Uhhhm Very good but it had much more details in the book. For example Bluestar and Lionheart didn't apeer like that. And Bluestar didn't just jump into the "Good Job, Graypaw" she explained how she would have taken care of Rusty if she didn't know. But other than that the drawings were amazing (Yes, I know you didn't draw them) you gave everyone a touch of deatail. Very good! I'm looking forward for more of your projects. :)
mmmrh, rusty is more of a red-orange color, graystripe is gray with a stripe down his back, bluestar is more blue-gray than dark gray, and lionheart is yellowish, not orange and brown.
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that was really good! i think u should make more (u dont have to just my opion)
Uhhhm Very good but it had much more details in the book. For example Bluestar and Lionheart didn't apeer like that. And Bluestar didn't just jump into the "Good Job, Graypaw" she explained how she would have taken care of Rusty if she didn't know. But other than that the drawings were amazing (Yes, I know you didn't draw them) you gave everyone a touch of deatail. Very good! I'm looking forward for more of your projects. :)
It does not happen like that!
nice
Sorry if they don't look very good
mmmrh, rusty is more of a red-orange color, graystripe is gray with a stripe down his back, bluestar is more blue-gray than dark gray, and lionheart is yellowish, not orange and brown.
ok...