Also, I don't think Max would be so stupid to leave a window open, at night, with an emerald in the house. Of course he'll lock every door and every window! But what does that mean to a thief when he has master-keys, a glazier's diamond and other things that are so important for theft.
But Ray is not a man. He's a bit older than Max. And, when Ray kidnaps her, I think he should, as all kidnappers, either plug her mouth or stun her. I know, it might be violent, but it's real life. Also, he wouldn't drag Maple by the arm, he sould carry her, maybe in a sack.
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heyy how do you create the "next" box and make it work?
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Lots of mistakes in the text, but otherwise great! You left me hanging off a cliff!
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cool!
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vERY DRAMATIC
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you will just have to wait and see ^^
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DOES THE WOLF EAT HER?????
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It was one of my favorits ps there is a glich i thank
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thankyou people ^^
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wow!! this is featured. *dances*
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nice graphics! cool!!!
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cool. i wonder what happens next.
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*giggle* you're a good writer, almost as good as... uh... hazelleafkitty?
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I really like your drawing style.
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sweet
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Your giving me a run for my money.Nice Job!
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Those don't count as mistakes!
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Nooooo! Please don't think it's bad!
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right!
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Wow! This is top quality. Well done! I also have an update on the Crank_INC gallery.
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You are a really good writer.
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And I think Maple sleeps in her nightclothes.
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Also, I don't think Max would be so stupid to leave a window open, at night, with an emerald in the house. Of course he'll lock every door and every window! But what does that mean to a thief when he has master-keys, a glazier's diamond and other things that are so important for theft.
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But Ray is not a man. He's a bit older than Max. And, when Ray kidnaps her, I think he should, as all kidnappers, either plug her mouth or stun her. I know, it might be violent, but it's real life. Also, he wouldn't drag Maple by the arm, he sould carry her, maybe in a sack.
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This is impressive!!
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wow. impressive. is this finished? when it is the scratch team might want to feature it.
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??
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not yet, why?
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does sonicpops know about this
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