Also, I don't think Max would be so stupid to leave a window open, at night, with an emerald in the house. Of course he'll lock every door and every window! But what does that mean to a thief when he has master-keys, a glazier's diamond and other things that are so important for theft.
But Ray is not a man. He's a bit older than Max. And, when Ray kidnaps her, I think he should, as all kidnappers, either plug her mouth or stun her. I know, it might be violent, but it's real life. Also, he wouldn't drag Maple by the arm, he sould carry her, maybe in a sack.
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heyy how do you create the "next" box and make it work?
Lots of mistakes in the text, but otherwise great! You left me hanging off a cliff!
cool!
vERY DRAMATIC
you will just have to wait and see ^^
DOES THE WOLF EAT HER?????
It was one of my favorits ps there is a glich i thank
thankyou people ^^
wow!! this is featured. *dances*
nice graphics! cool!!!
cool. i wonder what happens next.
*giggle* you're a good writer, almost as good as... uh... hazelleafkitty?
I really like your drawing style.
sweet
Your giving me a run for my money.Nice Job!
Those don't count as mistakes!
Nooooo! Please don't think it's bad!
right!
Wow! This is top quality. Well done! I also have an update on the Crank_INC gallery.
You are a really good writer.
And I think Maple sleeps in her nightclothes.
Also, I don't think Max would be so stupid to leave a window open, at night, with an emerald in the house. Of course he'll lock every door and every window! But what does that mean to a thief when he has master-keys, a glazier's diamond and other things that are so important for theft.
But Ray is not a man. He's a bit older than Max. And, when Ray kidnaps her, I think he should, as all kidnappers, either plug her mouth or stun her. I know, it might be violent, but it's real life. Also, he wouldn't drag Maple by the arm, he sould carry her, maybe in a sack.
This is impressive!!
wow. impressive. is this finished? when it is the scratch team might want to feature it.
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not yet, why?
does sonicpops know about this