Here I'll judge your MLP OCs (Origanal Characters) and give you pointers on how to make them better and more attracting!

What to tell me so I can judge your Pony:

- Give me their name

- Link a picture so I know what it looks like

- Tell me their backstory (Ya need one!)

- Tell me how they got their cutie mark

- Link a picture to the their cutie mark so I can see a close up of it.

- When you show me their picture use your own art! (No bases, Pony generator, Etc.)
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I know what your thinking and no, I WON'T judge your drawing style! I will treat every pony OC like it was in the show. So If you don't draw very well, then don't worry!

this is my oc splish splash, here's her info. (i have way better ocs i'll have rated in the future)
when young, she lived with her dad on the beach, and learned to swim with him. when she was old enough to take the family business, her father left. learning lifeguarding was challenging, but she has saved many ponies and is still very social and fun.
she got her cutie mark the day she saved my other oc (lightning bolt) from drowning. bolt couldn't fly very well or swim, because this was pre-rainboom. (bolt's inspiration.) the cutie mark looks like this

cs156175 wrote:

this is my oc splish splash, here's her info. (i have way better ocs i'll have rated in the future)
when young, she lived with her dad on the beach, and learned to swim with him. when she was old enough to take the family business, her father left. learning lifeguarding was challenging, but she has saved many ponies and is still very social and fun.
she got her cutie mark the day she saved my other oc (lightning bolt) from drowning. bolt couldn't fly very well or swim, because this was pre-rainboom. (bolt's inspiration.) the cutie mark looks like this

I like the design. The cutie mark makes sense. And the backstory makes sense with the design. Just one thing is that she does not have negative traits to balance her personality. The bad personality traits can make the character more interesting. So you could have overly protective or something else that would fit her character. But overall I like this pony. I can see an episode with her in it. I rate this 4 out of 5 stars. Good job!

pokekirnaf wrote:

cs156175 wrote:

this is my oc splish splash, here's her info. (i have way better ocs i'll have rated in the future)
when young, she lived with her dad on the beach, and learned to swim with him. when she was old enough to take the family business, her father left. learning lifeguarding was challenging, but she has saved many ponies and is still very social and fun.
she got her cutie mark the day she saved my other oc (lightning bolt) from drowning. bolt couldn't fly very well or swim, because this was pre-rainboom. (bolt's inspiration.) the cutie mark looks like this

I like the design. The cutie mark makes sense. And the backstory makes sense with the design. Just one thing is that she does not have negative traits to balance her personality. The bad personality traits can make the character more interesting. So you could have overly protective or something else that would fit her character. But overall I like this pony. I can see an episode with her in it. I rate this 4 out of 5 stars. Good job!

haha, thanks! would it be ok for me to submit more of my ocs later/now? and a side not, that was drawn on ms paint.

cs156175 wrote:

pokekirnaf wrote:

cs156175 wrote:

this is my oc splish splash, here's her info. (i have way better ocs i'll have rated in the future)
when young, she lived with her dad on the beach, and learned to swim with him. when she was old enough to take the family business, her father left. learning lifeguarding was challenging, but she has saved many ponies and is still very social and fun.
she got her cutie mark the day she saved my other oc (lightning bolt) from drowning. bolt couldn't fly very well or swim, because this was pre-rainboom. (bolt's inspiration.) the cutie mark looks like this

I like the design. The cutie mark makes sense. And the backstory makes sense with the design. Just one thing is that she does not have negative traits to balance her personality. The bad personality traits can make the character more interesting. So you could have overly protective or something else that would fit her character. But overall I like this pony. I can see an episode with her in it. I rate this 4 out of 5 stars. Good job!

haha, thanks! would it be ok for me to submit more of my ocs later/now? and a side not, that was drawn on ms paint.

Sure you can add the rest of your ocs!

Do you grade non-mlp OC's?

this is syrup flip, my champion pancake pony.
though her life, she had a younger sister named shortbread who seemed to do everything better then her, except the fact that she was a blank flank. they had many fights over this. when older, she moved to manehattan to seek fortune, and opened flip's flapjacks, a successful pancake venue. she is a perfectionist, and tries to stay calm most of the time. however, when things don't go fully her way she can lash out and get mad. her cutie mark story is one of the strangest of my oc's, and that's because she doesn't remember. she got it when she was so young she couldn't speak, and her parent's werent with her. it was also nighttime, so nopony realized she'd gotten it until the morning. this is a closeup of her mark:

aptitude wrote:

Do you grade non-mlp OC's?

I rate em

just saying, i submitted another

cs156175 wrote:

this is syrup flip, my champion pancake pony.
though her life, she had a younger sister named shortbread who seemed to do everything better then her, except the fact that she was a blank flank. they had many fights over this. when older, she moved to manehattan to seek fortune, and opened flip's flapjacks, a successful pancake venue. she is a perfectionist, and tries to stay calm most of the time. however, when things don't go fully her way she can lash out and get mad. her cutie mark story is one of the strangest of my oc's, and that's because she doesn't remember. she got it when she was so young she couldn't speak, and her parent's werent with her. it was also nighttime, so nopony realized she'd gotten it until the morning. this is a closeup of her mark:

The backstory fits the character. I see you took my advice with the personality. But the way she got her cutie mark is weird… she probably knew who she was meant to be from the start. And the design is cute. I rate 4 and a 1/2 stars out of 5.

pokekirnaf wrote:

cs156175 wrote:

this is syrup flip, my champion pancake pony.
though her life, she had a younger sister named shortbread who seemed to do everything better then her, except the fact that she was a blank flank. they had many fights over this. when older, she moved to manehattan to seek fortune, and opened flip's flapjacks, a successful pancake venue. she is a perfectionist, and tries to stay calm most of the time. however, when things don't go fully her way she can lash out and get mad. her cutie mark story is one of the strangest of my oc's, and that's because she doesn't remember. she got it when she was so young she couldn't speak, and her parent's werent with her. it was also nighttime, so nopony realized she'd gotten it until the morning. this is a closeup of her mark:

The backstory fits the character. I see you took my advice with the personality. But the way she got her cutie mark is weird… she probably knew who she was meant to be from the start. And the design is cute. I rate 4 and a 1/2 stars out of 5.

thanks!

this is syrup flip, my champion pancake pony.
though her life, she had a younger sister named shortbread who seemed to do everything better then her, except the fact that she was a blank flank. they had many fights over this. when older, she moved to manehattan to seek fortune, and opened flip's flapjacks, a successful pancake venue. she is a perfectionist, and tries to stay calm most of the time. however, when things don't go fully her way she can lash out and get mad. her cutie mark story is one of the strangest of my oc's, and that's because she doesn't remember. she got it when she was so young she couldn't speak, and her parent's werent with her. it was also nighttime, so nopony realized she'd gotten it until the morning. this is a closeup of her mark:

Can you judge my OC please?

Chameleon20 wrote:

Can you judge my OC please?

U dont have to ask me just post it. Also yes.

My OC is called Frosty Hooves. They are a male pegasus with light blue fur and an icy blue mane. He was born in Fillydelphia and had a love for winter sports. He didn't have any brothers or sisters so he grew up as a lonely pegasus. He thought he would never make friends and was teased for being a ‘blank flank’ however, one day he entered an ice archery competition and won first place then his cutie mar appeared. A snowflake with wings. He also was a keen flyer and leaves and ice trail behind him, he later on moved to Ponyville and managed to buy a floating island filled with snow and his current profession is maintaining the snow in Equastria and he's capable of freezing the round if he manages to fly fast enough over the ground but he's a bit careless and sometimes crashes and has accidentally nearly destroyed Ponyville by shooting an ice arrow at a cloud. Overall he's a young friendly pegasus who likes eating waffles. _waffle_

Chameleon20 wrote:

My OC is called Frosty Hooves. They are a male pegasus with light blue fur and an icy blue mane. He was born in Fillydelphia and had a love for winter sports. He didn't have any brothers or sisters so he grew up as a lonely pegasus. He thought he would never make friends and was teased for being a ‘blank flank’ however, one day he entered an ice archery competition and won first place then his cutie mar appeared. A snowflake with wings. He also was a keen flyer and leaves and ice trail behind him, he later on moved to Ponyville and managed to buy a floating island filled with snow and his current profession is maintaining the snow in Equastria and he's capable of freezing the round if he manages to fly fast enough over the ground but he's a bit careless and sometimes crashes and has accidentally nearly destroyed Ponyville by shooting an ice arrow at a cloud. Overall he's a young friendly pegasus who likes eating waffles. _waffle_

you can post images..

How do you do it in forums though?

Chameleon20 wrote:

How do you do it in forums though?

go to cubeupload, upload the pics, copy the url, and then press the image button in the forums and paste it. example:
this pic.

k, thx.

Is this only for popular scratchers?