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- talkingtoilet8
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Super Hero RP
#repost
I was bored the other day and I decided to rewatch the begging of the SHRP movie we were making and I saw how good it was. I realised it would be good to try to do it again. I noticed the mistake last time was that we only used people within the collab for art and animating and voices and that is why we didn't get very far. If we searched across scratch and we got help from people like leeboy5 we could make it real. It would be almost impossible, but we could try.
(beggining from last time: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/95854572/)
I also thought of an improved plot, that would have less characters but a better story. Here it is:
(this means it's not for sure)
Ten years ago, Ford Blue is talking to his son about the Serum 42. Nil comes in, claiming to work for Lionel Green, and tries to take it, but only drives Holden crazy.
Three years ago, the OAS is getting built, and Techno, Sentinel and Hydro are watching it on TV. Techno warns them about a aware sensing machine so they go away.
Six months ago, Sentinel is captured.
In present day, THe Gold Hunters first appear and discuss their plan to hold the electrity ransom. Peter PIper says he knows a guy that could make it work.
Later, Tesla Blue realeses Percieve and Courtney from prison, and sends them on a special mission to capture a powerful aware known as Nil, and to find a guy called Green whom he worked for. After they leave, Heralsen hears of it, and gets some thugs to beat up Tesla and brings her to his secret lab, where he tests some experimental Serum 42 on her. (He explains that Serum 42 is what gives awares powers. But a tank of it exploded and spread across the world infecting people with it.) He also explains that it was Percieve who was the “aware sensing machine”.
The aware, leaded by Hydro, say that they must attack the OAS HQ and rescue Sentinel, they attack, and lose terribly, and Hydro is captured while others either die, or escape. While the battle is going on, there are shots of Techno talking to the Gold Hunters.
Then Tesla Blue begins to transform into Wing Wraith because the Serum is succesful. Electric things make her unable to move. Heralson laughs.
The Gold Hunters take over the power plant with their powers. All the electricity in the city is cut out. Spectre reminds Peter Piper to ask for either ten billion dollars, or that the OAS is closed down. Then all the TVs go on, and show Peter Piper talking, with a mask on. While he talks, WIngwraith, Hydro and Sentinel try to escape the prison because the electricty is out. But then, Pete says “so you have three choices, have no more electricity, give us ten billion dollars, or…” Pete's eyes shake like Holden's when he was being controlled by Nil. “publicly admit that the aware are more powerful than humans and that we ought to rule the world”. The OAS attack the building. Techno is captured, and Myrkrio portals Peter and Spectre out. Peter then presses a button that causes the whole plant to explode, killing most of the OAS people there.
Sentinel, Hydro, and WIngWraith escape the building, but Sentinel is killed by Heralsen with a sniper rifle.
Soon after, Heraldsen is seen talking on the phone with Nil.
Percieve and COurtney find Green using their powers, and he explains the whole story of the aware.
{indicates story}
{Green, along with his scientist friends whom he knows only by Nil, Unkown, and Other, find something called the Dark Shard, whitch they use to make the Serum 42, witch they drank and gave them each a power. Green can make explosions, Nil can control minds, Unkown has green skin and can change his look, and Other can turn liquids into acid and peppers into bombs.}
While Green tells his story to Percieve and Courtney, the screen turns over to the TV, that randomly goes on, along with the lights. On it, Ford Blue gives a speech. He says that power has been reestablished across most of the city. He claims they are probably using renewable energy of some sort, screen zooms away from the TV while Ford still talks. Techno is seen, tortured in a basement with Heralsen, who is using him to power all of the city. He continues talking about how good the OAS is, and how evil the aware are, and a scene of WingWraith and Hydro escaping is seen, and then he talks about the time the aware known as Nil was sent by an aware known as Lionel Green and drove his son mad, and how his son ran away soon after, and how his son is probably into crime or something now.
Scene suddenly changes to a close up of Myrkrio, (guess why
), and zooms out to the Gold Hunters going into hiding. Spectre is sad about leaving Techno behind, Peter says it's not so bad, and he'd done worse thing before.
Then it shows Percieve and Courtney asking Green why he sent Nil to steal the Serum from Ford Blue, and he explains:
¨{Green wanted to use his powers for good, but Nil and Unkown wanted to use their powers for evil, and give the Serum to others to create a group of evil awares. Other sneaks past them and takes some of the Serum to Ford Blue. He is revealed to be Peter Piper. Then Green fights Nil and Unknown and uses his power to blow up the whole tank, accidentally causing Serum to go everywhere and turn random people into awares. Green ran away, and Unkown pretended to be Green, and Nil read Peter/Other's mind and discovered he had given some Serum to Ford Blue, so that caused everything to happen}
Then the OAS finds Green's house and attacks them. There is a fight. Green dies but Perceive and Courtney escape.
Ford begins to wonder if there are good aware, and a random aware with green skin appears and kills him, proving him wrong.
WingWraith and Hydro, and Percieve and Courtney find the Gold Hunters' hideout and they get in.
Heralson, now president of the OAS, leaves the HQ and goes to an abandoned place, where he finds Nil. He changes his appearance so he has green skin and it is revealed that he is actually Unknown. He and Nil talk about how they are strengthening the OAS in order to eliminate all the unwanted aware that were caused by the explosion and then say there are no aware left, and then close down the OAS completely. Then they would use the Dark Shard (that Nil claims to have stolen from Green's house after Green's death) to make more Serum 42 to make their own team of aware that would only be the people they trust and there would no good aware to stop them. They explain how everything they've done has made the OAS stronger because that has scared the goverment into putting more money into it. They decide to create a really powerful aware that will scare the OAS into becoming even more powerful, and they use the Dark Shard to draw them to the closest powerful aware.
This brings them to Myrkrio because he can absorb the Dark Shard to become Mega-Aware.
So WingWraith, Hydro, Spectre, Peter Piper, Percieve, Courtney, Nil, and Unknown are in the same room. Peter Piper, WingWraith, and Nil and Unkown say that it would be good to have Myrkrio use the shard as it would kill many humans, and Hydro, Spectre, Perceive and Courtney are agaisnt it. They fight between each other, but then Nil uses his mind powers to make Myrkrio absorb the Shard and become mega aware and crazy.
Then the OAS comes, and are mostly destroyed by Myrkrio. Nil and Heralsen are killed during the battle by the heroes, and WingWraith (remember that she is Tesla Blue) discovers that Myrkrio is Holden Blue, and therefore her brother, and tries to stop him from craziness by talking to him. (It's kind of cliché, though.) Holden stops being crazy, and releases the power of the Dark Shard away into outer space. Then the OAS decides not to kill them for saving them. Techno is released. And everybody gets happy and stuff.
THE END
Of course, this can be changed in many ways. Maybe Sentinel survives and fights in the final battle. Maybe Wingwraith is not Tesla Blue and simplifies the story a bit.
Characters:
The first three can be changed around a bit.
Tesla Blue/WingWraith: wings, bulletproof greenish scales, claws fro hands and feet. Can be replaced by Sentinel changing the story around a bit, or by any random OAS guard that turns into any random aware. Or maybe just cut the whole thing about the OAS guard and just have it be a random aware getting out of prison.
Hydro: can turn into water, can control water. Can be replaced by virtually anyone, espeacially Zane, Heatburn, lexi Shane, or any aware with a calm, boring, good guy personality to contrast with WingWraith's mostly violent and nasty, yet brave, approach.
Sentinel: Control over energy. Killed off early, or the main character. You decide.
Percieve: Can see faraway objects, can see things slowly allowing him to dodge attacks, can see things at night, can see X-ray, etc. SHould be likeable and happy, to contrast with everyone. Unreplaceable.
Courtney: Telekinesis over one object. And she needs a superhero name, and it can't be Herald because that would be confusing with Heraldson.
Spectre: The power of stealth. He should be a very nice guy, making it weird how he's the leader of a mafia.
Peter Piper/Other: Can turn any liquid into acid, and pickled peppers into bombs. A very bad person, but that feels very guilty for everything he does.
Holden Blue/Myrkrio /Mega-Aware: Teleporting , and a lot of other stuff when he absorbs the Dark Shard.
Techno: Control over electricty.
Nil: Can mess up your memory and control your mind.
Unknown (usually posing as Heralsen or Green): Can change his appearance.
Lionel Green: Creates explosions. (is there a character that can do that in the collab? If so, that is him)
Ford Blue: None.
I was bored the other day and I decided to rewatch the begging of the SHRP movie we were making and I saw how good it was. I realised it would be good to try to do it again. I noticed the mistake last time was that we only used people within the collab for art and animating and voices and that is why we didn't get very far. If we searched across scratch and we got help from people like leeboy5 we could make it real. It would be almost impossible, but we could try.
(beggining from last time: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/95854572/)
I also thought of an improved plot, that would have less characters but a better story. Here it is:
(this means it's not for sure)
Ten years ago, Ford Blue is talking to his son about the Serum 42. Nil comes in, claiming to work for Lionel Green, and tries to take it, but only drives Holden crazy.
Three years ago, the OAS is getting built, and Techno, Sentinel and Hydro are watching it on TV. Techno warns them about a aware sensing machine so they go away.
Six months ago, Sentinel is captured.
In present day, THe Gold Hunters first appear and discuss their plan to hold the electrity ransom. Peter PIper says he knows a guy that could make it work.
Later, Tesla Blue realeses Percieve and Courtney from prison, and sends them on a special mission to capture a powerful aware known as Nil, and to find a guy called Green whom he worked for. After they leave, Heralsen hears of it, and gets some thugs to beat up Tesla and brings her to his secret lab, where he tests some experimental Serum 42 on her. (He explains that Serum 42 is what gives awares powers. But a tank of it exploded and spread across the world infecting people with it.) He also explains that it was Percieve who was the “aware sensing machine”.
The aware, leaded by Hydro, say that they must attack the OAS HQ and rescue Sentinel, they attack, and lose terribly, and Hydro is captured while others either die, or escape. While the battle is going on, there are shots of Techno talking to the Gold Hunters.
Then Tesla Blue begins to transform into Wing Wraith because the Serum is succesful. Electric things make her unable to move. Heralson laughs.
The Gold Hunters take over the power plant with their powers. All the electricity in the city is cut out. Spectre reminds Peter Piper to ask for either ten billion dollars, or that the OAS is closed down. Then all the TVs go on, and show Peter Piper talking, with a mask on. While he talks, WIngwraith, Hydro and Sentinel try to escape the prison because the electricty is out. But then, Pete says “so you have three choices, have no more electricity, give us ten billion dollars, or…” Pete's eyes shake like Holden's when he was being controlled by Nil. “publicly admit that the aware are more powerful than humans and that we ought to rule the world”. The OAS attack the building. Techno is captured, and Myrkrio portals Peter and Spectre out. Peter then presses a button that causes the whole plant to explode, killing most of the OAS people there.
Sentinel, Hydro, and WIngWraith escape the building, but Sentinel is killed by Heralsen with a sniper rifle.
Soon after, Heraldsen is seen talking on the phone with Nil.
Percieve and COurtney find Green using their powers, and he explains the whole story of the aware.
{indicates story}
{Green, along with his scientist friends whom he knows only by Nil, Unkown, and Other, find something called the Dark Shard, whitch they use to make the Serum 42, witch they drank and gave them each a power. Green can make explosions, Nil can control minds, Unkown has green skin and can change his look, and Other can turn liquids into acid and peppers into bombs.}
While Green tells his story to Percieve and Courtney, the screen turns over to the TV, that randomly goes on, along with the lights. On it, Ford Blue gives a speech. He says that power has been reestablished across most of the city. He claims they are probably using renewable energy of some sort, screen zooms away from the TV while Ford still talks. Techno is seen, tortured in a basement with Heralsen, who is using him to power all of the city. He continues talking about how good the OAS is, and how evil the aware are, and a scene of WingWraith and Hydro escaping is seen, and then he talks about the time the aware known as Nil was sent by an aware known as Lionel Green and drove his son mad, and how his son ran away soon after, and how his son is probably into crime or something now.
Scene suddenly changes to a close up of Myrkrio, (guess why
), and zooms out to the Gold Hunters going into hiding. Spectre is sad about leaving Techno behind, Peter says it's not so bad, and he'd done worse thing before. Then it shows Percieve and Courtney asking Green why he sent Nil to steal the Serum from Ford Blue, and he explains:
¨{Green wanted to use his powers for good, but Nil and Unkown wanted to use their powers for evil, and give the Serum to others to create a group of evil awares. Other sneaks past them and takes some of the Serum to Ford Blue. He is revealed to be Peter Piper. Then Green fights Nil and Unknown and uses his power to blow up the whole tank, accidentally causing Serum to go everywhere and turn random people into awares. Green ran away, and Unkown pretended to be Green, and Nil read Peter/Other's mind and discovered he had given some Serum to Ford Blue, so that caused everything to happen}
Then the OAS finds Green's house and attacks them. There is a fight. Green dies but Perceive and Courtney escape.
Ford begins to wonder if there are good aware, and a random aware with green skin appears and kills him, proving him wrong.
WingWraith and Hydro, and Percieve and Courtney find the Gold Hunters' hideout and they get in.
Heralson, now president of the OAS, leaves the HQ and goes to an abandoned place, where he finds Nil. He changes his appearance so he has green skin and it is revealed that he is actually Unknown. He and Nil talk about how they are strengthening the OAS in order to eliminate all the unwanted aware that were caused by the explosion and then say there are no aware left, and then close down the OAS completely. Then they would use the Dark Shard (that Nil claims to have stolen from Green's house after Green's death) to make more Serum 42 to make their own team of aware that would only be the people they trust and there would no good aware to stop them. They explain how everything they've done has made the OAS stronger because that has scared the goverment into putting more money into it. They decide to create a really powerful aware that will scare the OAS into becoming even more powerful, and they use the Dark Shard to draw them to the closest powerful aware.
This brings them to Myrkrio because he can absorb the Dark Shard to become Mega-Aware.
So WingWraith, Hydro, Spectre, Peter Piper, Percieve, Courtney, Nil, and Unknown are in the same room. Peter Piper, WingWraith, and Nil and Unkown say that it would be good to have Myrkrio use the shard as it would kill many humans, and Hydro, Spectre, Perceive and Courtney are agaisnt it. They fight between each other, but then Nil uses his mind powers to make Myrkrio absorb the Shard and become mega aware and crazy.
Then the OAS comes, and are mostly destroyed by Myrkrio. Nil and Heralsen are killed during the battle by the heroes, and WingWraith (remember that she is Tesla Blue) discovers that Myrkrio is Holden Blue, and therefore her brother, and tries to stop him from craziness by talking to him. (It's kind of cliché, though.) Holden stops being crazy, and releases the power of the Dark Shard away into outer space. Then the OAS decides not to kill them for saving them. Techno is released. And everybody gets happy and stuff.
THE END
Of course, this can be changed in many ways. Maybe Sentinel survives and fights in the final battle. Maybe Wingwraith is not Tesla Blue and simplifies the story a bit.
Characters:
The first three can be changed around a bit.
Tesla Blue/WingWraith: wings, bulletproof greenish scales, claws fro hands and feet. Can be replaced by Sentinel changing the story around a bit, or by any random OAS guard that turns into any random aware. Or maybe just cut the whole thing about the OAS guard and just have it be a random aware getting out of prison.
Hydro: can turn into water, can control water. Can be replaced by virtually anyone, espeacially Zane, Heatburn, lexi Shane, or any aware with a calm, boring, good guy personality to contrast with WingWraith's mostly violent and nasty, yet brave, approach.
Sentinel: Control over energy. Killed off early, or the main character. You decide.
Percieve: Can see faraway objects, can see things slowly allowing him to dodge attacks, can see things at night, can see X-ray, etc. SHould be likeable and happy, to contrast with everyone. Unreplaceable.
Courtney: Telekinesis over one object. And she needs a superhero name, and it can't be Herald because that would be confusing with Heraldson.
Spectre: The power of stealth. He should be a very nice guy, making it weird how he's the leader of a mafia.
Peter Piper/Other: Can turn any liquid into acid, and pickled peppers into bombs. A very bad person, but that feels very guilty for everything he does.
Holden Blue/Myrkrio /Mega-Aware: Teleporting , and a lot of other stuff when he absorbs the Dark Shard.
Techno: Control over electricty.
Nil: Can mess up your memory and control your mind.
Unknown (usually posing as Heralsen or Green): Can change his appearance.
Lionel Green: Creates explosions. (is there a character that can do that in the collab? If so, that is him)
Ford Blue: None.
Last edited by talkingtoilet8 (July 20, 2016 09:59:20)
- talkingtoilet8
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Super Hero RP
I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.html
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice with the program above)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown:
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice with the program above)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown:
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
Last edited by talkingtoilet8 (July 20, 2016 15:08:40)
- stryer21
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Super Hero RP
I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.htmlMe, I can do voice-acting!
I still don't know if it works, can somebody test it?
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown: (maybe a robot?)
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
- talkingtoilet8
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Super Hero RP
Great! Pick a character or two. Choose between Hydro, Green, Percieve, Unknown or Heraldson. If you want, you can redo Nil so it's not me talking again, and do all his other lines.I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.htmlMe, I can do voice-acting!
I still don't know if it works, can somebody test it?
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown: (maybe a robot?)
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
- stryer21
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Super Hero RP
I can do, Heraldson and HydroGreat! Pick a character or two. Choose between Hydro, Green, Percieve, Unknown or Heraldson. If you want, you can redo Nil so it's not me talking again, and do all his other lines.I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.htmlMe, I can do voice-acting!
I still don't know if it works, can somebody test it?
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown: (maybe a robot?)
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
Last edited by stryer21 (July 20, 2016 15:18:22)
- -FreshStart-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Super Hero RP
Too much to read!!
I am going to die!! I'm only at page 15 and no user listings yet!
*yawns*
I am going to die!! I'm only at page 15 and no user listings yet!
*yawns*
- redbird2000
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Scratcher
54 posts
Super Hero RP
I guess I mean that it can change into a blade or hammer or even a rock solid fist or a tentacle to get around… spider man! spider man! does wha- ok I'm done.Name: kin
Gender: boy or girl depends
Age: 16
Personality: laid back chill but strangely paranoid
Appearance: sandy blonde hair, white with blue eyes and frekills
Backstory: well he was a normal kid tell his 13th birth day he lucid dreamed and created a alternate personality and his left arm gained the ability to change form( be cause when one of them's knocked out there conches go's to the left arm were they dot feel pain so it can change form to a level).
Talents and skills: changeing his left arms form(but causes horrible nightmares and pain), has a very good idea of the mind( cause they live up in there), and hyper intelligent.
Super Powers (if any): noda
Weaknesses: basically insane, and its power slowly takes over.
Other info: he has the nick name turtle bc he walk and walk reely sllloooooow.
Changing his arm's form sure sounds like a superpower, not a talent XD but explain what you mean by changing forms. Can he change what it's made of? What its shape is? Can it turn into anything?
- redbird2000
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Scratcher
54 posts
Super Hero RP
I think I read all or at least most of it.can I join!!!!!!!!
Read the whole front post
I have a mild headaek
- RainaERusch
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Super Hero RP
Name: Drusilla VonHemistlan
Gender: female
Age: appears to be around 20, but no one is certain.
Personality: She is childlike and girlish, but loves to see the suffering of others. She is insane and a psychopath.
Appearance: She has straight black hair and pale skin. She is frail and delicate. She has unusually sharp fingernails which can cut skin easily.
Backstory: When she was very young, a man broke into her house and killed her parents in front of her. She saw them bleed out in front of her. The police arrived just before she was killed and caught the murderer. No mater what therapy she went though, she never got over the experience. Her sanity slipped away and she was thrown in an insane asylum. At around the age of 15, she managed to escape. All throughout her life, she has had been able to see flashes of the future and occasionally look into someone's soul.
Talents and skills: She is adept at getting information from people. Whether it is by force, torture, or just talking, she can usually get the information out of them.
Super Powers (if any): She can see into people's souls and determine their character. She has been able to see flashes of the future, but involuntarily.
Weaknesses: She is insane. After she sees a flash of the future, she usually falls unconscious for a day or so at a time and is weak for days after that.
Other info: She doesn't fight with with weapons, she uses her fingernails.
Gender: female
Age: appears to be around 20, but no one is certain.
Personality: She is childlike and girlish, but loves to see the suffering of others. She is insane and a psychopath.
Appearance: She has straight black hair and pale skin. She is frail and delicate. She has unusually sharp fingernails which can cut skin easily.
Backstory: When she was very young, a man broke into her house and killed her parents in front of her. She saw them bleed out in front of her. The police arrived just before she was killed and caught the murderer. No mater what therapy she went though, she never got over the experience. Her sanity slipped away and she was thrown in an insane asylum. At around the age of 15, she managed to escape. All throughout her life, she has had been able to see flashes of the future and occasionally look into someone's soul.
Talents and skills: She is adept at getting information from people. Whether it is by force, torture, or just talking, she can usually get the information out of them.
Super Powers (if any): She can see into people's souls and determine their character. She has been able to see flashes of the future, but involuntarily.
Weaknesses: She is insane. After she sees a flash of the future, she usually falls unconscious for a day or so at a time and is weak for days after that.
Other info: She doesn't fight with with weapons, she uses her fingernails.
- makethebrainhappy
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Super Hero RP
I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.html
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice with the program above)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown:
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
I can do any character with the robot. Crimsons characters especially, he always makes them very unemotional
- MegaByteCorporations
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Super Hero RP
I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.htmlI think Unknown ought to be a robot, as it would be easiest to discern from the other characters.(Because of his power.)
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice with the program above)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown:
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
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I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.htmlI think Unknown ought to be a robot, as it would be easiest to discern from the other characters.(Because of his power.)
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice with the program above)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown: Makethebrainhappy's robot
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
True. Since he will only talk a few times, he should have a very distict voice.
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derp
Last edited by talkingtoilet8 (July 20, 2016 22:24:15)
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I found this on the internet. We could use it for characters with low voices like Myrkrio or Spectre. http://onlinetonegenerator.com/pitch-shifter.html
And we need to choose a voice for each character. We need to fill in the blanks. Who has a working microphone?
Tesla Blue/Wingwraith:
Hydro:
Sentinel: HarryB178
Percieve:
Courtney:
Spectre:
Peter Piper: Talkingtoilet8 (with cranky voice)
Holden Blue/Myrkrio: Talkingtoilet8 (with normal voice/lower pitched voice with the program above)
Nil: Talkingtoilet8 (with a Spanish accent, for some reason)
Unknown:
Heraldson (even if he's the same person, he should have another voice)
Lionel Green:
Ford Blue: HarryB178
Newsreaders, OAS Guards, bystanders, etc: Makethebrainhappy's pet robot
I can do any character with the robot. Crimsons characters especially, he always makes them very unemotional
Perceive and Axel have emotions.
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Spritepack
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/72680086/
Yes, but not many of those are very useful. I used the Mettalz sprite to make Myrkrio by changing his head, and the sprite for Ray Alpha could be edited to look like Percieve. We already have a sprite for Sentinel that is better, and all the other sprites aren't even in the movie.
Also, remember that Myrkrio has been changed to teleporting instead of portal making because it's much easier to animate (negative fisheye effect) and Feth has been renamed to WIngWraith because it sounds cooler.
STUFF THAT NEEDS DOING
@Spriters
Currently, the only characters that need spriting are Hydro (I'll do him now), Courtney, Heraldson, the Unknown's original form, editing Ray Alpha to look like Percieve, and editing the Feth sprite to make both WingWraith and Tesla Blue.
Also, if anyone can sprite or animate, and has nothing to do, making fighting poses for characters, like Spectre slashing his sword,
@Animators
Make this scene, as soon as I finish drawing Hydro:
*Zooms out to show the Aware team watching television*
(Hydro, Techno, Sentinel, and some other Awares are there)
Hydro: They can't do that! We've done nothing wrong!
Sentinel: They are afraid. We must relocate. Alert the others.
*Techno places a hand to his forehead and begins telling the others.*
Techno: I am searching the internet. The OAS are only three blocks away! And they have some form of scanner that can detect Awares. Let's get out of here!”
(All run out)
And this scene too, if possible
“present day”
(In the Gold Hunter's base, Spectre, Myrkrio, Peter Piper)
Myrkrio: ”Sir, I've located a power plant adequate for your plan's execution.“
Spectre's face is revealed in the darkness, a smirk all over it.
Spectre: ”Perfect, we'll need a skilled hacker in order to infiltrate such security.“
Peter Piper: ”I know a person“
Spectre: ”Please do the honour of enlightening me“
Peter Piper: He goes only by “Techno”
Myrkrio: ”But sir, they demand at least 400 credits“
Spectre: ”And have it, they shall. Get into contact with this “Techno”, ensure they understand their role in the, liberation, of the city“.
Myrkrio: ”Liberation?“
Spectre: ”We will be freed from the OAS, and once we do that, we will have this city in our grasp! “.
Scene ends with all Gold Hunters, presumably around a snooker table, grinning.
@Scripwriters
FInd the scene with Percieve and Courtney. It's… somewhere… around page 300 or so.
And continue writing the plot. I posted it back on page 465
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THE CURRENT SCRIPT
The Aware - Niluminati - Episode 1
Already voiced
Already voiced and animated
*Black screen with quiet music*
Voice: There was a time when mankind was equal. They fought between themselves to gain supremacy and pride. To gain power over each other. They had nations and empires. But no longer. Now they have a common enemy. Us.
*Screen begins showing various images and animations of Aware*
Voice: We are the Aware, and we have been gifted. Gifted with abilities that men can only dream of. These gift allow us to interact with our environment around us. But those gifts come at a price. And the prices we pay are great.
*Screen begins showing Aware being killed by OAS*
Voice: I am Sentinel. And I have been chosen to lead the Aware to victory and to freedom. Whatever the cost.
*Zooms out to show the full cast with Sentinel in the middle*
*Flashback*
Screen shows ten years earlier
*Ford and Holden are walking together inside an office building*
Ford: Son, what do you think we should do about the new rival company that Mr Green is setting up? There have been rumours that he may resort to unsavoury tactics to beat us.
Holden: Dad, since when have we ever been scared of threats. Our company is far better than Green's and the world knows it. The government will be begging to get our hands on the Subject 42 Serum. We just need to perfect it.
Ford: Well, true, but -
*They are interrupted as the wall explodes and Nil walks in*
Nil: Mr Green sends his regards. The serum?
*Nil holds out his hand*
Ford, shaking his head: Never!
*Holden charges at Nil, but Nil uses his powers to make him go crazy. Meanwhile, Ford pulls out a gun and shoots Nil*
*Nil falls down, then turns and runs away*
Nil: I'll be back!
*Ford kneels next to his son*
Ford, emotionally: Son, Holden? Are you alright?
*Holden looks at him, his eyes wild, then starts laughing maniacally*
Ford: No! Son! Nooo!
*Switches to 3 years ago*
Newsreader: The government have officially announced creation of the OAS, the Organisation for Apprehending Superhumans. This organistation will be lead by Ford Blue, a former businessman. In the recent weeks, we have seen have the so-called ‘Aware’ can be a danger to our society. The OAS will be going round and searching houses, starting from today.
*Zooms out to show the Aware team watching television*
(Hydro, Techno, Sentinel, and some other Awares are there)
Hydro: They can't do that! We've done nothing wrong!
Sentinel: They are afraid. We must relocate. Alert the others.
*Techno places a hand to his forehead and begins telling the others.*
Techno: I am searching the internet. The OAS are only three blocks away! And they have some form of scanner that can detect Awares. Let's get out of here!”
(All run out)
“present day”
SCENE WITH PERCIEVE AND COURTNEY THAT I CANT FIND
SCENE WITH SENTINEL'S CAPTURE THAT I CAN'T FIND
(In the Gold Hunter's base, Spectre, Myrkrio, Peter Piper)
Myrkrio: ”Sir, I've located a power plant adequate for your plan's execution.“
Spectre's face is revealed in the darkness, a smirk all over it.
Spectre: ”Perfect, we'll need a skilled hacker in order to infiltrate such security.“
Peter Piper: ”I know a person“
Spectre: ”Please do the honour of enlightening me“
Peter Piper: He goes only by “Techno”
Myrkrio: ”But sir, they demand at least 400 credits“
Spectre: ”And have it, they shall. Get into contact with this “Techno”, ensure they understand their role in the, liberation, of the city“.
Myrkrio: ”Liberation?“
Spectre: ”We will be freed from the OAS, and once we do that, we will have this city in our grasp! “.
Scene ends with all Gold Hunters, presumably around a snooker table, grinning.
The Aware - Niluminati - Episode 1
Already voiced
Already voiced and animated
*Black screen with quiet music*
Voice: There was a time when mankind was equal. They fought between themselves to gain supremacy and pride. To gain power over each other. They had nations and empires. But no longer. Now they have a common enemy. Us.
*Screen begins showing various images and animations of Aware*
Voice: We are the Aware, and we have been gifted. Gifted with abilities that men can only dream of. These gift allow us to interact with our environment around us. But those gifts come at a price. And the prices we pay are great.
*Screen begins showing Aware being killed by OAS*
Voice: I am Sentinel. And I have been chosen to lead the Aware to victory and to freedom. Whatever the cost.
*Zooms out to show the full cast with Sentinel in the middle*
*Flashback*
Screen shows ten years earlier
*Ford and Holden are walking together inside an office building*
Ford: Son, what do you think we should do about the new rival company that Mr Green is setting up? There have been rumours that he may resort to unsavoury tactics to beat us.
Holden: Dad, since when have we ever been scared of threats. Our company is far better than Green's and the world knows it. The government will be begging to get our hands on the Subject 42 Serum. We just need to perfect it.
Ford: Well, true, but -
*They are interrupted as the wall explodes and Nil walks in*
Nil: Mr Green sends his regards. The serum?
*Nil holds out his hand*
Ford, shaking his head: Never!
*Holden charges at Nil, but Nil uses his powers to make him go crazy. Meanwhile, Ford pulls out a gun and shoots Nil*
*Nil falls down, then turns and runs away*
Nil: I'll be back!
*Ford kneels next to his son*
Ford, emotionally: Son, Holden? Are you alright?
*Holden looks at him, his eyes wild, then starts laughing maniacally*
Ford: No! Son! Nooo!
*Switches to 3 years ago*
Newsreader: The government have officially announced creation of the OAS, the Organisation for Apprehending Superhumans. This organistation will be lead by Ford Blue, a former businessman. In the recent weeks, we have seen have the so-called ‘Aware’ can be a danger to our society. The OAS will be going round and searching houses, starting from today.
*Zooms out to show the Aware team watching television*
(Hydro, Techno, Sentinel, and some other Awares are there)
Hydro: They can't do that! We've done nothing wrong!
Sentinel: They are afraid. We must relocate. Alert the others.
*Techno places a hand to his forehead and begins telling the others.*
Techno: I am searching the internet. The OAS are only three blocks away! And they have some form of scanner that can detect Awares. Let's get out of here!”
(All run out)
“present day”
SCENE WITH PERCIEVE AND COURTNEY THAT I CANT FIND
SCENE WITH SENTINEL'S CAPTURE THAT I CAN'T FIND
(In the Gold Hunter's base, Spectre, Myrkrio, Peter Piper)
Myrkrio: ”Sir, I've located a power plant adequate for your plan's execution.“
Spectre's face is revealed in the darkness, a smirk all over it.
Spectre: ”Perfect, we'll need a skilled hacker in order to infiltrate such security.“
Peter Piper: ”I know a person“
Spectre: ”Please do the honour of enlightening me“
Peter Piper: He goes only by “Techno”
Myrkrio: ”But sir, they demand at least 400 credits“
Spectre: ”And have it, they shall. Get into contact with this “Techno”, ensure they understand their role in the, liberation, of the city“.
Myrkrio: ”Liberation?“
Spectre: ”We will be freed from the OAS, and once we do that, we will have this city in our grasp! “.
Scene ends with all Gold Hunters, presumably around a snooker table, grinning.