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Challenge 2: Make a little town. Try having different places to go, and different stuff to do! You may also challenge other Scratchers to make a project if you wish
A small critique group for beginners looking to learn how to make awesome games and get some feedback! It's a response to A thread in the forums- http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=7317
Only add if you are one of the members!
Bluestribute
Adityasm9
Mletreat
Newareagle
Spidey2000
Soccerisawesome
JNJ
Deatheater
Bosox397
Jbro22
XDKFC
Isanemoney
Ndog
Rules: Give 1 compliment and 1 constructive feedback comment on each project (at least 1 per month)
No more than 3 projects at a time from each member
No mean language
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Stupid!!!
The super smash ninjas 2 is a stupid copy of my game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey Bluestribute- how are things going?
Everyone has forgotten about this… makes it easier to monitor :D
(view all replies)am i considered "new"?
What's going to happen to this since bluestribute is leaving?
hi anyone here bluestribute i no ur online
Nothing really I guess
I am. But you know this is now basically a regular gallery, right?
(view all replies)I'm adding my latest game, kick it out if it crowds up the place(tell me)
Go ahead. This place has kinda stopped, so it's just a regular gallery now I guess…
can i post on here?
It has kinda dimolished… I would suggest another critique group if you want your games to get noticed… I'm NOT saying no
may i join so i can finnally add my projects lol
Hmmmm… not yet. i'm still sorting people out because it's become to big. Once i sort them out, there will be 2, and depending where i put you, I decide (or the other group leader)
can I join
Sure. Ill branch off tomorrow to make 2,but i will need to sort peoplel
ONLY MEMBERS CAN ADD! OR THIS WILL BE CLOSED
(view all replies)I think some people that aren't members are starting to add again. Please don't close this though.
well also you can do SOME OF MY FREINDS or would that be a little hard to find them on the list
okiez >.<
well i'm sure that if they're your 'friend' they won't add if they're not a member :P i say if they add they get off your friends list
(view all replies)Challenge updated
I've already started on it.
This was on Mitchel Resnicks first presentation!
Hmm, should use my… Bomb Squad. It's glitchless and fun and complicated kinda
(view all replies)Oh, I saw that one than
(view all replies)They have videos of multiple presentations from him?
(view all replies)Woops :) I mean here at the gallery!
It's almost end of the month. Each person needs at least 1 Critique this month at the forums!
bluestribute i liked bomb squad because its a easy to understand game but you could add instruction to help ppl to understand how to play at the beginning
Wow. pretty good.
Nah. Usualy like 2 or 3 or 1 at a time
(view all replies)I check all my messages. And you know what happens when someone comments your galleries… you get a message…
(view all replies)Yeah, I probably could have. I guess I wasn't in that "phase" yet of adding how to play, though i think now I will start to
(view all replies)Example (and real): Casino Games: This was a fun game. I like the idea. I know each thing was hand drawn in scratch, so looks good for what you can do. But maybe make more prizes and ball animation for the roulette table, and maybe have the wheel actually slow down. Good game overall, definitely would say go play it
Thanks, glad you liked it :P
plez may i join i luv helping people make their projects better
(view all replies)can i join bluestribute plez
Yeah. Afer 1 more person were branching off into two, so yes!
(view all replies)Alright people. I wanna see how things are going. Re-read the notes --> and post at the project "I'm critiquing this" or something like that, and critique each project here, like at the challenge community, so I can see who isn't…
Why don't you make a critique group for scratcher's like you that are really good cause I'd say that we have a few in this one that could go into that one (not mentioning any names).
Anything you want
Challenge updated if you are "scratch blocked" as adriangl put it
(view all replies)I wad thinkign of dividing later after like 1 or 2 more people join
(view all replies)Hey - how does everyone feel the critiques are going? I haven't posted a project, as I am not seeking critique, but would like to give others critique and participate in that way.
Good idea! I'll add it once MY computer is back up and running.
Good, but I don't feel enough "critiquing" is happening. I respond on the projects, but should they critique here? And later this will split in two from the amount of participants
(view all replies)what about me?
If you need ideas, I havea new challenge
Later I will. I'm on a laptop
Yeah, sure, once it gets big enough it wil split in wo galleries
(view all replies)(link to project)">(link to project) this is my fishing game!
awww... i has a fishing game, but it say i can't add it! well look at it anyway! wait i'll make a link!
Bluestribute, don't respond to this. Makign as logn of a post as I want! Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis is a VErY long word
Okay
Ok I added a little Fishing game.
Cool. I think I will make one now.
AWSOME IT"S FEATURED!
5 members turned to 7 ?!@?!@?!@?!@?!@
Hey, if you wanna try challenge 2, I updated it.
I know it's wierd.
me join?
Challenge has been updated, though I expect if you do it for it to include a bowling alley and darts and driving and flying and… :D
me join yes
(view all replies)(link to forums)">(link to forum) The link to more groups !
Hey, featured gallery. Very cool.
Should help everything (critique group wise). think I'll attempt my challenge tomorrow if I get bored, maybe change it up
can I join :)
New challenge :P
(view all replies)Not a beginner, but sure
(view all replies)HEY BLUSTRUBUTE, Can i join this gallery critique groop? i would love to and thx for comenting on my forum!
If you wanna try soemthing new, look at the new callenge
Sure. You can go ahead and join
Can someone make a soccer game sort of like foosball where you click on a side of the handle to make it spin, and you play against a computer? it would be extremely difficult not only making the physics but making the computer.
Hey! Sounds like fun! And I'll add something to the notes. I'll give it a try
(view all replies)Can I join?
Yes you may
I can't do the challenge right now because I'm not on MY computer. I'll do it later though.
That's O.K. whenever you can. I'm doing it right now. Continuing from my friends house
I'M IN!
That's great! You can add up to 3 projects at 1 time to get feedback on. And you might wanna try the challenge too
Hmm, still can't reply? Well, I wil cut and paste! Hmm, that migh tbe good for the next challenge (I got one. Now to put it in the notes. But I like t
Also, I came across this link in the forums (http://nebomusic.net/scratch.html). These projects would be great for beginners. I'm going to use them as a template for describing challenges to my group.
First challenge- try making a simple art program. Try including color changes and pen size (if you can). Remember, this is the beginners Critique group, so just do the best you can!