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COMMENT WHEN YOU JOIN!
You can put up to two projects in here, and I will comment at least one of them, sharing my thoughts. If I like them, I will press the love-it button. But there are rules:
1.) You can only add up to two projects.
2.)Make sure they are appropriate.
3.)You must critique the other members' projects as well.
If you want to be a helper to me, just ask! So, have fun, and post your projects!
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Try my new game, Epiquest!
I added mine
check out my two new games atomic pea and mol17 fightorama
Play my new game I added: "Blackbeard's Dream". I spent a loooooooong time on it, so I hope you like it! =D
What do you mean, "Be a helper?"
If I add two projects in here, can I remove them later, and add in two more? (Please answer SOON!)
I'm guessing that I can. I'm adding two.
Added my game, "Spot Fight X v1.2"... Some feedback would be really helpful!
I added "SpaceWar Tactics". A strategiegame in the space.
Could I join?
I added Fly Away 2 and Want Your Name On A Block? I hope you like them!
I added mine :D
I added Modern warfare
I added my Star Wars The Clone Wars demo.
I changed my projects.
or else I wontr comment
(view all replies)you can't change them
check out my wo RADAR COMBAT games!
added two projects
And I, feedback in ScratchOS! It's like THE BEST computer simulation ever...
i would love feedback on my quidditch game.
I did
I added Scratch OS!
Oops, "Up to two", not "At least two".
I posted 2 games and only 1 of them got critiqued, cud u plz see the other 1 (slime tag)
I only have 1 game and it's still not ready, but can I put it in? Even if it's only one?
im commenting on 'race game' by HARD_gamer. I think the gameplay is generally good but there is no objective to the gaem, you just keep going round and roound the track, also, the AI sometimes just randomly goes off the screen.
Review for Snake: A great game but it could be better. I like the idea of avoiding the trails instead of avoiding your body. I also liked the scoring system, it was nice to everyone. However, Try to make the other snake not cross your paths cause that ain't fair!!! Great game.
i critiqued the game sheep. The movement of the sheep was very clever. this made it a challenging but fun game. i also liked the sheep costumes which were simple but great.
Thanks for critiqing in the Gallery! :D :D :D
How are the critiques going in this group. This is one of the larger crit groups - has everyone had a chance to get a review of their project? joeyman, are you able to support and offer feedback for all these projects? How might you have your group help support the effort? Has each person who has added a project offered feedback? One way to help track this would be to ask them to post a link to the project they review on this page so you will know who is actively giving feedback :)
I did!
PROBLEM IS< people don't comment when they join, so I never know when they add! And I don't have the time to check it regularly!
(view all replies)Great Idea! Thanks!
I have been EXTREMELY busy in the past week, so I couldn't quite critique the projects in the past week. As far as I know, no one who joined has recently critiqued another project! Also, I can't critique the projects because they're supposed to tell me when they leave one via comment. (Doesn't anyone read the Gallery Descrption anymore?) Can you help me critique and tell people that they need to critique? If you do, thanks!
(view all replies)Added one please critique
added 2 plz critique
Avoid the rods: Nice game! I like the placement of the "rods". It's quite a challenge!
I added two projects, I'll be sure to critique others' projects as well!
I would join except it's too much of a commitment for me cause I'd have to critique on almost probably more than 100 projects and this would be my second critique group.
do i have to critique all 73 projects or just a couple
does green blood from monsters count as appropriate?
i added 2 of mine see my full zombie game at www.fantasytalesproductions.piczo.com
I switched one of mine out. Its now a music video of one of Weird Al's songs.
Okay, but no more switching! :D
(view all replies)i put in mine called find-it and mine called who wants top favorited
Only 2 are alloweed at a time.
Just added my tank game. Please love it!
okay, remember, u have to critique the others as well! :D
(view all replies)CaN I bE a HeLpEr?
sure you can!
(view all replies)For Mr. Extra Fluffy- This project has been done so many times but is still pretty good. I liked the color changes in that and how the stamp things got bigger. If you want to make it better, I would add music, A shape changer and make the things got faster. Thats just my suggestion though. Good job, 9/10.
can any one please help me on how to make really good games.
Also, becoming friends with people is a critical part about getting popular on scratch. Regularly reply to comments, even if they aren't directed twoards you. Spend some time getting to know other people. Make galleries, add people to your friends... Really, do whatever you can to become popular. Once you finally get on the front page, you'll be popular enough that you won't have to work so hard. Then you'll only have to do the games part! :)
Finally, once it's on he webpage, you need to advertise! Look at the projects on the front page. I mean, actually look at them, and don't just spam yet. Look at the project, then share something that you liked about it... Then tell them to test your game. It's really that simple! Repeat until the spam blocker says that you posted a similar message recently... (If it says that, don't post a link to your project. Instead, tell them something like "check out my game!")
As soon as you have the ideas in place, you need to think up how the atmosphere will look like. You need to make it look good, but don't focus completely on graphics. Then, as soon as you have the graphics in place, it's time to start the fun part! Programming it! Anyways, take your idea, and start on a small demo of the game. Make some tweaks to the gameplay if you need to. Then test again. Keep on repeating until the gameplay is really good. Next it's time to share... Post it online.
Well, to make good games, you need to be able to think up an idea first. Try thinking up something original. Not a mario clone, sonic clone, or anything like that. Think up some good game ideas, then try and think of a way to make it addicting. Make it hard, but not so hard that people go away from it. That is one of the things that make games addicting. Another is giving the player a score based on how well they did, and telling them to post the score in the comments. That makes it competitive.
good thing i only have 3 games (so far)
can you take one out? the max. is two now!