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This is a critique gallery for scratchers who love a challenge.
Current Members: bigB, Cyclone103, the_guardian, fullmoon, bluestribute.
You are also expected to comment on as many of the games in the gallery as possible.
Please submit only one project until you have made a critique in the gallery of another project.
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I am not a member. But I have a critique for the game Dungeons-The Beginning. Despite many complaints in the comments th game ran smooth, it was clear what your main goal is, and has an amusing old-fashioned kick. I thought the addition of a grid gave that overall RPG feel. The only problem I could find was that the variables are in to much of a random order and enemies are WAY easy to kill. Wow, this galleries been down for a while.
May I join too?
can i join please?
Blackbeard's Dream - nothing to say, look here: http://www.filo5.yoyo.pl/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=5
Hello there. I added SentenceSynthesier 0.6, which I finished recently. I hope you'll like me, filo5
I added my new project "Blackbeard's Dream". I hope you all like it!
Can I join here? Check out the SentenceSynthesier - it's not a game, but it was quite challenging to make it. I'm making a big game now. First alpha be out in about 2 weeks.
can I join? I LOVE a chalenge!
I am going to add my second game and comment on others. Thanks
Can I join, I post all my stuff online but i can never tell if it is good because not very many people look at them.
I looked at, um, I dunno, thirty?
I can mostly only comment on weekends and holidays, but I'd like to join this group.
Hammer 2: this is fun, and you can practice at it and get better at playing the game. However, it has glitches: you can get points after game over, the number of misses doesn't reset if you restart. Iron out all the glitches and this would be great. You could improve it by changing difficulty or adding levels. The graphics are good, but it could do with some music (the pop is effective though). Overall, I would give this 7.5/10, it has excellent gameplay, but is not glitch-free and lacks sound.
thanks for adding critiques
Hello, added one of my projects and getting ready to comment!
can I join?
Can I join?
my silent dance works better than in net when downloaded
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The Reload in fireworks is too slow
I would like to know what you think about my game Fireworks and meteorites v2. I would also like to spread the word a bit.
I like this galleray
I love challenges
I commented on a lot of the p[rojects about a month ago. I added one of my projects
can i join?
I just added DemonSlayer II. There are some other games in my DemonSlayer series which are very good but I think this is the best game currently. It was challenging to make, and it's challenging to beat.
Here is my critique for Dr_Supers Susa project ((link to project)">(link to project) You seem to have been really inspired by the history of the game. This project is very clear to understand and it is visually accurate. Even though I NEVER won, I enjoyed playing against Dr Super. The only thing that distracted me was that Dr Super's turn went so quickly after mine that I sometimes thought my pieces had been misplaced. Did you consider adding a wait 1 second block before Dr.
Me likee. Real goood projects.
Bubble Attack Continued: I also think that there should be something to make the levels seem more different, i know there are more bubbles in each but maybe if they had a slight tint of a different colour each level it would look good or different backgrounds. I also love the way the start menu blends into the bricks of the wall when you start.
This gallery has been overrun by envirotech.
Bubble Attack: very fun game but as you said it is quite hard. Ive tried to think of simple ways of making it easier. Firstly when you pop a bubble the two new bubbles should then head upwards giving you more time, the bubbles could be slightly smaller so you have more room or you could make the spider slightly smaller so it can avoid the bubbles better. I love the animations such as the spinning inside the bubbles.
This is mletreat's critique of DrSuper's game Susa: You seem to have been really inspired by the history of the game. This project is very clear to understand and it is visually accurate. Even though I NEVER won, I enjoyed playing against Dr Super. The only thing that distracted me was that Dr Super's turn went so quickly after mine that I sometimes thought my pieces had been misplaced. Did you consider adding a wait 1 second block before Dr. Super makes his move?
I added a review for DrSuper's game...here: (link to project)">(link to project) bigB - Perhaps you could have everyone post links to their reviews on this page to help you keep track of who has reviewed which projects.
thanks for your critique. we have been trying to encourage the critiques to be made in the gallery so all members can easily see the other critiques.
(view all replies)I added my Bubble attack game in hopes of getting some construtive criticism. I have had a few people say it is too hard. Any ideas on how to make it easier without making it too easy for everyone else?
Block Slider: This is a remake of one of my games and i was hugely impressed by the improvements. It is remarkably quicker to calculate whether to erase a block and the use of buttons on screen works well too. I have yet to find a use of making the blocks jump over each other but it looks good and is very clever. The menu at the start (trademark of all Guardians Games) also makes it look better.
THank you. I added the jump feature because ther were times when i need a block on the opposite side from where it was. I actually use it at least once per level.
I added your Block Slider Game, Guardian.
Thank you bigB. I wasn't going to add it because it wasn't originally my project
(view all replies)Addd mme tto yoour llist.
Remember you have to comment on projects in the gallery. Look at some of the previous critiques and try something similar.
If people are no longer coming to the gallery, they will not see your request for critiques. Perhaps it's time to put a comment on the projects in here, and remind them their project is in a critique gallery. Also remind them what was expected of them when they joined. I tried to critique almost every project in here, but only bibG and Cyclone103 critiqued my project (very good info by the way guys; I made major changes based on your feedback).
I will try to do that. I am also contacting other experienced scratchers hoping to find a couple more people to join. Yet again thanks for your major contribution to this gallery.
(view all replies)It would be great to have more critiques. especially from different people. even if you dont want to write much you can write a sentence or two about a project. If anyone knows anybody on scratch who they think would be prepared to be an active member of this gallery please invite them.
It looks like the whole critique thing is not working so well. I checked out a few other critique galleries, and people love to put their projects in them to get views, but very few actually critique other projects.
(view all replies)The zoom on Guardian 3D is a very interesting feature. I personally like to zoom right out to see where the AI's are better. The ability to start where you died is great as the game was previously to hard for me.
Thanks for the feedback.
Is anyone still critiquing in this galery? If so, can you look at my latest changes in Guardian 3D? I added a new Zoom feature, and made it so you can retry the game from where you get killed instead of starting over. I just want to know what other scratchers think.
Can we have a challenge now? I'm getting bored
Try critiquing some of the projects in this gallery if you're bored.