'I understand.' he bowed his head. 'Looking down on his kin, he mewed. 'It is time for us to leave. Fare well, my sweet children. We will watch over you in the stars.' Flamepelt herded his mate up into the sky where thy joined Starclan, and would stay there for ever.
'Starclan prophisised it! I'm sorry! But you trusted me! And like I said before, trust me! Our kin will survive! I managed to weasle out of dieing for good because I weanted to be with you, and die with you!' he mewed. THere was hurt in his eyes.
''no!'' she cried, racing away, in a desperate attemp to get to her kin. ''you said to let go! but it killed me!'' she said, a flash of angrer racing through her.
The Soul-eater let out a loud screech, then died in the fire. THe fire ceased, then the ghost of Flamepelt padded over to Feathertail. 'Feathertail, you are chosen from Starclan to take care of my kin. You will also mentor Dovepaw.' he then floated over to Lepeoredstar. 'Starclan has chosen you to take over training with Flamepaw. Hawkfrost died a while ago, and I took his place to finish training with Flamepaw. He then looked down on his kin. 'Your mother and I are very proud. We promis to look over you in Starclan.'
'I know! Just trust me!' Flamepelt mewed. He then jumped back down to earth. He raced ahead of Soul-eater. Cats were asembled in the setting sun. 'I am the ghost of Flamepelt!' he mewed. 'I don't belive it!' mewed one of the cats. Just then, the Soul-eaterwas going to enter the camp. At that moment, Flamepelt burst into flames, and formed a protecting wall of fire around the camp.
Flamepelt was doing all that he could to fight the Soul-Eater off, but then he remembered what he was told in Starclan. He suddenly understood. 'Don't fight it!' he yowled. With a slash of pain, the Soul-Eater said to them. 'I FORGOT TO MENTION, I CAN STAY IN THE BODYS I EAT FOR AS LONG AS I WANT!'
'BE QUITE, FOOLS! I AM THE SOUL-EATER!' and with that, the terrifying Soul-Eater jumped inside Hawkfrost(flamepelt) and turtleflow, planning to eat their souls and kill them from the inside.
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THAT STORY WAS AWESOME!!!
wow........i iz lookn @ ure galleryz & i noticed this 1......didnt we become good friendz through thiz?
^_^ remember this, wolf? it's how we became bestest friends! ^_^
yeah. we did. didn't we. taht's great!
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THE END!!!!!
turtleflow smiled, and raced him to the stars.
'I understand.' he bowed his head. 'Looking down on his kin, he mewed. 'It is time for us to leave. Fare well, my sweet children. We will watch over you in the stars.' Flamepelt herded his mate up into the sky where thy joined Starclan, and would stay there for ever.
''i'm sorry flamepelt...'' she said, licking her best friend and mate.
'Starclan prophisised it! I'm sorry! But you trusted me! And like I said before, trust me! Our kin will survive! I managed to weasle out of dieing for good because I weanted to be with you, and die with you!' he mewed. THere was hurt in his eyes.
iz tinks that iz 'the end'
''no!'' she cried, racing away, in a desperate attemp to get to her kin. ''you said to let go! but it killed me!'' she said, a flash of angrer racing through her.
(ok)
(late comment) 'I know, Turtleflow. But we have died. I know it's hard to tell you this, but its time.'
(i'm in warriors of the forest, k)
''flamepelt.....'' she said, ''what am i to do! i don't want to be gone!'' she said.
With a lovingly lick to each of his kin, Flamepelt and Turtleflow jumped back in the sky
''flamepelt! i want to go back to them!'' cried turtleflow, tears dripping from her worried eyes.
The Soul-eater let out a loud screech, then died in the fire. THe fire ceased, then the ghost of Flamepelt padded over to Feathertail. 'Feathertail, you are chosen from Starclan to take care of my kin. You will also mentor Dovepaw.' he then floated over to Lepeoredstar. 'Starclan has chosen you to take over training with Flamepaw. Hawkfrost died a while ago, and I took his place to finish training with Flamepaw. He then looked down on his kin. 'Your mother and I are very proud. We promis to look over you in Starclan.'
''flamepelt!'' cried turtleflow. ''i know!'' she turned into a huge turtle, and bit the soul-eater.
'I know! Just trust me!' Flamepelt mewed. He then jumped back down to earth. He raced ahead of Soul-eater. Cats were asembled in the setting sun. 'I am the ghost of Flamepelt!' he mewed. 'I don't belive it!' mewed one of the cats. Just then, the Soul-eaterwas going to enter the camp. At that moment, Flamepelt burst into flames, and formed a protecting wall of fire around the camp.
the sad warrior looked up at her love. ''but........what about my kits.....sure thier apprentices, but.....''
'It's ok, Turtleflow. Trust me!' Flamepelt/ Hawkfrost mewed
''w-we're dead.......'' turtleflow cried, struggling to get back to camp.
THe Soul-Eater yowled in triumph as the two cats joined Starclan. Then, it jumped out of the cat bodys and went to feed on Riverclan.
''o-ok...'' turtleflow said, as she stopped fighting the soul eater.
Flamepelt was doing all that he could to fight the Soul-Eater off, but then he remembered what he was told in Starclan. He suddenly understood. 'Don't fight it!' he yowled. With a slash of pain, the Soul-Eater said to them. 'I FORGOT TO MENTION, I CAN STAY IN THE BODYS I EAT FOR AS LONG AS I WANT!'
''n-no!'' turtleflow squirmed.
'BE QUITE, FOOLS! I AM THE SOUL-EATER!' and with that, the terrifying Soul-Eater jumped inside Hawkfrost(flamepelt) and turtleflow, planning to eat their souls and kill them from the inside.
''you're not getting us that easily!''
THe beast turned and threw Turtleflow next to Flamepelt. It snarled in laughter, eyeing it's feast.
''flamepelt!'' turt leflow snarled, and ran at the beast, clawwing it's pelt.
Flamepelt jumped on the creature. It trew him aside with one masive paw.
Flamepelt turned on the creature, snarling and spitting.
turtleflow jumped out of the way just in time.
i found you!
hi
(nope, i'm in foxes! lol!)
(u here?)
"Turtleflow, watch out!" Flamepelt mewed as a creature crashed though the trees. From what Flamepelt saw, it was half cat, half dog!
*next night* Flamepelt and Turtleflow were out with evning patrol. Flamepelt smelt something, something bad.
(i would delet that, sparks)