L wrote:

Mr-scratch-cat wrote:
Type of music: Electronic
Speed: 140 bpm
Date: I don't really care when it's finished.
Miscellaneous: Could you make it future bass?

I'll try this one.