The Beach at the End of Forever

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user_icon LestradeTGQ shared it 1 year, 1 month ago
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goch goch 10 months, 1 week ago

I like it a lot.

nomediakings nomediakings 1 year, 1 month ago

I love how you've used the no-win state as an asset. I find the animations a little frantic for the tone, though... maybe slow them down a lil?

JvH JvH 1 year, 1 month ago

i tried keeping the ball in the air for a lot longer then i thought i would... and when i got tired i just kicked it around in the sand for awhile... guess i'm not ready to accept 'the end' just yet. really like the smoke FX in the background -it adds so much to the atmosphere.. so cold and desolate, but please give the poor boy a shirt for pete's sake!

hopping_v hopping_v 1 year, 1 month ago

Had to do two comments cause they have a character limit :P

hopping_v hopping_v 1 year, 1 month ago

You could even add some emotion by having his shoulders sag and make him sigh whenever the ball hits the sand and switch to a dejected walk while he goes to get it back up in the air. An animated ball would also be a nice touch since you could make the shadow consistent. I can also think of some ways to use the background to emphasize how long the player has been playing such as a shift from day to night or, if you wanted to go all out, through the seasons.

hopping_v hopping_v 1 year, 1 month ago

Nice! I really love the sense of loneliness and futility you've brought to pong. Because of what you're trying to do I really can't think of any gameplay additions I'd make, anything extra would detract from the theme. I can think of some cosmetic changes that would add some extra polish to the presentation. Separate player animations for moving left and right and a unique hit animation would be nice.

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