occ//:Um, I'm curious, may I please join? I would like my name to be Dawnflower or Aquastorm. (xD sorry, it reminds me of something) I am pretty active, I go on every day (unless I'm grounded.)
brightfang ran until she felt she could run no more. only then did she look back over her shoulder. The eyes were still staring at her! as her hackles began to raise and the adrenaline rushed through her feline body she realized these were different eyes. although they were the same colour, the shape was different and they were less unearthly, these definitely belonged to something normal. she relaxed and called out "hello? whose there?"
Deep in her cave, Brightfang shivered. the cold wind, combined with the fierce howl of it, chilled her to the bone. It was almost unearthly, unlike anything she had experienced before.
Brightfang let out a triumphant roar, her jaws red with fresh blood. She had been stalking this mountain goat for days. The smell of the meat was over powering. With a shiver of pleasure, she lowered her head and began to eat.
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This is an RPG about lynxes. There is a plot, but we'll make it up as we go along.
Rules;
Everything is set in past tense,
eg, "Softfoot's cries could be heard a mile away"
Not "You can hear Softfoot's cries a mile away"
No random things. Please stay faithful to the plot
eg if Makitak has just said
"The dawn crept in, with a heavy fog on its heels. Brighteye looked up, only to be blinded by the mist"
You could say "Then the smell hit his nose with the power of a speeding mountain goat"
you couldnt say
"A fish with wings came in and ate a banana"
or "Starshine then took a leak behind a bush" when nobody was talking about starshine.
No mary-sues
eg you CANNOT majorly injure or kill another persons character without their permission.
eg " broken eye killed softstar with one swipe of his mighty paw" if softstar belongs to another character. If you do this than your post will be either ignored, deleted or flagged.
also, no controlling other peoples characters please (but that one is less important)
also unrelated comments will be deleted. this is not meant to be mean spirited, but it just helps the story flow better.
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occ//:Um, I'm curious, may I please join? I would like my name to be Dawnflower or Aquastorm. (xD sorry, it reminds me of something) I am pretty active, I go on every day (unless I'm grounded.)
Brokentooth blinked. "I wonder why she suddenly ran away?" she thought. Brokentooth followed Brightfang.
Brightfang relaxed a bit. "I'm Brightfang" she said. then she remembered the eyes. her own eyes widened and she ran.
"Hello," said Brokentooth back. She decided to see who the lynx was.
brightfang called out cautiously,"hello?"
Brokentooth stood up. There was a battle raging inside of her. To attack or not to attack? She had never had this problem before....
Hey, could I join? As Mazeheart?
absolutely!
her eyes widening with alarm, brightfang backed away slowly "im sorry, please don't hurt me"
Sorryfoot sighed and laid down at the entrance of her cave.
Brokentooth walked out from behind a tree. She had been spotted, there was no point trying to hide. She lowered herself into a fighting stance.
spotted by Brightfang btw
(Sorry, I'm on holiday. Will still try to RPG as much as possible.) The eyes closed, a certain smugness within them.
brightfang ran until she felt she could run no more. only then did she look back over her shoulder. The eyes were still staring at her! as her hackles began to raise and the adrenaline rushed through her feline body she realized these were different eyes. although they were the same colour, the shape was different and they were less unearthly, these definitely belonged to something normal. she relaxed and called out "hello? whose there?"
Brokentooth saw another lynx running through the forest. She shrunk back, for once, not in the mood to fight. She decided to follow the strange lynx.
something clicked within brighteyes brain and she ran.
sorry, brightfang (looks shepish, feels stupid)
Brokentooth was tired. She had been walking for days through this forest. She was so tired she couldn't hunt or fight.
hallo
ill join ^.^
and there she stood, paralyzed with fright, as the eyes stared ever onward, into her very soul it seemed.
Red eyes flicked open in the darkness in front of Brightfang. They watched her every heartbeat through the gloom.
then, only instinct told her not to howl with fright.
Brightfang braved a look outside and the wind almost tore her whiskers from her face
SorryFoot was bouncing along in her cave, loving the sound of the fall wind and the howling from the harsh wind itself. (brb)
Deep in her cave, Brightfang shivered. the cold wind, combined with the fierce howl of it, chilled her to the bone. It was almost unearthly, unlike anything she had experienced before.
The wind howled through the trees. It was hard to make out Bloodwhisper's howl through it.
Brightfang let out a triumphant roar, her jaws red with fresh blood. She had been stalking this mountain goat for days. The smell of the meat was over powering. With a shiver of pleasure, she lowered her head and began to eat. ***************