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This is a poem I wrote:
"Hopeless"
No matter what happens,
You cannot spare me the
Pain of torture.
As I bleed, I feel sorrow
For what I have done.
Yet things still happen
That drive people to madness.
I will embrace the horror
Of life.
I beat my head against the wall
But it will not go away.
My heart is heavy
And I cannot breathe.
As walk through the memories,
I am crippled by the hate.
My vision is dark, my world cruel.
I am blind.
I pray for sight
As I cry crimson tears.
Some wounds will heal,
Other will scar.
Life is an annoyance;
A distraction.
My soul is torn, but I continue
Forth, on my quest for
Nothing.
The voices whisper in my ear,
But they don’t exist.
People surround me,
As they laugh;
Oblivious to my depression.
The room is warm
Yet I am cold.
I must say goodbye,
But I am not sure how I should
Phrase it.
As I hold the knife before me
All I can feel now is
Hopeless.
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lol it's that emo kid. Remember me, Arroz? Heybrian?
Homework, life. I have to start thinking about college as well. :P
Oh you mean the one I was planning on making when I was 13? Well, I'm 17 now, and my ideas have changed. As you have noticed, I haven't made a project in over 2.25 years.
(view all replies)Oh jeez. You're still around? Of course I remember you! Back when I went as GHhog. That was like... 3 and a half years ago. Damn. Well how have you been?
(view all replies)Depressing. Did you quit Scratch entirely? Are you still alive!???? You didn't REALLY commit suicide, did you? You kept saying that you were cutting yourself and that you were emo when you still uploaded Scratch projects. There had to be a way out of your troubles and depression. Nobody laughs at you because you are bad, they do for a good thing. But now, if you are dead, it's too late- 2 years have past. I wish I knew what you were trying to tell us with this poem back then. :'(
(cont.) Nobody hates you, Arroz. Everybody enjoyed your piano playing, drawings, and projects. If you still go on Scratch, read my comment and think through everything again, and you'll think it's a bad thing to commit suicide and go into depression. Anyway, this poem, like I said before, is a masterpiece. It's wonderful- it expresses a dark and sophisticated feeling. Thinking about it, I should write a song and use it for the lyrics.
(view all replies)depressing );
where u like a famous scratcher a long time ago? cause everyone seems 2 know u
O.O omg that's awesome!!
Read this while listening to Requiem for a Dream. It makes me wanna cry.
I mean the poem, not the comment.
Touching...do you mind if I use the poem in a piece of artwork that it inspired?
I don't use Scratch anymore. Go ahead.
its soo sad (tears)
wow thats so deep and touching poem
wow 0_0 nice poem...so deep and true..you should check my poems out :D
Eh. I can do better. :3
(view all replies)^x^
(view all replies)I did. Nice poems. :3
(view all replies)Whered u get the pic? did it cost?
Awesome! And incase you didn't know, your account name is the Spanish word for rice. O_O
ご飯ょしてください
Uh.. lol?
LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Yup.
Beautiful poem, beautiful song. Thanks Arroz!
Haha thanks.
i feel no sorrow. i cuicidal peom is dumb. The room is warm Yet I am cold. I must say goodbye, But I am not sure how I should Phrase it. As I hold the knife before me All I can feel now is Hopeless. But then i saw a drug, at the walgreenz store. i swallowed it hopefully, for hell to close it's doors. then i felt a fealing, it was quite plaseant. It was the feeling of a, Anti-depresent. Truth is you cant feel sad for anything nomater what sercumstances.
can u pllleeeeeeeeeeez watch my new vid
Well when you put it that way... No.
(view all replies)hey man...what's up.... ^^
The sky.
yo, dude, u alive? sup? i miss talkin 2 ya! hope ur doin alright. ^^ lolz. i'm currently worried sick over homework, tests, adn keeping up in my advanced classes...hehe >-<
hey man, what's up...
yo, dude, i got a question. since ur a guy, can u tell meh what out doorz-ish guyz like? my crush sees me more as a 'guy' then a girl...T_T and it's really sad 4 a girl when their crush thinks of them as just another DUDE.... T_T and i've been having some trouble w/ taht cuz my used 2 b best friend iz datin him and she doesn't care that it seems like she's doing everything in her power 2 ruin our friendship...she's obsessive w/ him...and that's not healthy....
get a life. this poem is meant to put your mind at rest by putting it to a more painfull feeling and letting you forget about the world. Love's not bad but it can kill you. No effence to emo people but cutting yourself and casing yourself pain is not a to smooth way either. I am a goth-ish zen master.
(view all replies)I'm sorry :( I don't have an answer for you :(
(view all replies)I'm sorry :( I don't have an answer for you :(
I'm sorry :( I don't have an answer for you :(
lol'd at this
how dare you....
Is it.
(view all replies)You laughed at this? Why, sir, would you laugh at this?
(view all replies)*super-flying-tackle-hug* I haven't heard from you in like, YEARS. How's life?
Kewl :D
sup? it'z been a while. howz school????????
I got burned, yes.
(view all replies)kewl
(view all replies)yo man! it'z beena while!!!!!!! come on dude! u used 2 b on every day! where iz u!!!!!! lolz!
I be chillin' w/ mai homiez sistah! :P I don't really talk like that. Haha. I don't have "Homies" :o All Star Converse are really comphy :D I need to get new ones :p
(view all replies)Hey Arroz! Long time no see.Conas atá do Dhia?
yo, man! it'z been like ages since i've seen ya! remember me? (demon'z twin)
(view all replies)Don't know what that means, but I'll assume it meas "How's it going" :P I am doing good! How are you :D
(view all replies)sup man?
hey, dude, don't get mad or anything, but demon seems...kinda sad...she thinks u hardly talk 2 her...and idk...but would u like me 2 tell her ur on? or r u mad at her or sumthin...i wanna help the both of u...cuz ur mah friend and she's mah sis
Oh, I've seen that he's on. ^^
arroz! i just saw u were on 4 hours ago! y didn't u repsond 2 me! i ur friend! y not! >_<
(view all replies)DOOM ;P
(view all replies)Interesting...
(view all replies)I have always wondered this; why do you type so differently from your sister? You use shorthand and incorrect grammar... while she writes like an English professer (metaphorically)
(view all replies)Haha. I have written a couple songs, but they are just basic block chord rhythms. I also wrote one with a simplistic melody involving octaves and some thrids.
(view all replies)I just realized that Arroz is spanish for rice!
Indeed
(view all replies)arroz! arroz! yo, dude! u ever on anymore? even I'M gettin worried, and i'm the calm 1! >_< moondemon'z practically gone crazy w/ worry. she sayz u haven't been gone this long in forever, so yeah...also, when u get on, maybe u could post a SONG, like the piano 1's, or drums, or someting! UR IZ AMAZING! U MUST WORK AT IT! i really think u could b famous someday! SOMEDAY SOON! so yeah...reply when u get on, kay, cuz ur mah friend and i care
hey rice kun1 sup!
Arroz-kun... It's a great poem. I'm sorry... because you seem like you're suffering. We are here for you. Please, even if you don't think we can do anything, at least we can /listen./ *hugs* You're not alone.
really? Well, in that case, yes, we are all are for you.
HE CAME ON!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!! -^_^-
Strangely, we are prepared to listen, but he doesnt bother to come anymore.... T-T
hey, rice chan....how's ur summer going? u remember yorie? i had this sweet dream last night that she came back! lolz! ^_^ o, yeah! u've gotta write more songs! ur a very talented person!
omg! arroz! u've got to see this! it's so cute! ^_^ by the way, happy b-day. (it's 2day,right?) (link to project)
u know...this song is kinda depressiong...the poem is kinda 2...but still. very well written. very emo. but still. anywho. u have real talent! written any new songs recently? wanna put any of those on scratch? in exchange 4 u playin a song on scratch, i'll sing a song! kk?
Yes tis my emo poetry
(view all replies)hai rice-kun! sup! been a long time! how r u! u happy bout summer bein here? i am! i've had this bad cold, but it's goin away, so any day now i can actually ENJOY my summer! yaya! ^_^ what've u done w/ ur summer so far? going 2 any camps?
Wow...A-KUN THAT POEM IS PWN. I haven't talked to you in a while. How are yoooooooooouuuuuuuuu??????????? Who's singing this???? Hey, hey, go look at Annri-chan's project plz!!!!!!!!!!! IS IT EPIC!!!!!!!!!!! (link to project)
Thanks... the song is "9 Crimes" by Damien or something.
(view all replies)YO! ARROZ! What's up? :D Haven't talked to you in a while BTW LOVE the project
Nm. and thank you
(view all replies)And its really good
Thanks ;P
It's a compliment,im not mad or anything. U just wrote how u felt like.
._. omg, deep dude...
Thank you?
Well......... u did a good job at doin' it........
I just wrote my feelings and personal experience //_-
I feel so depressed right now.
Thats the point of the poem //_-
The room is warm Yet I am cold. I must say goodbye, But I am not sure how I should Phrase it. As I hold the knife before me All I can feel now is Hopeless.
Good job... you copied the poem :P
(view all replies)My vision is dark, my world cruel. I am blind. I pray for sight As I cry crimson tears. Some wounds will heal, Other will scar. Life is an annoyance; A distraction. My soul is torn, but I continue Forth, on my quest for Nothing. The voices whisper in my ear, But they don’t exist. People surround me, As they laugh; Oblivious to my depression.
"Hopeless" No matter what happens, You cannot spare me the Pain of torture. As I bleed, I feel sorrow For what I have done. Yet things still happen That drive people to madness. I will embrace the horror Of life. I beat my head against the wall But it will not go away. My heart is heavy And I cannot breathe. As walk through the memories, I am crippled by the hate.
/._.\ rice-chan...don't hurt urself!!!!! >_< can i help in any way?
You will N0T kill or hurt yourself. GOT IT!!!! <:( WHy are you so sad? What causes this pain? Is there any way I can help?
I wonder what happened...