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- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
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Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
This collab is to animate a scratch show about a pack of wolves living in the forest, under constant threat from a group of cybernetic(?) wolves, the Cybreon.
Not sure how I can make that sentence better.
More of the plot is revealed as the animation progresses, until the story reaches a conclusion that will shake everyone to their bones.
Story so far:
Not sure how I can make that sentence better.
Application Form:
Position:
Example(s) of your work: (if possible)
How active will you be?:
More of the plot is revealed as the animation progresses, until the story reaches a conclusion that will shake everyone to their bones.
Factions:
The cybernetic wolves that threaten to wipe out the Pack. Their pelts (same colours as the Pack) have cybernetic enhancements attached.
Alpha:
Second in Command:
Other characters:
The pack of wolves that we follow. Their pelts are not grey, like a normal wolf's.
Alpha:
Name: Sharpclaw
Gender: Male
Personality: Selfless, would never put himself before the pack.
Colouration: Gingery-brown, with black marks.
Second in Command:
Other characters:
Jobs:
Storyline Writer(write storyline!): chocolatepenguin, lundfamily3
Character Drawer(Draw characters!): lundfamily3
Animator:(Animate it!): lundfamily3
Drawer:(Draw non-character stuff!): lundfamily3
Tasks:
Everyone: Get more members!
Everyone: Find voice actors!
Character Drawers: Draw characters!
Storyline Writers: Storyline ideas!
Voices:Character form:
Sharpclaw: chocolatepenguin
[b]Faction:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Colouration:[/b]
Sharpclaw stands near the edge of a cliff, staring into the forest where a young elk has vanished. His ears prick up. He yells, “Cybreon!” and darts off to the right (seen from forest, which ends about 5 metres from cliff) and an unspecified Cybreon member jumps out. It begins chasing Sharpclaw, who skids to a halt behind a fallen tree trunk. He jumps on, and races across it. The Cybreon follows. He jumps off at the other end, with a tense pack behind him. Three wolves (Sharpclaw, second in command and a warrior) stand at the base of the trunk. The Cybreon breaks off the attack.
Resources:
Wolf outline:
It is adapted from a wolf picture on Wikipedia.
Q&A:
What genre is the storyline?
Every genre! I'm not sure which the main one is, but many side ones will be created!
Does the pack work like a normal pack of wolves?
No. If you read the finale bit then you see the line “Sharpclaw's wolf wife”. Considering that:
- The Pack lives in a small space
many pairings exist in the Pack.
- You normally only have one wife
Last edited by chocolatepenguin (July 10, 2013 16:27:58)
- popopobob
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
So it will be like an anime?
- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
So it will be like an anime?Kind of- see Elemental Clans, it's basically an animation.
- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Howl!
(Our bump!)
(Our bump!)
Last edited by chocolatepenguin (July 9, 2013 06:29:18)
- lundfamily3
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Wile its obvusly ok take inspiration from something, its not good to just keep taking ideas from something. Dont use EC as an example, actually explain it. Also, its kinda of rude to literally copy and paste from someones topic -.-'
Also, you may want to explain your idea. Whats the plot? Is this a realsitic, fantasy, sci-fi? Adventure, horror, rmoance? Who are the characters?
Anyway, I might be interested in this once it has more details. I love wolves
Also, you may want to explain your idea. Whats the plot? Is this a realsitic, fantasy, sci-fi? Adventure, horror, rmoance? Who are the characters?
Anyway, I might be interested in this once it has more details. I love wolves

- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Wile its obvusly ok take inspiration from something, its not good to just keep taking ideas from something. Dont use EC as an example, actually explain it. Also, its kinda of rude to literally copy and paste from someones topic -.-'Thank you for that. Sorry for that copying.
Also, you may want to explain your idea. Whats the plot? Is this a realsitic, fantasy, sci-fi? Adventure, horror, rmoance? Who are the characters?
Anyway, I might be interested in this once it has more details. I love wolves
- lundfamily3
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Position: Everything.
Example(s) of your work: My five most recent projects should sum it up. I'm posting part 1 of anmiatioon soon, too. ^^
How active will you be?: Depends on you. If the collabs active I am, if its not… I have no muse to save it. D:
There ya go ^^
Example(s) of your work: My five most recent projects should sum it up. I'm posting part 1 of anmiatioon soon, too. ^^
How active will you be?: Depends on you. If the collabs active I am, if its not… I have no muse to save it. D:
There ya go ^^
- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Position: Everything.Accepted!
Example(s) of your work: My five most recent projects should sum it up. I'm posting part 1 of anmiatioon soon, too. ^^
How active will you be?: Depends on you. If the collabs active I am, if its not… I have no muse to save it. D:
There ya go ^^
THE FOLLOWING THING IS TRANSPARENT AS IT IS ONLY INTENDED FOR MEMBERS OF THIS COLLABORATION. IT CONTAINS INFO ABOUT THE FINALE. HIGHLIGHT IT TO READ IT. FEEL FREE TO TALK ABOUT IT, BUT ANY PLOT POINTS MUST BE TRANSPARENT. YOU CAN DO TRANSPARENCY WITH:
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The detonation of an experimental pulse weapon in the forest hit a small (10 or so) group of wolves (part of The Pack) and they were knocked out, the impact somehow hitting their genes, which resulted in their young being extremely weak. Soon after the explosion, a group of nanobots came out of the wreckage of the weapon, and find the wolves. They create the cybernetic enhancements, and about 1000 of them stay attached to each wolf in the event of critical damage. A few days after the incident, the Cybreon wolves go back to the camp, but the others chase them off, leading the Cybreon leader to create a bitter hatred of The Pack. The beta then says that he's learnt to master them, and fires a massive ball of energy from his mouth, nearly hitting Sharpclaw. The encounter ends.
At the animation finale, Cybreon invade the camp, and the Cybreon alpha realises that Sharpclaw honestly didn't know that the Cybreon were Pack members. As the beta prepares to fire on Sharpclaw, the alpha runs into the beta as Sharpclaw's wolf wife (is that the way to say it?) runs into Sharpclaw, and the energy ball explodes, vaporising the alpha and beta. The remaining Cybreon are accepted into the Pack.
If anyone is wondering why Cybreon cubs are born with cybernetic enhancements the nanobots create them as the injured genes made the cubs weak.
Last edited by chocolatepenguin (July 9, 2013 19:00:07)
- lundfamily3
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Awesome! 

- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Awesome!Thanks! Can you work on drawing Sharpclaw? He should have a ginger pelt (like Firestar/heart/paw) with a black Z-shaped stripe on each side?
We also need ideas for cubs and a better title.
- lundfamily3
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Technically speaking, cubs are called “pups” as wolves are canines. The cub came from the fact they are wild animals, like a bear. ^^ Names for baby wolves I have collected in five minutes x3:
Pup (English)
Whelp (english) (fun fact: You know how cats have “kitting”? Wolves have “whelping”)
Koinu/子犬 (Japanese word for puppy)
Ōkami/オオカミ (Japanese word for wolf)
Also, before we start character looks, are the none cybernetic wolves realistic or can they be, say, neon colored? And with cybernetic wolves, how far can the machinery go? Is some fur metal? Can whole limbs be replaced? Eyes? How strong is the metal?
Another thing, if a cybernetic wolf has babies and they can cybernetic, the whole litter would be cybernetic. And, technically, the mother could become cybernetic through pregnancy. (i would explain why, but I dont think it owould be appriopiate for scratch nescarilly)
We need to lay down rules for the world. ^^'
- Blazingwave
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Position: Everything.Accepted!
Example(s) of your work: My five most recent projects should sum it up. I'm posting part 1 of anmiatioon soon, too. ^^
How active will you be?: Depends on you. If the collabs active I am, if its not… I have no muse to save it. D:
There ya go ^^
THE FOLLOWING THING IS TRANSPARENT AS IT IS ONLY INTENDED FOR MEMBERS OF THIS COLLABORATION. IT CONTAINS INFO ABOUT THE FINALE. HIGHLIGHT IT TO READ IT. FEEL FREE TO TALK ABOUT IT, BUT ANY PLOT POINTS MUST BE TRANSPARENT. YOU CAN DO TRANSPARENCY WITH:The origin of the Cybreon is revealed late on in the series, when the Cybreon alpha (and beta (second in command)) corner Sharpclaw in a clearing.[color=transparent][/color]
The detonation of an experimental pulse weapon in the forest hit a small (10 or so) group of wolves (part of The Pack) and they were knocked out, the impact somehow hitting their genes, which resulted in their young being extremely weak. Soon after the explosion, a group of nanobots came out of the wreckage of the weapon, and find the wolves. They create the cybernetic enhancements, and about 1000 of them stay attached to each wolf in the event of critical damage. A few days after the incident, the Cybreon wolves go back to the camp, but the others chase them off, leading the Cybreon leader to create a bitter hatred of The Pack. The beta then says that he's learnt to master them, and fires a massive ball of energy from his mouth, nearly hitting Sharpclaw. The encounter ends.
At the animation finale, Cybreon invade the camp, and the Cybreon alpha realises that Sharpclaw honestly didn't know that the Cybreon were Pack members. As the beta prepares to fire on Sharpclaw, the alpha runs into the beta as Sharpclaw's wolf wife (is that the way to say it?) runs into Sharpclaw, and the energy ball explodes, vaporising the alpha and beta. The remaining Cybreon are accepted into the Pack.
If anyone is wondering why Cybreon cubs are born with cybernetic enhancements the nanobots create them as the injured genes made the cubs weak.
Just to tell you, transparent turns up black on some browsers.
Also the only thing annoying is how you used the exact layout of the Elemental Clans main post.
It took me two hours to finish that layout.
Last edited by Blazingwave (July 10, 2013 01:52:41)
- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Just to tell you, transparent turns up black on some browsers.What browser are you using?
Also the only thing annoying is how you used the exact layout of the Elemental Clans main post.
It took me two hours to finish that layout.
Also, I never noticed that the layout was the same. I've taken steps to prevent the similarities continuing.
- gwasson
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Scratcher
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Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Postion:Alpha!
How active:every day for an hour
How active:every day for an hour
- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Postion:Alpha!Alpha is not a position.
How active:every day for an hour
- lundfamily3
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Technically speaking, cubs are called “pups” as wolves are canines. The cub came from the fact they are wild animals, like a bear. ^^ Names for baby wolves I have collected in five minutes x3:
Pup (English)
Whelp (english) (fun fact: You know how cats have “kitting”? Wolves have “whelping”)
Koinu/子犬 (Japanese word for puppy)
Ōkami/オオカミ (Japanese word for wolf)
Also, before we start character looks, are the none cybernetic wolves realistic or can they be, say, neon colored? And with cybernetic wolves, how far can the machinery go? Is some fur metal? Can whole limbs be replaced? Eyes? How strong is the metal?
Another thing, if a cybernetic wolf has babies and they can cybernetic, the whole litter would be cybernetic. And, technically, the mother could become cybernetic through pregnancy. (i would explain why, but I dont think it owould be appriopiate for scratch nescarilly)
We need to lay down rules for the world. ^^'
- chocolatepenguin
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
^^^^^
Can you explain “rules for the world”?
Also, the ideas I had for the cybernetics was it covering a couple of paws, a bit of the body and (maybe) half the head.
Can you explain “rules for the world”?
Also, the ideas I had for the cybernetics was it covering a couple of paws, a bit of the body and (maybe) half the head.
- Blazingwave
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
Its fine for meJust to tell you, transparent turns up black on some browsers.What browser are you using?
Also the only thing annoying is how you used the exact layout of the Elemental Clans main post.
It took me two hours to finish that layout.
Also, I never noticed that the layout was the same. I've taken steps to prevent the similarities continuing.
Its just common knowledge that transparent shows up black on some browsers including internet explorer I think.
- lundfamily3
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Scratcher
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Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
.-. Bump
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Scratcher
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Wolf animation collab-Not sure how I can make that title better!
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