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Flint-L

Bobbricks7 wrote:
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): Electronic
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium):slow
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Miscellaneous: It is for a city builder game

Completed.
http://www.expirebox.com/download/fcc54a37600ba592a06ab7815651a3f4.html (link to the song)
Edit: Link deleted

I threw this together in a few hours - hopefully it matches the game you are making.

If the link expires just let me know on my profile.

Last edited by Flint-L (Aug. 8, 2016 12:36:24)

Flint-L

Mr-scratch-cat wrote:
Type of music: Electronic
Speed: 140 bpm
Date: I don't really care when it's finished.
Miscellaneous: Could you make it future bass?

I'll try this one.

rollercoasterfan

Flint-L wrote:
Bobbricks7 wrote:
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): Electronic
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium):slow
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Miscellaneous: It is for a city builder game
Completed.
http://www.expirebox.com/download/fcc54a37600ba592a06ab7815651a3f4.html (link to the song )

I threw this together in a few hours - hopefully it matches the game you are making.
If the link expires just let me know on my profile.

Yeah, I think it expired…

I really need to get back into music and see if I can actually make something decent.

Flint-L

rollercoasterfan wrote:
Flint-L wrote:
Bobbricks7 wrote:
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): Electronic
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium):slow
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Miscellaneous: It is for a city builder game
Completed.
http://www.expirebox.com/download/fcc54a37600ba592a06ab7815651a3f4.html (link to the song )

I threw this together in a few hours - hopefully it matches the game you are making.
If the link expires just let me know on my profile.
Yeah, I think it expired…

I really need to get back into music and see if I can actually make something decent.

Nah, I deleted it because bobbricks told me they got it.

The thing with making music is that you shouldn't worry about making decent things. Just purposely make terrible, terrible stuff, and eventually you'll accidently make something wonderful!

Last edited by Flint-L (Aug. 8, 2016 05:47:34)

rollercoasterfan

Flint-L wrote:
The thing with making music is that you shouldn't worry about making decent things. Just purposely make terrible, terrible stuff, and eventually you'll accidently make something wonderful!

lol

Flint-L

rollercoasterfan wrote:
Flint-L wrote:
The thing with making music is that you shouldn't worry about making decent things. Just purposely make terrible, terrible stuff, and eventually you'll accidently make something wonderful!
lol

Um… I guess you think I was joking? ‘cuz I wasn’t.

Seriously, that's how I make music, and how everyone should.

MagicPigPerson

TheHockeyist wrote:
GUYS.

WE HAVE ORDERS.

You think we haven't noticed? THERE'S LOOOADS

MagicPigPerson

I've only just noticed as well, that nearly everyone who has a quote on their signature is something motivational that helps people get through the rough meanings of life.
Then I just have…
Mine…
…

Flint-L

MagicPigPerson wrote:
TheHockeyist wrote:
GUYS.

WE HAVE ORDERS.
You think we haven't noticed? THERE'S LOOOADS

You should take one:
https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/2127538/ (list of orders)

rollercoasterfan

DanielRP
Type of ArtBanner:
Date ASAP(Within 7 Days):
Style Vector:
Miscellaneous;
Have it in Blue with small scratchcat on both sides and say “Need Help with anything, Visit The DanielRP Assistance Shop”
Also not extremely tall as it will go above or below my signature, eyecatching

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CelloPlayer12

Reviews

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115208992/
Date(When you want it done): Soon
Skill(Your level of skill): Idk… 5-6?
Miscellaneous

Last edited by CelloPlayer12 (Aug. 14, 2016 10:35:42)

Sigton

I'm back

Sigton

MasterJPixel

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): scratch.mit.edu/projects/115564868/
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Skill(Your level of skill): 4/10.
Miscellaneous: I will follow the thread until I recieve my product.

Doni124

Back after 3 months did I miss anything?

Sigton

Doni124 wrote:
Back after 3 months did I miss anything?

Hi

Sigton

Flint-L

Doni124 wrote:
Back after 3 months did I miss anything?

Jus this, probably: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/2141518/

Flint-L

Review of https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115564868/ for MasterJPixel
Graphics(1-10): 9/10 Even though they weren't 100% my style, the graphics were very consistent, something I appreciate a lot in games.
Coding(1-10): 5/10 The walking wasn't the best coding I've seen. I couldn't find your exact code, but I think you're using something like this:

It would be better to use this:

Glitches(1-10): 7/10 None that I could find, though you mentioned a few yourself that should be fixed.
Creativity(1-10): 7/10
Grammar(1-10): 9.99/10 The “-ing” form of die is “dying,” not “dieing.”
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion): Still needs a lot of work, but I think it will shape up to be an awesome game!
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit): (see my above comments)

EDIT: Whoa, cool, you can add the BB code scratchblocks to you backpack! Is this new, or have I just never noticed it?

Last edited by Flint-L (Aug. 15, 2016 18:02:54)

Flint-L

Review of https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115208992/ for CelloPlayer12
Graphics(1-10): 10/10 Graphics are AMAZING. Great job.
Coding(1-10): 8/10 Two things I think you should do:
1). When the mouse stops moving, the square should also stand still, not move back and forth.
2). Remove the ghost effect from all the circles - this should help with the lag without affecting the (did I mention?) FABULOUS graphics too much.
Glitches(1-10): 10/10 None!
Creativity(1-10): 10/10 Nice job making something completely different!
Grammar(1-10): 10/10 None, but if you want me to be picky, “Dots that change color are power-ups, they will make you faster for five seconds” should have a semicolon “;” rather than a comma, I think.
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion): AWESOME JOB.
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit): A little work with lag reduction, but other than that, nothing.

Flint-L

Review of https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/64573084/ for nickydroids
Graphics(1-10): 9/10 Absolutely beautiful! However, I would like too see more consistency in the pixel size. For example, the pixels of the character are very small while some of the background's pixels are a bit bigger. This difference makes the game seem disconnected, and I think it might be better to try to combine the pixel sizes into one to make a better effect.
Coding(1-10): 10/10 Great!
Glitches(1-10): 9/10 At one point the speed/sprint bar got hidden behind a wall, but that was it.
Creativity(1-10): 8/10 A wonderful game idea, somewhat reminiscent of older Scratch 1.x games.
Grammar(1-10): 10/10
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion): Good job mate!
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit): Other than fixing the sprint bar, I'd be pretty happy with how it is.

Caleb101

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118210871/
Date(When you want it done): Whenever is possible
Skill(Your level of skill): 9/10
Miscellaneous: This game is in its early stages, so I'm less worried about specific little things (like the facts that certain variable are still on the screen) and more about the big picture ideas (like style of graphics). I'd love to hear your opinion on the concept of the project and what could be improved or added in the future. Thanks in advance.

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