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- Crimson19
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Exara <Requests>
Exara Requests
Want to learn more about Exara? Go here.
Welcome to Exara! This collaboration is all about writing. Whether movie scripts to descriptions or reviews to biographies, Exara covers all writing imaginable. I, Crimson19, thought of this idea when writing a story myself. Just post a order in one of the many categories and I, or hopefully somebody else if this collab attracts members will work on your order.
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Fictional:
Descriptions - Painting a picture with words!
Movie Scripts - Top of the line witty lines to grabs audience attention!
Game Plots - Plots that give FNAF a run for its money!
Characters - Amazing and memorable personalities!
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Factual:
Reviews - Detailed critique of anything created!
Advertisements - Short and snappy sentences that sum up anything you need!
Newspaper Article - An article about anything you can think of!
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Order Process
Please order from one of those categories using their respective forms. Once done, a member will quote the form and post “Taken!” and attempt to finish the order. If the order (depending on the size) is not completed within a few days, you may complain or re-post the order and it will be placed at top-priority. When the order is done, all we ask for is a simple thank you.
Want to learn more about Exara? Go here.
Welcome to Exara! This collaboration is all about writing. Whether movie scripts to descriptions or reviews to biographies, Exara covers all writing imaginable. I, Crimson19, thought of this idea when writing a story myself. Just post a order in one of the many categories and I, or hopefully somebody else if this collab attracts members will work on your order.
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Fictional:
Descriptions - Painting a picture with words!
Movie Scripts - Top of the line witty lines to grabs audience attention!
Game Plots - Plots that give FNAF a run for its money!
Characters - Amazing and memorable personalities!
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Factual:
Reviews - Detailed critique of anything created!
Advertisements - Short and snappy sentences that sum up anything you need!
Newspaper Article - An article about anything you can think of!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Order Process
Please order from one of those categories using their respective forms. Once done, a member will quote the form and post “Taken!” and attempt to finish the order. If the order (depending on the size) is not completed within a few days, you may complain or re-post the order and it will be placed at top-priority. When the order is done, all we ask for is a simple thank you.
Last edited by Crimson19 (Sept. 19, 2015 13:00:11)
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Descriptions
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“The golden gleam of the sun emerged from the mountain, consuming the darkness in a second of beauty. The flash of warmth surrounded me, tingling as it mingled with my skin. I fall to the ground in both tiredness and relief as my black spiky hair flops down elegantly, covering my eyes. My black shirt filled with water squelches obnoxiously as I hit the ground and my dark blue jeans press against my skin gently, discomforting me but I take no notice for sunlight has returned to its beauty”.
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Setting the scene armed nothing with your words has never been easier! Simply fill out this form and I or another member will do it for you.
Situation:
Emotion to give off:
Length:
Extra Info:
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“The golden gleam of the sun emerged from the mountain, consuming the darkness in a second of beauty. The flash of warmth surrounded me, tingling as it mingled with my skin. I fall to the ground in both tiredness and relief as my black spiky hair flops down elegantly, covering my eyes. My black shirt filled with water squelches obnoxiously as I hit the ground and my dark blue jeans press against my skin gently, discomforting me but I take no notice for sunlight has returned to its beauty”.
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Setting the scene armed nothing with your words has never been easier! Simply fill out this form and I or another member will do it for you.
Situation:
Emotion to give off:
Length:
Extra Info:
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Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 11, 2015 11:21:33)
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Movie Scripts
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Victim: “(Exasperated) Jake, spare me. I'll do anything you want, please.”
Jake: “(Smiling sadistically) Anything?”
Victim: “Yes!”
Jake: (Looking up) “I'd like your blood!”
(A scream is heard from the distance as the camera pans over to a door which is opened by police).
Policeman: “Where are they?!”
(Jake hums to himself for a few seconds until looking up at the officers with a emotionless expression)
Jake: “In a better place…”
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Scripts are vital to any good animation or movie so get amazingly well-designed ones here at Exara! Simply fill out this form:
Situation:
Character personalities:
Length:
Extra info:
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Victim: “(Exasperated) Jake, spare me. I'll do anything you want, please.”
Jake: “(Smiling sadistically) Anything?”
Victim: “Yes!”
Jake: (Looking up) “I'd like your blood!”
(A scream is heard from the distance as the camera pans over to a door which is opened by police).
Policeman: “Where are they?!”
(Jake hums to himself for a few seconds until looking up at the officers with a emotionless expression)
Jake: “In a better place…”
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Scripts are vital to any good animation or movie so get amazingly well-designed ones here at Exara! Simply fill out this form:
Situation:
Character personalities:
Length:
Extra info:
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Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 11, 2015 11:22:12)
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Game Plots
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“Hundreds of people were abducted by a terrorist group to a far away country. The protagonist, a fellow FBI agent was sent in to make a trip there and needed to find them to liberate them back to the U.K but the group catches on to this plan and ready their guards. Armed with nothing but a silenced pistol, you must stealthily fight your way to the location of the hostages and free them in this platformer/shoot 'em up-esque game.”
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Games like The Last Of Us are not good for no reason! The reason is there amazing plot which we offer you here at Exara. Forms are required:
Type of game:
Complexity of plot:
Characters:
Extra info:
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“Hundreds of people were abducted by a terrorist group to a far away country. The protagonist, a fellow FBI agent was sent in to make a trip there and needed to find them to liberate them back to the U.K but the group catches on to this plan and ready their guards. Armed with nothing but a silenced pistol, you must stealthily fight your way to the location of the hostages and free them in this platformer/shoot 'em up-esque game.”
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Games like The Last Of Us are not good for no reason! The reason is there amazing plot which we offer you here at Exara. Forms are required:
Type of game:
Complexity of plot:
Characters:
Extra info:
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Back to menu
Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 11, 2015 11:24:00)
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Characters
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“James Wood is 21 years old and married with 1 child that is only 4 months old. He will do anything to save her, even put his life on the line. James may seem weak but he is extremely strong and trained in 4 martial arts. James works as a weapons engineer in a corrupt agency so has easy access to weapons. He may seem kind but he is completely merciless to anyone who threatens his child or anything he loves. He arms himself with weapons such as assault rifles and snipers and goes by the name of ‘Vengeance’ to take out anybody who threatens his family or loved-one”.
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Characters such as Wheatley and The Joker make franchises much better which is why by simply filling out a form, we can make your game's beloved hero or maniacal villain.
Role in project:
Attributes:
Seriousness:
Extra info:
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“James Wood is 21 years old and married with 1 child that is only 4 months old. He will do anything to save her, even put his life on the line. James may seem weak but he is extremely strong and trained in 4 martial arts. James works as a weapons engineer in a corrupt agency so has easy access to weapons. He may seem kind but he is completely merciless to anyone who threatens his child or anything he loves. He arms himself with weapons such as assault rifles and snipers and goes by the name of ‘Vengeance’ to take out anybody who threatens his family or loved-one”.
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Characters such as Wheatley and The Joker make franchises much better which is why by simply filling out a form, we can make your game's beloved hero or maniacal villain.
Role in project:
Attributes:
Seriousness:
Extra info:
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Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 11, 2015 11:24:48)
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Reviews
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"Art: *****
Music: ****
Fluency: ****
Replayabillity: *
Control: *****
Overall: ****
Pros: The art and sound effects were extremely realistic and suited the situation well. The control layout was extremely well-thought out and offered easy control over your character. The game lagged a tiny bit but had no glitches.
Cons: It got extremely repetitive extremely quickly which was the ultimate downfall to an overall great game.
Improvements: You could add more of a story element so the game didn't feel like a constant repeat of the same thing.
Overall Opinion: Great game but ruins itself if played again".
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Expert critique is necessary for the improvement of any project. Luckily, here at Exara we can do that for you! Just fill out a simple form and your critique will be ready:
Project:
Scratching level:
Detail (0-10):
Extra Info:
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"Art: *****
Music: ****
Fluency: ****
Replayabillity: *
Control: *****
Overall: ****
Pros: The art and sound effects were extremely realistic and suited the situation well. The control layout was extremely well-thought out and offered easy control over your character. The game lagged a tiny bit but had no glitches.
Cons: It got extremely repetitive extremely quickly which was the ultimate downfall to an overall great game.
Improvements: You could add more of a story element so the game didn't feel like a constant repeat of the same thing.
Overall Opinion: Great game but ruins itself if played again".
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Expert critique is necessary for the improvement of any project. Luckily, here at Exara we can do that for you! Just fill out a simple form and your critique will be ready:
Project:
Scratching level:
Detail (0-10):
Extra Info:
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Back to menu
Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 11, 2015 11:43:49)
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Advertisements
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“When colour and sound combine, Reteroria is born. Whether music to art to scripting Reteroria provides expertise in all subjects created by a varied, active, imaginative and professional staff of well-renowned talents. Join today to join the soon-to-be kings of the requests forum!
Reteroria, where colour and sound, fuse.”
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To get people wanting your services, you need to make sure you advertise with beautiful, well-written advertisements. Where else should you get this than Exara? Fill out the form and form your shop's success (he he).
Theme:
Main Info:
Motto:
Extra Info:
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“When colour and sound combine, Reteroria is born. Whether music to art to scripting Reteroria provides expertise in all subjects created by a varied, active, imaginative and professional staff of well-renowned talents. Join today to join the soon-to-be kings of the requests forum!
Reteroria, where colour and sound, fuse.”
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To get people wanting your services, you need to make sure you advertise with beautiful, well-written advertisements. Where else should you get this than Exara? Fill out the form and form your shop's success (he he).
Theme:
Main Info:
Motto:
Extra Info:
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Back to menu
Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 12, 2015 18:19:32)
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Newspaper Articles
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"Shop Has Big Hopes!
A shop named Exara has been created by Crimson19 with the hope of becoming a major shop in the rather empty writing industry. The shops revolves on giving Scratchers both informal and formal texts to help them on their quest to succeed. The shop's owner, Crimson19 stated “There aren't a lot of shops in the writing industry which means we can grow much quicker. Hopefully this is the start of something big”. The shop's format resembles that of Makethebrainhappy's shop “Infinite Possibilities” one of the most revolutionary and busy shops on Scratch and is taking orders/members as this is being written."
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Newspapers need eye-catching headlines and juicy stories to get attention. Luckily, we're providing all this and more at Exara. Simply fill out the form and have a great scoop for all your newspaper-making needs.
Topic:
Length:
Mood:
Extra Info:
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"Shop Has Big Hopes!
A shop named Exara has been created by Crimson19 with the hope of becoming a major shop in the rather empty writing industry. The shops revolves on giving Scratchers both informal and formal texts to help them on their quest to succeed. The shop's owner, Crimson19 stated “There aren't a lot of shops in the writing industry which means we can grow much quicker. Hopefully this is the start of something big”. The shop's format resembles that of Makethebrainhappy's shop “Infinite Possibilities” one of the most revolutionary and busy shops on Scratch and is taking orders/members as this is being written."
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Newspapers need eye-catching headlines and juicy stories to get attention. Luckily, we're providing all this and more at Exara. Simply fill out the form and have a great scoop for all your newspaper-making needs.
Topic:
Length:
Mood:
Extra Info:
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Back to menu
Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 12, 2015 18:30:26)
- makethebrainhappy
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
You know seeing that this is a writing shop you could write a newspaper article about this shop and your goals for it. I can post that into edition four 
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- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Hope this logos shows up…
I like it but I'm going to order something from TW. I'll probably make a simple sig.
Last edited by Crimson19 (Aug. 13, 2015 06:44:13)
- makethebrainhappy
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Hope this logos shows up…
I like it but I'm going to order something from TW. I'll probably make a simple sig.
Ok
- dolphin_24
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Topic: The top ten most talkative shops.
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: ??
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: Top ten voice actors
Length: 10 lines, please.
Mood: Idk
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: How makethebrainhappy's shop rose to power
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: idk
Extra Info: I will give credit. Please add that one of the reasons is they talk too much.
No more bumping needed. I will be providing you with orders at least weekly, if not more often. Except when I'm on a trip, of course.
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: ??
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: Top ten voice actors
Length: 10 lines, please.
Mood: Idk
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: How makethebrainhappy's shop rose to power
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: idk
Extra Info: I will give credit. Please add that one of the reasons is they talk too much.
No more bumping needed. I will be providing you with orders at least weekly, if not more often. Except when I'm on a trip, of course.
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Topic: The top ten most talkative shops.
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: ??
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: Top ten voice actors
Length: 10 lines, please.
Mood: Idk
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: How makethebrainhappy's shop rose to power
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: idk
Extra Info: I will give credit. Please add that one of the reasons is they talk too much.
No more bumping needed. I will be providing you with orders at least weekly, if not more often. Except when I'm on a trip, of course.
Taken.
- makethebrainhappy
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Topic: The top ten most talkative shops.
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: ??
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: Top ten voice actors
Length: 10 lines, please.
Mood: Idk
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: How makethebrainhappy's shop rose to power
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: idk
Extra Info: I will give credit. Please add that one of the reasons is they talk too much.
No more bumping needed. I will be providing you with orders at least weekly, if not more often. Except when I'm on a trip, of course.
Taken.
LOL That's bad XD
On the second one I believe @bubble103 deserves to be on the list. Just my two cents
- Crimson19
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Exara <Requests>
Topic: The top ten most talkative shops.
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: ??
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: Top ten voice actors
Length: 10 lines, please.
Mood: Idk
Extra Info: I will give credit.
Topic: How makethebrainhappy's shop rose to power
Length: 10 lines, please
Mood: idk
Extra Info: I will give credit. Please add that one of the reasons is they talk too much.
No more bumping needed. I will be providing you with orders at least weekly, if not more often. Except when I'm on a trip, of course.
Taken.
LOL That's bad XD
On the second one I believe @bubble103 deserves to be on the list. Just my two cents
You can take the second one, I'll take the other two. I'm working on it now.
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