matthewscratch06 wrote:

OK IM STARTING TO PUT ISSUE 1 TOGETHER

Issue 1

STORIES/INTERVIEWS/REVIEWS

Umm sorry thats all i can do for now we need more stories and things so i can add them in

scream101 wrote:

matthewscratch06 wrote:

OK IM STARTING TO PUT ISSUE 1 TOGETHER

Issue 1

STORIES/INTERVIEWS/REVIEWS

Umm sorry thats all i can do for now we need more stories and things so i can add them in

the paper will be released next Monday.

matthewscratch06 wrote:

scream101 wrote:

matthewscratch06 wrote:

OK IM STARTING TO PUT ISSUE 1 TOGETHER

Issue 1

STORIES/INTERVIEWS/REVIEWS

Umm sorry thats all i can do for now we need more stories and things so i can add them in

the paper will be released next Monday.

ok
im working on putting everythig together

scream101 wrote:

matthewscratch06 wrote:

scream101 wrote:

matthewscratch06 wrote:

OK IM STARTING TO PUT ISSUE 1 TOGETHER

Issue 1

STORIES/INTERVIEWS/REVIEWS

Umm sorry thats all i can do for now we need more stories and things so i can add them in

the paper will be released next Monday.

ok
im working on putting everythig together

matthew, I release the paper as a project, then you make it as a forum post.

clockwise12 wrote:

Billy:

Mother cries. Janette watches me solemnly sit in my car. Hands on her hips, she walks into her home. Father holds his head in disgrace. I close the car door and their voices are hushed. I start the engine of my Honda Accord. I look to my left and Father is staring at me with a stern look and comforts mother in his shoulders. I look forward and push my foot foward. I turn the radio on, and the song is Hymn for the Weekend by Coldplay. I hum the lyrics. “When I was a river, dried up, you came down and rain,” was all I could hear in my car. I think about the meaning. When I was down, and needed sympathy, Janette gave it to me. I can't believe I'm doing this. I don't know where I'm going. I'm afraid for Janette. I remember all the times Janette used to fall on my shoulder, and cry. I helped her. 2 years ago we became GF and BF. Back then we just hung out. Next month I planned to propose on her birthday. After some complications that are innapropiate for scratch, I am leaving. Maybe Kyle will let me stay at his house. But he has a little brother that messes with his stuff. I don't know where I'm going to go. I don't know what's going to happen. I had everything at Janette's. But I wasted it. Now I'm stuck here. Nobody said it would be easy, yet no one said it would be so hard. TWO YEARS EARLIER. (Narrating what happened) I had to find her, tell her I need her. Tell her my secrets, and ask her my questions. Running in circles, looking for the perfect time. When I speak to you, I only guess numbers and figures. Putting the puzzle together. Questions I asked that I asked that asked, speak as loud as my heart.

PART ONE

clockwise12 wrote:

Billy:

Mother cries. Janette watches me solemnly sit in my car. Hands on her hips, she walks into her home. Father holds his head in disgrace. I close the car door and their voices are hushed. I start the engine of my Honda Accord. I look to my left and Father is staring at me with a stern look and comforts mother in his shoulders. I look forward and push my foot foward. I turn the radio on, and the song is Hymn for the Weekend by Coldplay. I hum the lyrics. “When I was a river, dried up, you came down and rain,” was all I could hear in my car. I think about the meaning. When I was down, and needed sympathy, Janette gave it to me. I can't believe I'm doing this. I don't know where I'm going. I'm afraid for Janette. I remember all the times Janette used to fall on my shoulder, and cry. I helped her. 2 years ago we became GF and BF. Back then we just hung out. Next month I planned to propose on her birthday. After some complications that are innapropiate for scratch, I am leaving. Maybe Kyle will let me stay at his house. But he has a little brother that messes with his stuff. I don't know where I'm going to go. I don't know what's going to happen. I had everything at Janette's. But I wasted it. Now I'm stuck here. Nobody said it would be easy, yet no one said it would be so hard. TWO YEARS EARLIER. (Narrating what happened) I had to find her, tell her I need her. Tell her my secrets, and ask her my questions. Running in circles, looking for the perfect time. When I speak to you, I only guess numbers and figures. Putting the puzzle together. Questions I asked that I asked that asked, speak as loud as my heart.

PART ONE

matthewscratch06 wrote:

clockwise12 wrote:

Billy:

Mother cries. Janette watches me solemnly sit in my car. Hands on her hips, she walks into her home. Father holds his head in disgrace. I close the car door and their voices are hushed. I start the engine of my Honda Accord. I look to my left and Father is staring at me with a stern look and comforts mother in his shoulders. I look forward and push my foot foward. I turn the radio on, and the song is Hymn for the Weekend by Coldplay. I hum the lyrics. “When I was a river, dried up, you came down and rain,” was all I could hear in my car. I think about the meaning. When I was down, and needed sympathy, Janette gave it to me. I can't believe I'm doing this. I don't know where I'm going. I'm afraid for Janette. I remember all the times Janette used to fall on my shoulder, and cry. I helped her. 2 years ago we became GF and BF. Back then we just hung out. Next month I planned to propose on her birthday. After some complications that are innapropiate for scratch, I am leaving. Maybe Kyle will let me stay at his house. But he has a little brother that messes with his stuff. I don't know where I'm going to go. I don't know what's going to happen. I had everything at Janette's. But I wasted it. Now I'm stuck here. Nobody said it would be easy, yet no one said it would be so hard. TWO YEARS EARLIER. (Narrating what happened) I had to find her, tell her I need her. Tell her my secrets, and ask her my questions. Running in circles, looking for the perfect time. When I speak to you, I only guess numbers and figures. Putting the puzzle together. Questions I asked that I asked that asked, speak as loud as my heart.

PART ONE

cool is this part of the story or what is it the review or a story?

matthewscratch06 wrote:

AC Revelations review:

Although it may be an old game, Ubisoft's ACRevel. tops any game I've ever seen. The story line is very deep, cutting between Altair Ibn La'ahad and Ezio Auditore's stories, and showing how they have a connection to each other. Along the way we meet some characters such as Sofia Sartor, whom which Ezio falls in love with, Yusuf Tazim, a fellow assassin, and the Sultan. It is the final game in Ezio's trilogy, thus the game's name is Revelations (conclusion, finale). Sofia and Ezio meet on a ship, and Ezio falls in love. To show that he has a “crush” on Sofia, he carries her cargo. I love how the writers of the story put in some cliches from today's world and put them in so subtly in the time (these games are historical fiction) that these games are in. A fellow italian tries to steal Sofia so Ezio beats him up. It turns out to be one of Ezio's childhood enemies. In the 1st game in Ezio's trilogy (the 2nd game in the whole AC series), a man named Duccio steals Ezio's “love of his life”, Cristina. Now he's trying to steal Sofia! They get into a brawl and then Sofia sees how much Ezio cares for her. She invites him to her bookshop, and there are locations in some of Sofia's books that lead to the 6 Masyaf Keys. Altair locked himself in a library when he died, and he asked his Polo friends if they could scatter the Masyaf Keys in random locations across Turkey. Ezio finds out there is a “vent” that, when opened, leads to one of the MK locations. He goes to 6 of them, each getting harder. I think that Ubisoft really wanted to make it so that people would get used to each one, and then make the next one harder, but not impossible for the level that they're at. It then turns out that the prince's Father wants to make his son the Sultan of Turkey, but his uncle disagrees. Ezio agrees to help SS (sultan's son) become the next Sultan. But then the Sultan's brother (the SS's uncle) finds out Ezio is helping SS. As a result, he ties Sofia to a tree, and tells Ezio her location for some gold. Ezio goes through with it, but it turns out to be a trick. Suddenly Ezio sees that the real Sofia is tied to a tree. This is probably the best gameplay in the whole game. Ezio jumps off of a tower, opens a parachute, lands in front of Sofia and unties her while dodging fires shot at them. They both hop onto a carriage and drive off to Masyaf. When they arrive, Ezio says this to Sofia, explaining the motto of the Creed. “It would be if it were doctrine. But it is merely an observation on the nature of reality. To say that nothing is true is to realise that the foundations of society are fragile and that we must the shepherds of our own civilization. To say that everything is permitted is to understand that we are the architects of our actions and that we must live with our consequences, whether glorious or tragic.” Amazing explanation. Finally, you have to unlock the door with the 6 MKs. Sofia stays behind while you go deeper in the library that Altair died in. He is holding the final MK in his skeleton hands. Ezio finds the Apple of Eden (the apple that Adam and Eve ate) and decides to leave it there. It has great power. Ezio talks with Desmond Miles, and the game ends.

Hands down, the best game I've ever played
Review By: Clockwise12

scream101 wrote:

matthewscratch06 wrote:

AC Revelations review:

Although it may be an old game, Ubisoft's ACRevel. tops any game I've ever seen. The story line is very deep, cutting between Altair Ibn La'ahad and Ezio Auditore's stories, and showing how they have a connection to each other. Along the way we meet some characters such as Sofia Sartor, whom which Ezio falls in love with, Yusuf Tazim, a fellow assassin, and the Sultan. It is the final game in Ezio's trilogy, thus the game's name is Revelations (conclusion, finale). Sofia and Ezio meet on a ship, and Ezio falls in love. To show that he has a “crush” on Sofia, he carries her cargo. I love how the writers of the story put in some cliches from today's world and put them in so subtly in the time (these games are historical fiction) that these games are in. A fellow italian tries to steal Sofia so Ezio beats him up. It turns out to be one of Ezio's childhood enemies. In the 1st game in Ezio's trilogy (the 2nd game in the whole AC series), a man named Duccio steals Ezio's “love of his life”, Cristina. Now he's trying to steal Sofia! They get into a brawl and then Sofia sees how much Ezio cares for her. She invites him to her bookshop, and there are locations in some of Sofia's books that lead to the 6 Masyaf Keys. Altair locked himself in a library when he died, and he asked his Polo friends if they could scatter the Masyaf Keys in random locations across Turkey. Ezio finds out there is a “vent” that, when opened, leads to one of the MK locations. He goes to 6 of them, each getting harder. I think that Ubisoft really wanted to make it so that people would get used to each one, and then make the next one harder, but not impossible for the level that they're at. It then turns out that the prince's Father wants to make his son the Sultan of Turkey, but his uncle disagrees. Ezio agrees to help SS (sultan's son) become the next Sultan. But then the Sultan's brother (the SS's uncle) finds out Ezio is helping SS. As a result, he ties Sofia to a tree, and tells Ezio her location for some gold. Ezio goes through with it, but it turns out to be a trick. Suddenly Ezio sees that the real Sofia is tied to a tree. This is probably the best gameplay in the whole game. Ezio jumps off of a tower, opens a parachute, lands in front of Sofia and unties her while dodging fires shot at them. They both hop onto a carriage and drive off to Masyaf. When they arrive, Ezio says this to Sofia, explaining the motto of the Creed. “It would be if it were doctrine. But it is merely an observation on the nature of reality. To say that nothing is true is to realise that the foundations of society are fragile and that we must the shepherds of our own civilization. To say that everything is permitted is to understand that we are the architects of our actions and that we must live with our consequences, whether glorious or tragic.” Amazing explanation. Finally, you have to unlock the door with the 6 MKs. Sofia stays behind while you go deeper in the library that Altair died in. He is holding the final MK in his skeleton hands. Ezio finds the Apple of Eden (the apple that Adam and Eve ate) and decides to leave it there. It has great power. Ezio talks with Desmond Miles, and the game ends.

Hands down, the best game I've ever played
Review By: Clockwise12

I have found out what you are actually reviewing and we cannot review a game unsuitable for most ages. An ASSASSIN'S CREED review is not something we can add to the paper. anymore stories like this and I will demote you.

clockwise12 wrote:

Is a little gore okay?
I am planning on writing a story about an orangutan in the forest, his mother gets killed and he is sentenced to cage.
I want to know so I don't get demoted.
There is a part where she gets shot in the leg, but I dont put any detail in it except “I heard a loud bang and something hits my leg”.
Thanks.

clockwise12 wrote:

Is a little gore okay?
I am planning on writing a story about an orangutan in the forest, his mother gets killed and he is sentenced to cage.
I want to know so I don't get demoted.
There is a part where she gets shot in the leg, but I dont put any detail in it except “I heard a loud bang and something hits my leg”.
Thanks.

scream101 wrote:

clockwise12 wrote:

Is a little gore okay?
I am planning on writing a story about an orangutan in the forest, his mother gets killed and he is sentenced to cage.
I want to know so I don't get demoted.
There is a part where she gets shot in the leg, but I dont put any detail in it except “I heard a loud bang and something hits my leg”.
Thanks.

we already have a story from you. you do not need to write another one. you just need to encourage the other writers to write a story.