videobob wrote:

Could you review this game? I made it in 3.5 months, and it's what I believe to be my best work. I would like the Rate & Review, please. Just be careful when you decide to do this. It's a 2 hour long game without previous experience.
Ninja Story 2: Ripped Earth

videobob wrote:

I posted a comment on April 19th, and it seemed to have become forgotten. So, I'll repost it:

videobob wrote:

Could you review this game? I made it in 3.5 months, and it's what I believe to be my best work. I would like the Rate & Review, please. Just be careful when you decide to do this. It's a 2 hour long game without previous experience.
Ninja Story 2: Ripped Earth

DeltaLimp wrote:

Rate+Review this Game please: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/84427268/ Thanks

nprasad wrote:

videobob wrote:

I posted a comment on April 19th, and it seemed to have become forgotten. So, I'll repost it:

videobob wrote:

Could you review this game? I made it in 3.5 months, and it's what I believe to be my best work. I would like the Rate & Review, please. Just be careful when you decide to do this. It's a 2 hour long game without previous experience.
Ninja Story 2: Ripped Earth

Oh, I'm sorry it was forgotten. Maybe because it's a two hour long game? Wow! I'll rate it an 9, and I'm going to ask for this to be featured. GREAT sound! Nice graphics! I love the intro story! The monsters are cute! My one suggestion is making checkpoints within green field and other areas. Like if the boss kills you, you try again right there with the boss. I LOVE THIS GAME! It's so much fun! It's interesting to pick weapons, too. One other suggestion is making this game two parts so it's not 2 hour long.

DeltaLimp wrote:

Rate+Review this Game please: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/84427268/ Thanks

catsruletheworld41 wrote:

can i get the original person to rate and review my project: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/81687308/ it's not a game though so…

tim556688 wrote:

Can you rate and review this
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/35110224/ ,
thanks.
I already wrote it but nobody has reviewed.

nprasad wrote:

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tim556688 wrote:

Can you rate and review this
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/35110224/ ,
thanks.
I already wrote it but nobody has reviewed.

Hey! Sorry someone forgot about your game. It's really great, i'll rate it 8.5/10. Complicated scripts, nice graphics, dynamic sound. The whole package, in one little game. The only reason I'm not rating it a 10/10 is because it's a tiny bit confusing at the beginning. I like the click ‘h’ and get a help page, but maybe you can add an instructions thing at the beginning. I REALLY like the game, and if it didn't have more than 100 likes, I would suggest it to be featured.

videobob wrote:

I know I already asked you to review a game, but I'm working on a sequel, and put out a demo. The new game has a much more in-depth story, a password system to start where you left off, and a new “paint” mechanic that lets you enhance your play style. Could you rate + review it if you have the chance? The demo is 5 levels long, so not too much. You can find it in my signature.

videobob wrote:

I know I already asked you to review a game, but I'm working on a sequel, and put out a demo. The new game has a much more in-depth story, a password system to start where you left off, and a new “paint” mechanic that lets you enhance your play style. Could you rate + review it if you have the chance? The demo is 5 levels long, so not too much. You can find it in my signature.

s-swrichter wrote:

videobob wrote:

I know I already asked you to review a game, but I'm working on a sequel, and put out a demo. The new game has a much more in-depth story, a password system to start where you left off, and a new “paint” mechanic that lets you enhance your play style. Could you rate + review it if you have the chance? The demo is 5 levels long, so not too much. You can find it in my signature.

You choose: Rate and Review
I liked it I would rate it a 7, congrats! I liked the enemies and the story line. Maybe make a skip button? I also like the password system. It's a really cool feature. The art work is really good except the first monster that came could use some improvement. I suggest checking out Inkscape which is a great professional vector tool, This makes your art look real cool. Overall keep up the good work!

videobob wrote:

s-swrichter wrote:

videobob wrote:

I know I already asked you to review a game, but I'm working on a sequel, and put out a demo. The new game has a much more in-depth story, a password system to start where you left off, and a new “paint” mechanic that lets you enhance your play style. Could you rate + review it if you have the chance? The demo is 5 levels long, so not too much. You can find it in my signature.

You choose: Rate and Review
I liked it I would rate it a 7, congrats! I liked the enemies and the story line. Maybe make a skip button? I also like the password system. It's a really cool feature. The art work is really good except the first monster that came could use some improvement. I suggest checking out Inkscape which is a great professional vector tool, This makes your art look real cool. Overall keep up the good work!

Ok, thanks for the input! Now just a question, did you think the art for the first enemy was poorly done, or did you just not like it's design? Also, just for some extra info about what you thought, could you answer a few questions? Sorry, but I just need the info to make the game as good as possible.
What twists do you expect in the storyline, or do you expect any at all?
Is the paint mechanic something you'd like to see expanded upon?
What do you think of Shroien as a character?

s-swrichter wrote:

videobob wrote:

s-swrichter wrote:

videobob wrote:

I know I already asked you to review a game, but I'm working on a sequel, and put out a demo. The new game has a much more in-depth story, a password system to start where you left off, and a new “paint” mechanic that lets you enhance your play style. Could you rate + review it if you have the chance? The demo is 5 levels long, so not too much. You can find it in my signature.

You choose: Rate and Review
I liked it I would rate it a 7, congrats! I liked the enemies and the story line. Maybe make a skip button? I also like the password system. It's a really cool feature. The art work is really good except the first monster that came could use some improvement. I suggest checking out Inkscape which is a great professional vector tool, This makes your art look real cool. Overall keep up the good work!

Ok, thanks for the input! Now just a question, did you think the art for the first enemy was poorly done, or did you just not like it's design? Also, just for some extra info about what you thought, could you answer a few questions? Sorry, but I just need the info to make the game as good as possible.
What twists do you expect in the storyline, or do you expect any at all?
Is the paint mechanic something you'd like to see expanded upon?
What do you think of Shroien as a character?

These are all very good questions,

I think the paint mechanic is defently something I'd like you see expand on.

With the first enemy it's not that it's poorly done, it's just compared to the quality of the rest of the game it feels like it could be improved.

I think Shroien is a great character, maybe add some more feelings? He's already really good as a character but it's always good to create a level of depth in your characters so they can relate. It's kinda like writing a book.

I think this game will come far! Probably even front-paged, Good luck!